ArHi OS: You Are The All I Have|| TY Note, page 19

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Wow! Wonderful OS!

I really liked how you showed Arnav and Khushi's relationship over so many different time frames!

Their love was expressed so nicely!

Great job and thank you for the pm!

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Wow What an awesome emotional os

Great work

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

It was really beautiful...

Very differnt

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Cheeni,

What a beautiful story, all the emotions present in it so beautifully and seamlessly ...the starting made me visualise a suave and serious ASR and when he refused to answer the phone I sensed trouble...and then to find out about his marriage,the flashback to college days and how their story started and the way your came back to the present and continued that incomplete story.

The sadness and trauma of losing a child, you made me too emotional, ( I normally never read anything or see anything where a child dies and I probably would not have read this if I had known, but it would have been my loss, as it was beautifully written) and feeling a strange sense of solace and comfort with each other even after the circumstance that separated them as a couple and family.

The guilt and the regret beautifully and sensitively portrayed. The immaturity to handle a relationship as parents at such a young age to the realisation of their feelings. Admitting that ego and pride, along with hurt and anger were responsible...if not in Agasthya 's lifetime, his death brought them back together with each other where they belonged.

The way they breakdown admitting their love and their fears and insecurities was superb...

And I am sure he is smiling and shining brightly and looking down at them and their new family and togetherness...

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SHREYA

@riyasenak

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

👏words are not enough to describe this wonderful piece of writing👏

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

I really liked this story.

This was emotional, funny, passionate.

Very good story.

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Just went through this OS.It was emotional one.
Arnav being the CM of the country, had many responsibilites on his shoulders and many things to look after.But he was so busy to even receive a call and the way his temper rised up hearing his wife's name, I didn't like that a bit..The news of his son's accident made Arnav rush to the hospital and Khushi was crying bitterly for the same.
Their first meeting and introduction was so sweet:) Arnav had fallen for her and Khushi too had started liking him.
That way of proposal and acceptance was so cute:)
It would have been great if Arnav had asked to marry her out of love, not due to the reasons that Shyam had created.
Khushi, she wanted time and love from Arnav and he wanted her support.But, the busy schedule and work pressure of Arnav and insecurities of Khushi made their life upside down.
Their conversation after their son's death was so emotional.
The way they supported eachother and were their for eachother was the best part.
They again found Agasthya in the form of Swaraj..the complain of that little kid was so cute:)
That was such a beautiful OS.
Loved it..<3