arshi ff- truth rewrote chapter 20 updated 06/02/17

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chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Damn mu by her

But he gotta find her now

Who finds her first

Arnav or someone else

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Beautiful, the first page speaks for itself.You are doing this with your studies.I hope you are not wasting time But this is awesome.Take care.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Beautiful, the first page speaks for itself.You are doing this with your studies.I hope you are not wasting time But this is awesome.Take care.

studies getting difficult di

do to divert my mind

i wish it get all easy soon

thanks a lot di for taking out time for me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: chavvi16
Damn mu by her
But he gotta find her now
Who finds her first
Arnav or someone else

let see

waise arnav i think 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
Soni wow. wow. that first page it must have taken you forever to do. Thanks for sharing love it

thanks di

glad you liked it 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr
hey thanks for the pm,
loved d update.
beautifully written and well executed.
thanks ya i wrote it thrice and then manage this 40 % next time will try to do more better 😳

anjali was very sensible

i am glad that you all accepted it as it is a hint of future that i always try to give
which is hidden in sensibility of anjali way today 😉
i hope you will like that too

ansh sensed d danger for khushi.
that was i nervous about that whether you will like or not as half of them here want all time arshi and arnav saving her and all but i thought to show ansh and pari bounding as till now we have seen only pari and chahat love sohappy you are liking it
it will more interesting in future update
i am sure you will love to read it

The flashback convo was good.
i wrote there phone convo here instead of flashback and telepathy, but then going in arshi way kept di, guess my decision was right 😃

I just hav one issue if u cud avoid using flurocent green for font as it becomes difficult to read. Sorry if I hurt u.
oh common why sorry it is just you are saying me your ease to read out and i am happy rather to know it about i will keep it as a point and any probe in update too or any scene i right
you are free to share

Wonderful.

thanks again for your time