Vignettes - 23. Mera Beta ( English Translation updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome ❤️
the way u portray the relations is just beautiful ❤️
i m so in love with vignettes series ..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
lovely update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
How can u ask y we love your os more after writing something like this...just beautiful.so emotional.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I actually was waiting for the translation but couldn't resist ,so read the main one ..
a superb, fantastic & warm update ..how I wish to see something like that in our ipk .. really awesome ..loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yep , for a second I thought so but ASR n train traveling... Baat KUCH jami nahi!!!
Absolute wonderful piece
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
This is really one of the best vignettes series I have read. I so wanted Shashi to recover and Shyam's deeds to be known and then he taking control of his life and moving forward. The journey you have described here is so heart-warming and for me this is how Arnav helped Shashi become normal. This is the perfect closure I was looking for Arnav - Shashi and Garima's story and their journey from becoming parents to Arnav.

I always wanted Arnav to call Garima and Shashi as Amma and Babuji especially after the gupta track in the show but the creatives royally ignored this thing. But your OS has really filled the blanks for me and the journey of Shashi that you have described is the perfect icing on the cake. Thanks a lot for penning this beautiful story.

PS:- I don't know who else is waiting for your FFs but this is just to let you know that I am waiting on eager toes to read your FF on Arnav and Khushi becoming parents.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Beautiful
just amazing

Loved it
I am awestruck, how beautifully you have put Arnav and Shashi's relation to words..
Loving each and every OS' of yours even more...
Keep writing and continue soon..
Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awesome
I always to read an OS depicting the feelings of Shashi.
Arnav founded his lost parents n they got a son.
Waiting for the next OS eexcitingly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Aparna! The transition from Uncle-Aunty to Amma-Babujee, uber cute!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tht was as beautiful as all others :) :)
loved the slow progression of the relationship, the bonding between arnav n khushi's family... the trust, the responsibility, everythg.. very sutble... n very very beautiful :) ..

the idea of arnav on a station :) .. well only khushi n her family can k him do tht.. i doubt nani or anjali wud b able to refuse the chopper 😉 .. whn ASR informs them tht they r using it :) :) .. rather than asking them if they wud 😊

u knw.. this reminds me of so many times.. whn i hv seen my mom n dad with my husband... n the little thgs tht show.. not only their actions n words... bt also on the little smiles tht come on their faces unknwingly :) ... like the ones mentioned here :) :)

beautiful is the only word i can still think of... so.. beautiful one :) :)

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