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@Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Heer Ranjha

Phir aaya mauka ke bataa de dil mein dabi baat

Be-khauff, be-jhijhak jataa de, dil ke haalaat

Heer Ranjhe ke bhes mein dil khol kar rakh diya

Tadapte huye armaanon ka izhaar phir kar diya

Heer/Khushi:

Pyaar ki koi zabaan nahin, ye hai nazron ka khel

Aankhen bayaan kar deti hain, dil ke saare bhed

Heer, ab Heer na rahi, ek dhund mein khogayi,

Ranjha, Ranjha karte, bani Ranjhe ki parchaayi

Ranjha/Arnav:

Jao na tum chodke, jee na sakunga tere bina

Koi wajood nahin hai, Ranjhe ka Heer ke bina

Hazaar baatein kahin, ki, par yun roothkar na jao

Saari baatein bhulakar, ek baar wapas aa jao

Shayad ho koi aisi duniya, jahan dil ki baat aaye zubaan par

Koi aisi baat na ho, ke rehana pade juda hokar

Matlab nahin un baaton ka, jo gusse mein kaha maine

Bas yehi ek matlab hai, ke main hamesha hamesha tumse ...

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Durga,

First, lovely edit on top with them juxtaposing like mirror reflections of each other.

Beautiful native flavor in the top poem there. And loved everything else esp the underlined. Your words successfully captured their helpless desperation.

Thanks

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#782

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 222

Heer Ranjha

Phir aaya mauka ke bataa de dil mein dabi baat

Be-khauff, be-jhijhak jataa de, dil ke haalaat

Heer Ranjhe ke bhes mein dil khol kar rakh diya

Tadapte huye armaanon ka izhaar phir kar diya

Heer/Khushi:

Pyaar ki koi zabaan nahin, ye hai nazron ka khel

Aankhen bayaan kar deti hain, dil ke saare bhed

Heer, ab Heer na rahi, ek dhund mein khogayi,

Ranjha, Ranjha karte, bani Ranjhe ki parchaayi

Ranjha/Arnav:

Jao na tum chodke, jee na sakunga tere bina

Koi wajood nahin hai, Ranjhe ka Heer ke bina

Hazaar baatein kahin, ki, par yun roothkar na jao

Saari baatein bhulakar, ek baar wapas aa jao

Shayad ho koi aisi duniya, jahan dil ki baat aaye zubaan par

Koi aisi baat na ho, ke rehana pade juda hokar

Matlab nahin un baaton ka, jo gusse mein kaha maine

Bas yehi ek matlab hai, ke main hamesha hamesha tumse ...

Translation:

Once again got another chance to tell the hidden matters of the heart

Without fear, without hesitation, convey the state of the heart

In the guise of Heer Ranjha, opened up the heart

Again mentioned about the restless desires

Heer/Khushi:

Love has no language, it is the game of the eyes

The eyes convey all the secrets of the heart

Heer, is no longer Heer, she's lost in the mist

Calling out Ranjha, Ranjha, she became Ranjha's reflection

Ranjha/Arnav:

Don't leave me and go away, I can't live without you

There is no existence for Ranjha without Heer

A thousand things I said and did, but don't go away miffed like this

Forget all things, just come back once

There might be a world where the matters of the heart can be uttered

There would be nothing, due to which we live separated

There is no meaning for those things that I said in anger

There is meaning for just one thing, that with you I will always always ...

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beautiful narrative poem, durga... love it.

Pyaar ki koi zabaan nahin, ye hai nazron ka khel

Aankhen bayaan kar deti hain, dil ke saare bhed

Hazaar baatein kahin, ki, par yun roothkar na jao

Saari baatein bhulakar, ek baar wapas aa jao

why are lovers so often in such a fix? and yet if they weren't how would poetry flow out of love... i love the silly heer ranjha sequence and your words add another layer to it... yet another place to revel and go awww. thanks.

