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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Superb OS... there was emotions, romance and best of all... Arnav as CM... wow 😃

It was so sad they lost their son... ends well...

loved it

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Neetz11690

@Neetz11690

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

lovely n emotional story

nice concept arnav politician n CM

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Komal ... as much as u love cheese ... I love this OS !! 😉

that was painful ... the separation .. the loss of Agastya and all the unwittingly committed errors in their marriage !!

beautifully penned down !! 👏

keep sending me more of ur OSes and also do PM me ur Index link ... will chk it out !! 😳

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

That was an Emotional one...:'(
Beautifully writtn..
Lovd it..<3

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

This was a emotional OS Cheeni..

I firstly thought may be Arnav and Khushi have a strained relationship and that's why he didn't take her call but it was completely different. Thanks for the different take. Sometimes even people who are very much in love can separate because of lack of communication and less quality time with each other. This is what happened with them too.

The flashback was kinda cute with Khushi not knowing anything about the famous Arnav Singh Raizada😆 Shyam always remains a jerk but his stupid acts make our hero marry the heroine. So I don't hate him.😉

Aww... I feel bad for Agastya. Poor kid!! He was so young. It's sad to think about him.

The scenes you used from the show and the dialogues were obviously good and reminded me of the show.

Finally they got together and re-created their small world. Swaraj is so innocent and at the same time so naughty. I loved him.

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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

My comment here

P.S. sorry for the delay

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

I'm just speechless...

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

How do you written funny ...romantic and intense at a same time... I have thought this amply of time...but end up straching my head 😆

Loved it ...😳

This was altogether a different story ...

Thanks for pm...

Do come back . .again with some unexpected stories😆😳

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

ur stories hav always been so awesome... and this one again too..

u r superb dear...grea Os...

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Omggg cheese..emotional kar dia yaarr..it is ur best os till date..
Ot was a mixture of love..hatred..ftey love..intense..funny..cute..adorable moments ka..
I jus loved asr as a fsther so much..he is a very gud father..
Der wer so many emotionL n cute moments i was jus awwwed readin it..
Arnav as CM a hot one..it was mindblowing..
U jus took r breathe away yaarr wid dis os..it was beautifull..dat moment wen agaystya ne bola..with pride..
Arnav singh raizada mere dad hai..i was actially in tears..d emotion.it cant b express yaarr..so many moments in which i jus loved arnav so much..jab arnav ne khushi ko depression se bahar nikala..
N u jus used one of my fav scenes of ipk..d tare
convo..tereharr os mein muje mere ipk ki bhott yaad aati
hai..i jus cnt li
leave widout my ipk!!
😭 😊

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Amna

@-Cutyee

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Unresed at Page 1 😛

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