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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

It's 8:05 am and I am still combing my hair, got to to start for college :p
isiliye I'll read this when I come back home..!
Even though I am not reading it now, I can just feel it...that this OS is going to be superb.. Somehow I know..!
Bas..!
Abhi this is a res..! :)

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Such a lovely OS! And its genre was different too.

ASR as the CM was so desirable and Khushi as a strong, independant woman was equally stunning. The younger versions of these two were adorable. The tragedy which hit them during their college days saw them getting married. The second tragedy that hit them, though much more painful and heart wrenching, saw them building their lost companionship again. So with time, their relationship emerged to be stronger than before and now they have Swaraj to help them lead their life happily just as they deserve.

Waiting to read many more. 😊

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Thanks pooh ! Bookmarking !

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anu

@anu17

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

ohhh My God this is just awesome os

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piggie

@piggie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

dat was sooo good... emotional n den hilarious not to miss the college romance aswell.. perfect.

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Thanks for the PM. Loved the OS. Truly awesome.

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fanipkknd0

@fanipkknd0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

you are writer👍🏼 sad to read Agastya died but at least happy ending.

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846182

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Awesome OS!

Loved the emotional touch of it!!

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Shraya Biswas

@ShrayaBiswas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

I tried to comment two days ago but couldn't due to network problem. So I'm back here, again, to tell you about what I felt after reading this. :)
Firstly, for some strange reason I called up my father (who is out of station) and talked to him after reading this OS.
You wrote this story so beautifully, I'm speechless!
Right from the start, when Arnav found out about their son being in an accident, through the cute, sweet flashbacks with an understanding Arnav (an ideal partner), to the heartwrenching moments after their son's demise. It was all too good. Tragic, yes, but beautiful! :)
Your story literally brought tears in my eyes! :)
Thank you so much for writing this! :)
I wish I could write like you... :)

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Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

WOW!!!!

This is amazing...truly loved it to the core. The way you fitted the whole Arshi life in an OS is really stand ovation deserving. How can you do that? I really loved it.❤️

First when I heard his dismay at the name of Bhabhi-ji, I really thought that maybe they had some problems but never thought she would be his ex-wife. I was totally shocked. And the news that he saw in T.V. left me in curious. I was totally sticked to my system's screen to complete it with my hungry stomach grumbling for food. I cared less while reading your this work.

And then their past moments. Those were beautifully written. His lines simple yet very meaningful, the past so nice, so lovely and very pleasant. Their marriage, though, was on saving Khushi from humiliation, made me sad a bit. If it was the importance that they would have known of each other then maybe this all shouldn't have happened. But, yes, if that was there then the fact is true that your OS would also have not be there.😉

Then Agastya's death, it really brought tears in my eyes. I really didn't expect the twist, of this kind. THEN THEN THEN there comes the next part of the story. After 10 months, the way you showed the guilt of Arnav was very well written. And after 4 years, I was grinning seeing the happy family at last and their satisfaction.

You're truly an awesome writer. Loved each and every line of this OS. Will try to read your other works too when I'm free. Thanks for giving us such an amazing OS to read. 👏

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