Mistake update on 19/11/13 on page no16 - Page 6

Originally posted by: sarita_barun

<font color="#9933CC" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Lovely updates...
Arnav is feeling guilty for sure.
He wants to make sure she's okay.
He's making her feel loved.

Some guides for you.
After the first chapter on the first page, you should put the page numbers of the other chapters so it would be easy for readers to find it.
Another pointer is that you should put the 'Chapter... ' number at the beginning of each new part.
And liking the comments and sometimes replying to some of their questions would make the readers feel connected with you.
Other than that you are doing a fab job from the story's side.</font>

Tks a lot for ur valuable suggestion and guidance. I m actually updating on my mobile bez i m away from home and pc and its not comfortable to use mobile. And i forgot to write the updates page no. I dnt want chapters bez my updates were very small which wasnt consider as chapter. Final and imp anwers is i want to answer the readers question through my story and imp i dont want to demand feedback for next update if the reader likes the story means i m happy and their comments means a lot but at the same time if they didnt like it or comments then no issue. Its their wish. . I have very little time so i m trying my best. Tks a lot for ur guidance and i have done the change. Tks and do guide and suggest me in future.

Tk u sooop muchhh

Awesome update. Waiting off next update. Loved it.

Nice story!

I had always thought that Anjali was over-pampered in the serial.

Chapter 8


It is morning and kushi wakes up from her sleep and what she felt and saw paralysed her. She was naked and her and her husband was kissing her belly. 'Arnavji' kushi's screaming brought arnav attention to his wife. U U U 'kushi stuterred.

Both of them stared at each for good five minutes and arnav continued hid work. Kushi simply lay on her back staring at arnav who was kissing her belly whole night
He didnt slept. Kushi could see and feel tht. 'Oh tht was why i felt petals touching feeling the whole night. Tht was arnavji lips. Ohh' kushi mumbled to herself. After almost an hour arnav 's lips parted from her belly and a naked kushi ran to the bathroom.


When kushi came out of bathroom arnav was ready to go office. He stood there watching kushi while talking to someone.


Yes dr' fix the date'said arnav.


Kushi stoped what she was doing and stood motionlessely. What? Dr? After all that he want to abort? No. Tht cant be' kushi thought loudly.

Kus kushi' arnav's desparate voice brought kushi back to sense.
'We are having check next week. We already missed pregnancy and dating test. I dnt want to be careless about U AND MY CHILD. Yesterdays scan reports wll come today. Ok' said a sincere husband.


After breakfast arnav left after advising KSR but when he came back in the evening with all the reports he didnt see anyone in the living room. He went to his room and kept the reports safely and went to his di's room.
The sight infront of him killed him to the core. His wife was cleaning a mess where as his whole family was with di and his son. Arnav didnt heard anyone calling his name. He went to his pregnant wife at took her job in his hand. After cleaning arnav carried his wife to his room not caring about gasps from his family.

Kushi simply stared at arnav who was trembling. She was confused. But arnav removed her dress and starts checking and kissing her. Now kushi understood arnav's desparation to check her and their child. Once he was confident that both were fine arnav took a deep breath. They are fine' thought arnav.

He gave her nightcloths and asked her to change it. 15 Minutes later arnav called his family and said about kushi's pregnancy. His family asked a thousand questions and arnav answered them patiently. They belived his lie that kushi and arnav hide it due to anji and anji as usual clug to his brother. But her brother have his eyes only for kushi.


At 9 'o clock everyone retired to their room after scolding and pampering kushi and arnav. Arnav gave kushi her dinner and milk and prepared for the night.

Like last night kushi was bare and arnav was kissing and caressing her belly.

'Im sorry' said arnav. His voice was norhing but full of gulit.

Kushi simply notes her head. That night arnav slept peacefully hugging his wife's belly.

Nice update

awesome story