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AKAD

@AKAD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 222

Heer Ranjha

Phir aaya mauka ke bataa de dil mein dabi baat

Be-khauff, be-jhijhak jataa de, dil ke haalaat

Heer Ranjhe ke bhes mein dil khol kar rakh diya

Tadapte huye armaanon ka izhaar phir kar diya

Heer/Khushi:

Pyaar ki koi zabaan nahin, ye hai nazron ka khel

Aankhen bayaan kar deti hain, dil ke saare bhed

Heer, ab Heer na rahi, ek dhund mein khogayi,

Ranjha, Ranjha karte, bani Ranjhe ki parchaayi

Ranjha/Arnav:

Jao na tum chodke, jee na sakunga tere bina

Koi wajood nahin hai, Ranjhe ka Heer ke bina

Hazaar baatein kahin, ki, par yun roothkar na jao

Saari baatein bhulakar, ek baar wapas aa jao

Shayad ho koi aisi duniya, jahan dil ki baat aaye zubaan par

Koi aisi baat na ho, ke rehana pade juda hokar

Matlab nahin un baaton ka, jo gusse mein kaha maine

Bas yehi ek matlab hai, ke main hamesha hamesha tumse ...

Translation:

Once again got another chance to tell the hidden matters of the heart

Without fear, without hesitation, convey the state of the heart

In the guise of Heer Ranjha, opened up the heart

Again mentioned about the restless desires

Heer/Khushi:

Love has no language, it is the game of the eyes

The eyes convey all the secrets of the heart

Heer, is no longer Heer, she's lost in the mist

Calling out Ranjha, Ranjha, she became Ranjha's reflection

Ranjha/Arnav:

Don't leave me and go away, I can't live without you

There is no existence for Ranjha without Heer

A thousand things I said and did, but don't go away miffed like this

Forget all things, just come back once

There might be a world where the matters of the heart can be uttered

There would be nothing, due to which we live separated

There is no meaning for those things that I said in anger

There is meaning for just one thing, that with you I will always always ...

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Awesome Durga , Love it and the top pic is just breathtaking👏

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#784

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 222

Heer Ranjha

Phir aaya mauka ke bataa de dil mein dabi baat

Be-khauff, be-jhijhak jataa de, dil ke haalaat

Heer Ranjhe ke bhes mein dil khol kar rakh diya

Tadapte huye armaanon ka izhaar phir kar diya

Heer/Khushi:

Pyaar ki koi zabaan nahin, ye hai nazron ka khel

Aankhen bayaan kar deti hain, dil ke saare bhed

Heer, ab Heer na rahi, ek dhund mein khogayi,

Ranjha, Ranjha karte, bani Ranjhe ki parchaayi

Ranjha/Arnav:

Jao na tum chodke, jee na sakunga tere bina

Koi wajood nahin hai, Ranjhe ka Heer ke bina

Hazaar baatein kahin, ki, par yun roothkar na jao

Saari baatein bhulakar, ek baar wapas aa jao

Shayad ho koi aisi duniya, jahan dil ki baat aaye zubaan par

Koi aisi baat na ho, ke rehana pade juda hokar

Matlab nahin un baaton ka, jo gusse mein kaha maine

Bas yehi ek matlab hai, ke main hamesha hamesha tumse ...

Translation:

Once again got another chance to tell the hidden matters of the heart

Without fear, without hesitation, convey the state of the heart

In the guise of Heer Ranjha, opened up the heart

Again mentioned about the restless desires

Heer/Khushi:

Love has no language, it is the game of the eyes

The eyes convey all the secrets of the heart

Heer, is no longer Heer, she's lost in the mist

Calling out Ranjha, Ranjha, she became Ranjha's reflection

Ranjha/Arnav:

Don't leave me and go away, I can't live without you

There is no existence for Ranjha without Heer

A thousand things I said and did, but don't go away miffed like this

Forget all things, just come back once

There might be a world where the matters of the heart can be uttered

There would be nothing, due to which we live separated

There is no meaning for those things that I said in anger

There is meaning for just one thing, that with you I will always always ...

DurgaS's Index

Mind blowing poetic expression.

