ArHi OS: Acidity, Rabba Ve, Dhak-Dhak, or LOVE? - Page 3

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK

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<font color="#330000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awww sweetie ... tis is ur first OS ?? !!! dammit u are amazing dear ... I just loved every single line !</font>

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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">"Arnav, there's just one thing I want you to know, what lies behind us, and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us. We can't spoil your present just because we are uncertain of our future. You know what I mean, right?" She asked, her eyes brimming with hopes.</font>

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<font color="#330000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">these lines are so powerful ... so true .. and I hope every person out there understands the true meaning of it !</font>

<font color="#330000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">loved how Khushi made Arnav accept his love for her .. how she helped him feel free to open his heart out and let her into it !! beauti ful work honey and and so happy u shared it with me !😊</font>

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<font color="#330000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">my fav lines from the OS ...</font>

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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#330000"></font><font color="#0000ff">And I promise you, this would bloom into a flower of love, a love that this world has never seen. An Arnav-Khushi saga. A saga people will talk about, write upon. A legend of love"❤️</font></font>

OMG, thanks a lot Jyo for the overwhelming response.

I am flying in air (someone please nail me down)

The earlier lines you quoted

"What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters as compared to what lies within us" aren't my words actually.

This was the quote writers were instructed to write upon for the Genre Romance. So I used it in the OS.

But yes the latter lines were mine. 😳

And yeah this was mine first attempt at writing an OS and I am so happy you liked it.

Thanks a lot for the lovely review. 😊 ❤️

Originally posted by: AALUSLOLWA

sweet OS .. i really liked it .. haha .
. morning prayer
..school atmosphere..
arnav s glare
n khushi s fear ;-)
thy kissed there ..
lol ..cnt rhyme anymore hihi.. lovley os ..i really liked it .. cute khushi .. young but sensible ..
yu carried the story really well in such few words ..
jahan pnaa tussi great hoo ;-) :-D

keep writing hmaesha :-)
and a bigg congrats fr making to top ten ..
and .. double congrats fr being an awsm person :-)
all the best :-D

Awww..

Loved your rhyming words. 😉

Thanks a LOT for the lovely and encouraging review.

Another thanks for considering me something I am not (an awesome person) 😆

Love you loads. ❤️

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

OMG, thanks a lot Jyo for the overwhelming response.

I am flying in air (someone please nail me down)

The earlier lines you quoted

"What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters as compared to what lies within us" aren't my words actually.

This was the quote writers were instructed to write upon for the Genre Romance. So I used it in the OS.

But yes the latter lines were mine. 😳

And yeah this was mine first attempt at writing an OS and I am so happy you liked it.

Thanks a lot for the lovely review. 😊 ❤️

Hmm..nice ASR turns Arnav..
Lovely... the kiss was awesome...

wow!!!

Wow! That was great! I think this is your first Arshi OS! Congrats for making it to the top ten 👍🏼

Oh i remember this os! I remember i had liked it immensely! It was nit only cute but also left us with a warm , happy feeling in the end!!

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

Awww..

Loved your rhyming words. 😉

Thanks a LOT for the lovely and encouraging review.

Another thanks for considering me something I am not (an awesome person) 😆

Love you loads. ❤️

me too ..love yu loads ..the frst ff writer i came across <3 waisy yu r awsm .. Yu hv the courage to face outcomes .. Etc ..n take up critism positively rather than "being fed up" .. Lol .. waisy i missed saying that ..the last line ..lol..no one knows who sent flowers to the PT teacher ... 😆 ..

And i love it when yu reply my cmnts ;-)


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