arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

u've said it so beautifully Didi... "you don't love someone because they are right or wrong, you just love them"... and no matter what, a child can never hate his/her parents completely... no matter how hard one tries... Arnav Singh Raizada is no difference... and that realization made him this afraid... his darr leads him to do things he shouldn't... lekin hum samajhte hain... aur kar bhi kya sakte thay bechare... poor boy... i really feel for this man didi... kitni ajeeb hain naa dekho, kaise hum usska saare khushiya, dard, everything mehsoos karlete hain, as if we walked in his shoes... this is the magic of this man... and Khushi... m in love with him even more... she is the perfect companion for this complicated man (yes, i called him complicated, bcz he is)... she havent asked a question... she doesnt need any explanation... because woh samajhte hain... her one 'it's over' made all the differences... and how amazingly she made him see senses, made him understand... PERFECT... and BEAUTIFUL... loved it to core Diii...

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#432

Res.

Edited.

A very intense update. Khushi was so much in pain with her Arnavji's behavior that she could not even make jalebis right. She was hurt with the loom his eyes held for her when he looked at her before leaving the house.

At the other end ASR is still fight the demons of his past. Which has still not left him completely after knowing the truth from his uncle rather that truth is now able to connect the dots of why he never felt good in that mahal, what was all those murmurs he heard and that brings back only pain, hurt and betrayal.

And yet he is still not bake to hate his father. He was fighting this feeling and when he finally accepted it, he wanted to know how could he still love his father after what all he did. And the only person who always have answer to his problems and pain is his Khushi.

And this statement below, just proved why Khushi even getting hurt by Arnavji still loves him, why Arnav keep hurting her and yet apologize knowing he can't live without his Khushi and why he still loves his father.

you don't love someone because they are right or wrong, you just love them... sometimes so much, it hurts and still you can't help but keep on loving.

Beautiful update, make me say that loves does come in once life with expiry date or set of instructions, it just comes...

Edited by rk2127 - 10 years ago

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#433

fantastic update

i love these lines

you don't love someone because they are right or wrong, you just love them... sometimes so much, it hurts and still you can't help but keep on loving.

That is so true for arnav and khushi. Its a beautiful sum up of their unique love.

I feel a little sad for arnav and khushi. Both been to hell. both can't bear loosing each other. Khushi wants arnav to breath, she is stll not over from the trauma she went through when Arnav was comatose. That period was khushi's distressful moments on cliff, the pain and agony arnav went through when khushi refuse to respond to his love and his touch.

this was another beautiful update 👏

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#434

Again an awesome chapter.
finally we know the reason behind arnav's anger/uncalled behaviour. He still loves his father inspite of his father's faults and grave wrong actions. He is angry on himself for still loving his father and takes it out on khushi. He talked abt it khushi coz he doesn't want to hurt her again. He wants her happiness & his own anger destroyed it already so many times. He is angry on himself for hurting her again & again inturn hurting himself more.
His past and his burried emotions doesn't let him happy in his present. But he is ASR coz of his past.
His talking abt his burried emotions wid khushi helped him to gain a new perspective. Khushi helped him to understand his feelings for his father is genuine which can't be altered at one's whims.
Loved how arnav seeked khushi to talk abt his feelings & fears just like a child seeks his mother to soothe him, console him.
hope arnav will not hurt again khushi in future.

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Raji Senthilkumar

@RajiSobtian

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Loved the upadate
Superb...very well written

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#436

Khushi- she is an enigma. Isn't she? I love her pure heart & forgiving nature but sometimes don't like the same. But that makes her khushi coz i feel she forgives easily to make others happy and masks & buries her pain in deepest corner of her heart.
Yet she doesn't forgave arnav in night itself which shows she is a human too & sometimes can be emotionally tired/exhausted. She is still in pain & fear of almost losing arnav once that's why she forgives him immediately after waking up yet again masking her hurt of yesterday.
loved how she simply explained to arnav the reason behind him still loving his father. The same reason why she forgives him every time after hurting her. Usne kuch soch-samajhkar ya nafa-nuskaan dekh kar thodi arnav se pyaar kiya, use to bas pyaar ho gya wo bhi na chahte hue. Aur chahkar ki wo usse nafrat nhi kr sakti.
Kash hum aapse nafrat kar pate.
Mohabbat door jane na de.

Edited by arhi_crazy - 10 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#437

it seem that khushi is the sun ...and arnav revolve around her without her he is nothing and i am happy that he realised that sooner then later..awesome story

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: Archu61
She truly is his muse how wise she is there is no right or wrong when you love someone as love is unconditional ,I hope he realise show lucky he is ,to have her in his life ,

hi archu,

thanks for reading. these two are really very essential in each other's life... she is, with all her sanka and stuff, instinctively wise... that thinking from the heart thing. he i think knows how precious she is. and she in turn knows he is everything to her too... he takes her to her inner self, helps her reach out and fly. i love the sort of love they have... maybe idealistic, but i think it has a real basis too.

glad you enjoyed.

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: shiv456
brilliant update

thank you so much, shiv. happy you liked the chapter.

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
u've said it so beautifully Didi... "you don't love someone because they are right or wrong, you just love them"... and no matter what, a child can never hate his/her parents completely... no matter how hard one tries... Arnav Singh Raizada is no difference... and that realization made him this afraid... his darr leads him to do things he shouldn't... lekin hum samajhte hain... aur kar bhi kya sakte thay bechare... poor boy... i really feel for this man didi... kitni ajeeb hain naa dekho, kaise hum usska saare khushiya, dard, everything mehsoos karlete hain, as if we walked in his shoes... this is the magic of this man... and Khushi... m in love with him even more... she is the perfect companion for this complicated man (yes, i called him complicated, bcz he is)... she havent asked a question... she doesnt need any explanation... because woh samajhte hain... her one 'it's over' made all the differences... and how amazingly she made him see senses, made him understand... PERFECT... and BEAUTIFUL... loved it to core Diii...

uff, lovely heartfelt comment.

yes, nishat, he is complicated... that makes him him.

and she is fey and wise, makes her her i guess.

that total complete be part of me love has me in a tizzy... trying to find ways to write about it without becoming too sugary or too right... so so happy you had a good time.

my matha happily swelling at all the upper cased words. aww, you are too sweet to the writer. did you know she is a little in love with the complicated man though she does not samajhtein hain and wants to scream at him once in a way. he he.