Arnav and Khsuhi's profound feelings for each other, their longing for each other, their untold love for each other, at the same time their turbulence, their tadap, all the emotions are beautifully expressed in this poem. Through heer-ranjha act they actually confessed their love again.

You are simply stupendous.

I just loved this lines.

Pyaar ki koi zabaan nahin, ye hai nazron ka khel

Aankhen bayaan kar deti hain, dil ke saare bhed

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divsarunfan

@divsarunfan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 222

Heer Ranjha

Phir aaya mauka ke bataa de dil mein dabi baat

Be-khauff, be-jhijhak jataa de, dil ke haalaat

Heer Ranjhe ke bhes mein dil khol kar rakh diya

Tadapte huye armaanon ka izhaar phir kar diya

Heer/Khushi:

Pyaar ki koi zabaan nahin, ye hai nazron ka khel

Aankhen bayaan kar deti hain, dil ke saare bhed

Heer, ab Heer na rahi, ek dhund mein khogayi,

Ranjha, Ranjha karte, bani Ranjhe ki parchaayi

Ranjha/Arnav:

Jao na tum chodke, jee na sakunga tere bina

Koi wajood nahin hai, Ranjhe ka Heer ke bina

Hazaar baatein kahin, ki, par yun roothkar na jao

Saari baatein bhulakar, ek baar wapas aa jao

Shayad ho koi aisi duniya, jahan dil ki baat aaye zubaan par

Koi aisi baat na ho, ke rehana pade juda hokar

Matlab nahin un baaton ka, jo gusse mein kaha maine

Bas yehi ek matlab hai, ke main hamesha hamesha tumse ...

Translation:

Once again got another chance to tell the hidden matters of the heart

Without fear, without hesitation, convey the state of the heart

In the guise of Heer Ranjha, opened up the heart

Again mentioned about the restless desires

Heer/Khushi:

Love has no language, it is the game of the eyes

The eyes convey all the secrets of the heart

Heer, is no longer Heer, she's lost in the mist

Calling out Ranjha, Ranjha, she became Ranjha's reflection

Ranjha/Arnav:

Don't leave me and go away, I can't live without you

There is no existence for Ranjha without Heer

A thousand things I said and did, but don't go away miffed like this

Forget all things, just come back once

There might be a world where the matters of the heart can be uttered

There would be nothing, due to which we live separated

There is no meaning for those things that I said in anger

There is meaning for just one thing, that with you I will always always ...

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superb di👏

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#786

Wiwy, Horizon, Indi, Akad, Sohara, Div

Thank you all for loving the poem so much. I felt after posting, that it could have been better. But I am glad you still liked it and gave such lovely comments. 😃

Thanks for liking the edits too. Horizon, loved what you wrote about the mirror image. Wow, didn't think of that while making the edit. But now when I see that way, I sure feel good about it. Thanks. 😳

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 222

Heer Ranjha

Phir aaya mauka ke bataa de dil mein dabi baat

Be-khauff, be-jhijhak jataa de, dil ke haalaat

Heer Ranjhe ke bhes mein dil khol kar rakh diya

Tadapte huye armaanon ka izhaar phir kar diya

Heer/Khushi:

Pyaar ki koi zabaan nahin, ye hai nazron ka khel

Aankhen bayaan kar deti hain, dil ke saare bhed

Heer, ab Heer na rahi, ek dhund mein khogayi,

Ranjha, Ranjha karte, bani Ranjhe ki parchaayi

Ranjha/Arnav:

Jao na tum chodke, jee na sakunga tere bina

Koi wajood nahin hai, Ranjhe ka Heer ke bina

Hazaar baatein kahin, ki, par yun roothkar na jao

Saari baatein bhulakar, ek baar wapas aa jao

Shayad ho koi aisi duniya, jahan dil ki baat aaye zubaan par

Koi aisi baat na ho, ke rehana pade juda hokar

Matlab nahin un baaton ka, jo gusse mein kaha maine

Bas yehi ek matlab hai, ke main hamesha hamesha tumse ...

