OS: SP x DH x MG **HAPPY BDAY JYO**

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Satina

@Satina

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

❤️ this OS

Happy belated birthday Jyo!😃

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

wowww...such an amazinggg cross-over of ur three brilliant writings...

an interesting idea...

enjoyed reading the OS...

thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

Happy Birthday Jyo...

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Only you can do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not only bring three FFs together but also blend them sooo harmoniously!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

lovely story combines of 3 stories

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Such a lovely OS
Was wondering if Arnav let khushi win or did the student really surpass the master lol
Loved how khushi never gave up on trying to catch his attention away from the laptop
Horse ride was funny with khushi getting lost in Arnavs movements
Their mind convo was funny too liked how they thought they were hallucinating from the wine n juice
Really enjoyed thanks for pm
Oh n Belated birthday wishes to jyo

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Wonderful OS.. A merger of all 3 FFs.. Just too beautiful.. Especially MG one was my favorite part maybe coz we dont have it ongoing and it was one of my favs.. Just too beautiful...

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sarthshru

@sarthshru

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

nice one dear,...all my fv os mixed in this one !!1

njoyed to bits !1

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xyzsm

@xyzsm

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

well...it was awesome!!...the song perfectly sets the mood!!!

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MidnightReader

@MidnightReader

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Hi Tina, 😊

Happy New Year Tina and Jyo! May you both have a prosperous year full of happiness and joy! ⭐️

This a beautiful gift to your friend Jyo. 😊

I like the fact that Khushi didn't get disappointed and lost hope that Arnav is still working in Rajasthan, instead she took it as a challenge. She kept trying to distract Arnav from his work knowing his anger and how serious Arnav is with work. She knew Arnav will not yell at her. It just showed to me how open, respectful, and trustful they are of each other. 😲 Saying that I really like how you showed Arnav and Khushi not arguing about Arnav working and over Khushi comments of being unromantic. I enjoyed reading Arnav and Khushi's playful bickering. 😃

This OS is such a great combination of almost all of your stories. 👏

Rajasthan, sand, tents and at last Khushi calling Arnav dark prince all reminded me of your fan fiction 'Desert Heat.'

Khushi wearing white and silver belly-dancing outfit and trying to distract Arnav by doing a belly dance all was a reminder of your lovely fan fiction 'Secret Passion.'

And of course, there was something in Arnav and Khushi's drink that they could hear each other thoughts. It speaks out to one of your wonderful story 'Mind games.'

This list of stories shows what a talented writer you are. I wish you all the best for publishing your work.😊 You have done a great job of combining all your work in this OS. It seems like you have written this OS so effortless but I know it must have taken a lot of work and your very creative imagination to write a great dedication to Jyo.

Happy birthday Jyo! 🥳 May God bless you with many more. Enjoy the day! 😃

P.S. Thank you Tina for adding me as your friend. 😊 Thank you PMing me your work. 😊 However, if you have too many readers to PM please do take me off your PM list. I don't mind because I usually look at your blog for updates. 😊

Edited by MidnightReader - 11 years ago