Smitar's: Marrying Khushi#1 Part 9(1,2) Pg 125 (4/11)Link to#2 on Pg 1

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lujainshaikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

amazing part 👍🏼 👏 ...manju nd aman nd anjali's convo ws gud...but khushi as usual the non stop chatter box 😆...nd manjuji ws laughing lyk crazy 😆...well even i started smiling while reading 😃...nd last but not the least..arnav scaring khushi 🤣 🤣..update the nxt part soon 😉

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Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

Really enjoying this take on ASR falling in love and his need to find her and possess her. Of Chamkeeli tho phas ghayi ASR's trap mein. Love how you are portraying a carefree khushi who has no guilt, no heavy loads on her shoulders. She is simply being herself. I am hooked. Count me in as one of your stalkers!

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parjay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

just came across it.. luved the concept.. wow...

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Hetal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

All I want to say I LOVE YOU AND The Update...👏👏👏👏👏👏,

Gumnaam hai koi...😆...

Manjuji ke naam yeh paigaam..

ASR had picked a namoona for himself!..😆..

Namoone ka sardaar hai toh namoone ki sardaarni ko hi choonega na...😉

Bahut hi mauja aa gayaa Smitaji...Me waiting for the Friday...

take care Smitaji..
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Amrita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Smitechi...

Super...😃

and Manju..lol...loved her.. Really Khushi is a namoona...Perfect Namoona for Arnav.. 😉

and loved Arnav teasing Khuhsii... and how she clutched his arms due to fear...

Will be waiting for the next update chechii...😊

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leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

hurrayyy she is finally in sheesh mahal. haunted house. 😆
n manjuji is awesome woman. 😆 ASR needs a personality transplant. 😆 but still these two are more than enough for each other just the way they are. 😊

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PSharada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Loved the way Arnav teased Khushi. He has her trapped hook, line and sinker. Can't wait to see how their love story is going to go from here. And Manju, Anjali and Aman are going to help ASR in his pursuit. Lovely update.

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RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Edited on page 93 😳

Part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94831624

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

That was hilarious
Manju's reactions were amazing
Poor lady

I can't believe Khushi fell for the ghost story
This month is going to very funny
I'm looking forward to it

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Arshipriya16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#670

Di really hillarious update not only Manju but I was also laughing like hell.
Muze to bus yahi gana yaad aa raha tha.
Ha muze pyar hua pyar hua devi maiyya.
ha muze pyar hua pyar hua devi maiyya
ha muze pyar hua devi maiyya
bhari barat main ektarfa hua devi maiyya.

Aur ye for Arnav's changed life bcz khushi's appearence.

Tune zindagi me aake zindagi hooo...
zindagi badal di.
tune pyaar me girake zindagi hooo...
zindagi badal di.