OS : All Good Things For Those Who Wait! *Reposted* NOTE PG25

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anjs

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Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

lovely story but incomplete...where is the other part

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chemistry101

@chemistry101

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Amazing start... Please continue soon :) pls PM

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sushna

@sushna

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Nice one...update soon...
Thankx for pm...

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Reena

@kav_50

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

it is incomplete.but few are commenting abiut the full story.Why everyone cant read full.Please post full story

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pran28671

@pran28671

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Awesome Os but incomplete where is the remaining part

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Sorry for the trouble yesterday. Actually this One Shot is more than 6500+ words I was having a hard time drafting it in a single page. I tried the small fonts too. Lets see if this works out, I am trying one more time. If not I will post half of the story in a different post.

I dont know why I could not post the same length OS that I had posted few years back.

IF is seriously messing with my brain!!!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Beautifully written
Loved it
Fantastic update
Thanks for the pm

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

wow! awesome os

thanks for the pm x

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Very very sweet and nice OS dear.

Thanks for re posting it.

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Sri

@..Sri..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: ..Sri..
Why nothing is visible after
"I am Arnav, by the way. And you are?"
He asked to the mother, while sitting next to the little girl, who was no

I'm confused... whatever... up to what I read is really nice. I wish to read remaining part too...

Thank you for the PM...

Ahh... This is perfect... What a pure love... I enjoyed like never before... wonderful shot...

Thank you for such a awesome shot...