Translation:

Once again got another chance to tell the hidden matters of the heart

Without fear, without hesitation, convey the state of the heart

In the guise of Heer Ranjha, opened up the heart

Again mentioned about the restless desires

Heer/Khushi:

Love has no language, it is the game of the eyes

The eyes convey all the secrets of the heart

Heer, is no longer Heer, she's lost in the mist

Calling out Ranjha, Ranjha, she became Ranjha's reflection

Ranjha/Arnav:

Don't leave me and go away, I can't live without you

There is no existence for Ranjha without Heer

A thousand things I said and did, but don't go away miffed like this

Forget all things, just come back once

There might be a world where the matters of the heart can be uttered

There would be nothing, due to which we live separated

There is no meaning for those things that I said in anger

There is meaning for just one thing, that with you I will always always ...

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Awesome poem 👏

love it.❤️

Love these two lines

Calling out Ranjha, Ranjha, she became Ranjha's reflection

There is no existence for Ranjha without Heer❤️

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Disclaimer: Please do not copy my work anywhere. If you do, please give credit.

Episode 222

Heer Ranjha

Phir aaya mauka ke bataa de dil mein dabi baat

Be-khauff, be-jhijhak jataa de, dil ke haalaat

Heer Ranjhe ke bhes mein dil khol kar rakh diya

Tadapte huye armaanon ka izhaar phir kar diya

Heer/Khushi:

Pyaar ki koi zabaan nahin, ye hai nazron ka khel

Aankhen bayaan kar deti hain, dil ke saare bhed

Heer, ab Heer na rahi, ek dhund mein khogayi,

Ranjha, Ranjha karte, bani Ranjhe ki parchaayi

Ranjha/Arnav:

Jao na tum chodke, jee na sakunga tere bina

Koi wajood nahin hai, Ranjhe ka Heer ke bina

Hazaar baatein kahin, ki, par yun roothkar na jao

Saari baatein bhulakar, ek baar wapas aa jao

Shayad ho koi aisi duniya, jahan dil ki baat aaye zubaan par

Koi aisi baat na ho, ke rehana pade juda hokar

Matlab nahin un baaton ka, jo gusse mein kaha maine

Bas yehi ek matlab hai, ke main hamesha hamesha tumse ...

Translation:

Once again got another chance to tell the hidden matters of the heart

Without fear, without hesitation, convey the state of the heart

In the guise of Heer Ranjha, opened up the heart

Again mentioned about the restless desires

Heer/Khushi:

Love has no language, it is the game of the eyes

The eyes convey all the secrets of the heart

Heer, is no longer Heer, she's lost in the mist

Calling out Ranjha, Ranjha, she became Ranjha's reflection

Ranjha/Arnav:

Don't leave me and go away, I can't live without you

There is no existence for Ranjha without Heer

A thousand things I said and did, but don't go away miffed like this

Forget all things, just come back once

There might be a world where the matters of the heart can be uttered

There would be nothing, due to which we live separated

There is no meaning for those things that I said in anger

There is meaning for just one thing, that with you I will always always ...

DurgaS's Index

I loved the whole thing , for me it was hard to choose which one is better .but this one is just way too much to handle

Shayad ho koi aisi duniya, jahan dil ki baat aaye zubaan par

Koi aisi baat na ho, ke rehana pade juda hokar

Matlab nahin un baaton ka, jo gusse mein kaha maine

Bas yehi ek matlab hai, ke main hamesha hamesha tumse .👏

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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Putija

@PutijaChalhov

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#789

Jao na tum chodke, jee na sakunga tere bina

Koi wajood nahin hai, Ranjhe ka Heer ke bina

Hazaar baatein kahin, ki, par yun roothkar na jao

Saari baatein bhulakar, ek baar wapas aa jao

@ Durga fantastic

Kya Miliye Aise Logon Se,
Jinki Fithrath Chupi Rahe,
Nakli Chehera Saamne Aaye,
Asli Surath Chupi Rahe...

Khud Se Bhi Jo Khud Ko Chupaaye,
Kya Unse Pehechaan Karen,
Kya Unke Daaman Se Lipten