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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow excellent update loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 9



Next day morning arnav wake up to find his wife no where to be seen.he got ready and went down to have his breakfast. He searched for kushi who appread 5 minutes later with dish in her hand. She served food and stood there looking after others. Her belly was touching the table and tht was bathering arnav. To his eyes it looks like she was putting weight on her belly.
Kushi'called arnav. Dont stand like tht. It may hurt the baby'said the father of the baby.

Kushi nods her head.

Arnav left for the office.

When he came tht evening his family was around kushi and they explained tht she has fainted and payal and nani caught het before she falls.
This is the third time she fainted' said payal.

Arnav didnt said a word and stood there watching his wife.
Kushi stood up and went to go to her room. When she was half the stairs arnav picked her up in his arms.


Aftet dinner the family retired to their rooms.

'I can do this now. We both r ok with ourselfs and i m going to do this. I dont care wht she wll do or how she will react. Arnav start preparing for his task and kushi wondered wht his crazy husband was upto.
Arnav simply removed the bathroom door inside lock and went to throught it out in the store room.

'What ... why have u removed the bathroom lock asked a stunned kushi.


U were fainting and u wont listen to me if i said dont close the door' said arnav
Kushi mouth was a big O and arnav continued
'What is the need of lock as we both only lives in here' smirked arnav.

Kushi was red with shy.

'DM what have u done to him'thought kushi.

Tht night also was same like the last night and arnav was wide awake watching his wife's beauty and his child. He kissedher belly.




Will continue soon. But i need a clarification AM I WRITING MATURE CONTENTS? PLS let me know when i cross the limit. Tks Barun sarite for ur valuable suggestion
Edited by diya33 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
wow very interesting
i love to read it further
pm me pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
its a nice update and you didnt cross the limit till now
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Superb update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
u r nt writing mature content
arnav is changing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
loved d story...
u r not writing mature content


PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I read all the parts in one go the story is really interesting. Yes I too thought that in the serial Anjali was over pampered and always felt sorry for Khushi .
When a women is pregnant she always wants the attention, the pampering of her husband.

Coming to the mature content I dont see any mature content so no need to worry 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nyc...loved d story so far ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome story
pls pm me when u update

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