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Superb start with ASR caught in the midst of his tragic past memories and Khushi coming in his line of vision making him forget everything.

Arnav Singh Raizada started imagining Khushi everywhere, he is gone, all out hogaya...lol...to an extent agreed to his Di without any disapproval from his side...

Wah ASR had started dreaming about his girl...only if Anjali comes to know her brother the great ASR dreaming about a girl day and night then surely she will get heart attack...already he had given her shock on finding the prettiest girl from Lucknow for modeling his clothes...and this will be too much for her...

Beta Aman and bitiya Anjali you will get more shock than this...this is just trailor...poor ASR, did he really think every girl out there in Lucknow will come for modeling...

ASR is panicking to lose his girl, to not able to find...don't worry ASR, she will soon come in front of you saying lo mein agaye' Anjali's list of things asking Arnav purchase amused me with the way both Aman and Arnav tried to hide their smile...kya zamana agaya, kya din dekhne ko mile Aman aur Anjali ko...

...Khushi herself got into Lion's den; tagging him along with her to buy a pickle for him not knowing more than pickle he is worried for her to get slip again from his hand...sanki hai Khushi, pagal but cute...only she can do this, talking to a stranger as if he is her childhood friend. Jalebi bai of Lucknow that is heights I was rofling...ASR got brain that he should have announced for cooking contest rather than fashion show lol...

Khushi seriously girl did you thought that he wants he to show a way out of market? He there contemplating on how to stop her and she is without knowing anything trapped in the web...if only she comes to know that ASR wants her to be with him forever she would have freaked out...lo businessman ki dhajjiyan kaisi udani ho ye toh Khuhsi se seekna chahiye...fashio designer se tailor tak la gira di Arnav bitwa ko...hahaha Khushi's counter statement was really funny when she tells him why he is getting angry for not be tailor...her anger too has spike in it...why are you shouting if you don't need sales girl...like really all he wants was her to understand that he needs a model in disguise but true to his self he needs her for himself always to be beside, anger at his helplessness he shouted our Khushi bitiya got angry...and warned him of leaving him in the middle lol as if he will let it happen...Khushi was boasting herself to be 12th passed as if she has medical degree or engineering at hand, only she can do something like this...

Ab ASR apki pala Khushi se pada hai toh bhukto uska natija, she is expert in asking uncomfortable question yaar...the way she explained herself that she will trip over and may be fall on him was so cute and ASR's mind shouting if only she could fall on his arm, oh the guy will not leave a chance coming in a palate for him...would lock her in his arm possessively...Khushi ko ab akal aayi ki ye sawal poochne ki that why are offering jobs for strangers...till now she did not think him as to be stranger while tagging him along with her...Khushi is too bubbly and the way Aman and Anjali watched slawjacked Khushi calling Arnav names was rofl moment again...Anjali toh kya ASR ke nani bhi usko ye sab samjha nahiin payegi because he the Great ASR who will not listen to anybody other than himself. Dard hota hai baba this line I liked for some kind the way Khushi told...Khushi and her way to shut her mouth to keep finger on her lips...lol but ASR bhi kam nahiin hai...how did he come to know that she loves food...kya zamana agaya, kya din dekhne ko mile Aman aur Anjali ko...aage aage delho hota hai kya...

Khushi does not leave a chance to glare at him, is she? And the way the elders along with Payal were so sure with Khushi had gotten into trouble was lol...woh todi sanki nahiin hai bua ji balki puri hai aur uskeliya a sanka huwa Rajkumar bhi agaya aapke darwaza tak...without their knowing they are giving full insights of Khushi's sanki pan...Khushi is gloating too soon for the elder's of their family refusing for Khushi's modeling, if only she could know that she is fighting with ASR...haha she thought he is confirming about the title of jalebi bai of Lucknow from her father on if she knew that he had put use of his Harvard/Haridwar trained brain in a very clever way with the little information she told him not a few hour before. Anjali and Aman will always agree furiously with Arnav for whatever he says they just want to rope Khushi in for their brother/boss...what a sister and employee?...as if he is wanting to eat laddoos Garima ji...if only she knew that if they will give their Khushi to him he will all happy and will do Gangnam dance on his victory...Gupta's are so sure that their Khushi will create ruckus where ever she goes and their pitying for ASR lol such a confidence on their Kussiii bitiya...Aman and Anjali did have their gala time in teasing ASR who is blushing...hahaha...

