ArHi OS : Change Of Heart - Page 2

Un-resed my comment on Pg-1.

superb OS !!! loved it.. 😃

awesome os

Awe... Dee... It's B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L... just wow... Loved it...

woww this was superb😊

wow totally fabulous...

and yu ask me to write one short for yu ? 😲

yu write so good DJ !👏 .. write one OS from me, for yu please 😳


i liked it ! i really did ⭐️ .. ❤️

i was nt expecting arnav to be a spy ..

the part where it was mentioned k he had come to khushi to make video n all .. i was like 😲💔 .. yu wrote the part so good !👏 and i also liked that yu dnt beat around bush .. mean k tu seedha seedha likhti hai .. jaldi sy asani sy parha jaata hai 😆 ( nai smjh aya ? ..lol.. dnt bother ) 😳

i liked the flashback part where she was praising him and the whole of the flashback was awesome 👍🏼👏


and i was so lost in reading that part did nt want it to end . 😊

and then the last part where khushi forgave him n all . i felt that yu ended it in haste ..

ermm yu kno wt i mean 😳 .. ending could hv been better ..


yu write awesome 👍🏼

Beautiful Written 👏👏