Manju ji statement on coming to conclusion to why ASR did not fall for any of the models is rofl...because they are not halwai like Khushi...Manju is for all in shock when Khushi told the tale of how ASR impressed her, if only she knew that Khushi does not fear about ASR and he does not or to say will not hurt Khushi with his ego and legendry temper tantrums...ASR's side of teasing Khushi will be another shock for Aman, Anjali and Manju...not leaving a chance did he...and Khushi she had gone one step ahead and try to scare him throwing his words at him but poor her trapped all the more in his web...I love all the of the characters in your story...bua ji, mami ji, every characters are like I'm watching the show rather than reading a fanfiction...

NK and his killing his hindi? How do you do that in your every stories...you perfectly bring their slang like mami ji, nani ji, bua ji, Khushi, ASR and the others like they were shown in show...brilliant...I love this Manju ji's character she too is not living a chance to pull ASR's leg...and the way she smartly asked him if she was right to grant leave for Khushi indirectly was superb...I love Akash calling his mother maate...NK is funny guy with his oh so perception of Manju to be Khushi...lo do namoone bhi aagaye ASR ki madad karne...ram jaane ye madad karenge ya phir baath ko aur bigad denge...

ASR really? Have Khushi written on stamp paper to you that all her time is for you that you are blowing your fuse...what a day had come with Anjali, Aman, NK and Akash all giving their ideas to ASR for getting his Khushi...Bua ji you have two daughters for Ram and Laxman but for Bharath there is short of girl...I wonder will there will be a girl entering for NK too...Akash is cleaned bowled by Payal ji...don't worry bua ji you don't have to say to your Arnav bitwa to keep an eye on your sanka devi, because he is already having his eyes, ears and everything on his Khushi...buaji in a minute gave Arnav heart attack on talking about Khushi's marriage...poor guy is having tough time...yes yes bitwa you had to hurry up...varna the speed you are moving Khushi will run away with Bankelal ji...Akash should be given payment for correcting NK's hindi...Mittu is so cute...haha the parrot had vomited every word Khushi had confided in her...good...the parrot too has funny bone it's due to the humor Mittu pulled on them...Man mein laddoo phoota...yes Mittu parrot ji...ASR ke man bohot sare laddoo phote hain...Khushi has a akal to think now that he is not child to get lost but she is the one who was trying to find him way out in the market at first place...itni jaldi bhool gayi...Khushi is explaining him things like he is child that in wedding he will not get his pusta, sandwich lol...ASR is really a good manipulator here...lo doosri love story bhi shuru hogayi aur ASR-Khushi se aage ek kadam nikal bhi gayi...ASR has gone ahead and gave loud kiss on her palm, he never let gave a chance, did he?

Khushi you are asking for too much from Devi Maya it is all her doings that your Raizada ji is here for you, and will only return to Delhi with his certain Khushi Kumari Gupta claiming as Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada...her dreams were amusing one...Khushi ek unique piece hai...only for ASR...hahaha by hiding her palm as if he will restrain himself from kissing her, bitiya he can kiss your cheeks too or is he wants your lips too but yeh sab kaun Khushi ko samjhayega...

Khushi you asked for it, now see he had kissed your cheek, maina kaha tha na...ASR ji never will leave his chance, poor girl tried all in vain to wipe his smirk but instead made him laugh with her statement that her face is not municipal corporation road for him to travel as he pleases...okay Khushi had blasted on Arnav and ran away too...now what will ASR do to make her agree to come to work for him...poor him...he had to do something soon and I don't think Khushi will agree so easily...well let us see what ASR's shatir dimaag comes up now...

All in all I never wanted to stop reading and wanted to read more and more...will be waiting for you to update next update eagerly...😊


About your other stories Keeping Khushi touched my heart to never be erased, His smiling girl is too good to be missed...and knowing Khushi too.. it will be too hard for me to comment all the chapters in them so I can say only one thing 'Truly heart touching*...Di I have one request for you two...can anyone of you from two (smita Di and Rulama Di *don't know your real name*) please think about posting Keeping Khushi and His smiling girl and other series of Khushi in Mye Duniya...please think about it,...I would like the Med people too to read your wonderful creation...just a request...I'll not nag you for it...just think about it once...please do not get offend on my request because it is my heart core wish to see my fellow buddies too to read the mind blowing creation of yours...simple, beautiful and exquisite...😊


Please do visit this thread too of Finding Khushi...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95758873

Edited by vs_2706 - 11 years ago
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Update soon, Smita! Please! Can't wait for tomorrow 😭
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Will we get an update today? :D
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Originally posted by: _Devaki_

Will we get an update today? :D



Hopefully!😆

Going to write now.😃

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Originally posted by: vs_2706


Superb start with ASR caught in the midst of his tragic past memories and Khushi coming in his line of vision making him forget everything.

Arnav Singh Raizada started imagining Khushi everywhere, he is gone, all out hogaya...lol...to an extent agreed to his Di without any disapproval from his side...

Wah ASR had started dreaming about his girl...only if Anjali comes to know her brother the great ASR dreaming about a girl day and night then surely she will get heart attack...already he had given her shock on finding the prettiest girl from Lucknow for modeling his clothes...and this will be too much for her...

Beta Aman and bitiya Anjali you will get more shock than this...this is just trailor...poor ASR, did he really think every girl out there in Lucknow will come for modeling...

ASR is panicking to lose his girl, to not able to find...don't worry ASR, she will soon come in front of you saying lo mein agaye' Anjali's list of things asking Arnav purchase amused me with the way both Aman and Arnav tried to hide their smile...kya zamana agaya, kya din dekhne ko mile Aman aur Anjali ko...

...Khushi herself got into Lion's den; tagging him along with her to buy a pickle for him not knowing more than pickle he is worried for her to get slip again from his hand...sanki hai Khushi, pagal but cute...only she can do this, talking to a stranger as if he is her childhood friend. Jalebi bai of Lucknow that is heights I was rofling...ASR got brain that he should have announced for cooking contest rather than fashion show lol...

Khushi seriously girl did you thought that he wants he to show a way out of market? He there contemplating on how to stop her and she is without knowing anything trapped in the web...if only she comes to know that ASR wants her to be with him forever she would have freaked out...lo businessman ki dhajjiyan kaisi udani ho ye toh Khuhsi se seekna chahiye...fashio designer se tailor tak la gira di Arnav bitwa ko...hahaha Khushi's counter statement was really funny when she tells him why he is getting angry for not be tailor...her anger too has spike in it...why are you shouting if you don't need sales girl...like really all he wants was her to understand that he needs a model in disguise but true to his self he needs her for himself always to be beside, anger at his helplessness he shouted our Khushi bitiya got angry...and warned him of leaving him in the middle lol as if he will let it happen...Khushi was boasting herself to be 12th passed as if she has medical degree or engineering at hand, only she can do something like this...

Ab ASR apki pala Khushi se pada hai toh bhukto uska natija, she is expert in asking uncomfortable question yaar...the way she explained herself that she will trip over and may be fall on him was so cute and ASR's mind shouting if only she could fall on his arm, oh the guy will not leave a chance coming in a palate for him...would lock her in his arm possessively...Khushi ko ab akal aayi ki ye sawal poochne ki that why are offering jobs for strangers...till now she did not think him as to be stranger while tagging him along with her...Khushi is too bubbly and the way Aman and Anjali watched slawjacked Khushi calling Arnav names was rofl moment again...Anjali toh kya ASR ke nani bhi usko ye sab samjha nahiin payegi because he the Great ASR who will not listen to anybody other than himself. Dard hota hai baba this line I liked for some kind the way Khushi told...Khushi and her way to shut her mouth to keep finger on her lips...lol but ASR bhi kam nahiin hai...how did he come to know that she loves food...kya zamana agaya, kya din dekhne ko mile Aman aur Anjali ko...aage aage delho hota hai kya...

Khushi does not leave a chance to glare at him, is she? And the way the elders along with Payal were so sure with Khushi had gotten into trouble was lol...woh todi sanki nahiin hai bua ji balki puri hai aur uskeliya a sanka huwa Rajkumar bhi agaya aapke darwaza tak...without their knowing they are giving full insights of Khushi's sanki pan...Khushi is gloating too soon for the elder's of their family refusing for Khushi's modeling, if only she could know that she is fighting with ASR...haha she thought he is confirming about the title of jalebi bai of Lucknow from her father on if she knew that he had put use of his Harvard/Haridwar trained brain in a very clever way with the little information she told him not a few hour before. Anjali and Aman will always agree furiously with Arnav for whatever he says they just want to rope Khushi in for their brother/boss...what a sister and employee?...as if he is wanting to eat laddoos Garima ji...if only she knew that if they will give their Khushi to him he will all happy and will do Gangnam dance on his victory...Gupta's are so sure that their Khushi will create ruckus where ever she goes and their pitying for ASR lol such a confidence on their Kussiii bitiya...Aman and Anjali did have their gala time in teasing ASR who is blushing...hahaha...

Manju ji statement on coming to conclusion to why ASR did not fall for any of the models is rofl...because they are not halwai like Khushi...Manju is for all in shock when Khushi told the tale of how ASR impressed her, if only she knew that Khushi does not fear about ASR and he does not or to say will not hurt Khushi with his ego and legendry temper tantrums...ASR's side of teasing Khushi will be another shock for Aman, Anjali and Manju...not leaving a chance did he...and Khushi she had gone one step ahead and try to scare him throwing his words at him but poor her trapped all the more in his web...I love all the of the characters in your story...bua ji, mami ji, every characters are like I'm watching the show rather than reading a fanfiction...

NK and his killing his hindi? How do you do that in your every stories...you perfectly bring their slang like mami ji, nani ji, bua ji, Khushi, ASR and the others like they were shown in show...brilliant...I love this Manju ji's character she too is not living a chance to pull ASR's leg...and the way she smartly asked him if she was right to grant leave for Khushi indirectly was superb...I love Akash calling his mother maate...NK is funny guy with his oh so perception of Manju to be Khushi...lo do namoone bhi aagaye ASR ki madad karne...ram jaane ye madad karenge ya phir baath ko aur bigad denge...

ASR really? Have Khushi written on stamp paper to you that all her time is for you that you are blowing your fuse...what a day had come with Anjali, Aman, NK and Akash all giving their ideas to ASR for getting his Khushi...Bua ji you have two daughters for Ram and Laxman but for Bharath there is short of girl...I wonder will there will be a girl entering for NK too...Akash is cleaned bowled by Payal ji...don't worry bua ji you don't have to say to your Arnav bitwa to keep an eye on your sanka devi, because he is already having his eyes, ears and everything on his Khushi...buaji in a minute gave Arnav heart attack on talking about Khushi's marriage...poor guy is having tough time...yes yes bitwa you had to hurry up...varna the speed you are moving Khushi will run away with Bankelal ji...Akash should be given payment for correcting NK's hindi...Mittu is so cute...haha the parrot had vomited every word Khushi had confided in her...good...the parrot too has funny bone it's due to the humor Mittu pulled on them...Man mein laddoo phoota...yes Mittu parrot ji...ASR ke man bohot sare laddoo phote hain...Khushi has a akal to think now that he is not child to get lost but she is the one who was trying to find him way out in the market at first place...itni jaldi bhool gayi...Khushi is explaining him things like he is child that in wedding he will not get his pusta, sandwich lol...ASR is really a good manipulator here...lo doosri love story bhi shuru hogayi aur ASR-Khushi se aage ek kadam nikal bhi gayi...ASR has gone ahead and gave loud kiss on her palm, he never let gave a chance, did he?

Khushi you are asking for too much from Devi Maya it is all her doings that your Raizada ji is here for you, and will only return to Delhi with his certain Khushi Kumari Gupta claiming as Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada...her dreams were amusing one...Khushi ek unique piece hai...only for ASR...hahaha by hiding her palm as if he will restrain himself from kissing her, bitiya he can kiss your cheeks too or is he wants your lips too but yeh sab kaun Khushi ko samjhayega...

Khushi you asked for it, now see he had kissed your cheek, maina kaha tha na...ASR ji never will leave his chance, poor girl tried all in vain to wipe his smirk but instead made him laugh with her statement that her face is not municipal corporation road for him to travel as he pleases...okay Khushi had blasted on Arnav and ran away too...now what will ASR do to make her agree to come to work for him...poor him...he had to do something soon and I don't think Khushi will agree so easily...well let us see what ASR's shatir dimaag comes up now...

All in all I never wanted to stop reading and wanted to read more and more...will be waiting for you to update next update eagerly...😊


About your other stories Keeping Khushi touched my heart to never be erased, His smiling girl is too good to be missed...and knowing Khushi too.. it will be too hard for me to comment all the chapters in them so I can say only one thing 'Truly heart touching*...Di I have one request for you two...can anyone of you from two (smita Di and Rulama Di *don't know your real name*) please think about posting Keeping Khushi and His smiling girl and other series of Khushi in Mye Duniya...please think about it,...I would like the Med people too to read your wonderful creation...just a request...I'll not nag you for it...just think about it once...please do not get offend on my request because it is my heart core wish to see my fellow buddies too to read the mind blowing creation of yours...simple, beautiful and exquisite...😊


Please do visit this thread too of Finding Khushi...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95758873



Sweetheart, can you send me a PM about Mye Duniya? I am not familiar with it.

Thank u for your wonderfully long comments. I enjoyed reading both of them.😃

Smita
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