Mistake update on 19/11/13 on page no16

Chapter 1

Apple of the eye, Queen of RM was having breakfast and kushi was serving food.
Di I m leaving for office' said arnav looking into shyam's direction.

Arnav left for work. The day went on. In the evening Arnav was back from the office chats with his sister

Kushi ji. Pls give me water asked anjali.

When kushi enters to give water the scene in front of her made her longing high. Anjali was sitting with her head on arnav's shoulders. Lucky woman kushi thought to herself.



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After dinner everyone starts retiring to their respective rooms and went to drop 9 month pregnant anji.



Later at 10 p.m kushi completed her work and went to her room. She felt little weak and she know she should rest. She lays near a sleeping arnav and remembers about the past. ASR knowing the fact about shyam and both him and kushi hiding the fact from others including his di. Lone tear fallen from kushi eyes thinking of arnav acceptint kushi and their life together.


Though arnav loved her kushi stills knows tht his di wll be his soul. She wants to share a great news with him but he did had time only for his sister. Kushi looks into arnav'sleeping form and said' arnavji u r going to be a father'. And u don't even have time to listen to this and kushi starts crying silently.



Next day morning

I wll update tmrw. How is the story. Rubbish
Comments pls.



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CHAPTER 1 on Page 1
CHAPTET 2 on page 3
CHAPTER 3 on page 4
CHAPTET 4 on page 5
CHAPTER 5 on page 6
CHAPTER 6 on page 8
CHAPTER 7 on page 10




CHAPTER 8 on page 12
CHAPTER 9 on page 14
CHPTER 10 on page 16

Interesting start. Waiting for next update.

Interesting start. But I don't understand if Arnav has accepted Khushi as his wife and also consummated their marriage, he should've given his time, love and care to Khushi because he loves her. Why would Khushi long for Arnav as if he is ignoring her? This should not happen. Maybe Arnav is doing this unknowingly but he should acknowledge this. Otherwise the story will be lacking logic. Just a suggestion. Didn't mean to be rude. I am sorry if I've hurt you. I hope you continue soon :)

poor khushi

Wow that's some start..! plz do continue and PM me when u do that! :)

Really confused with Arnav's behavior...He had accepted Khusi as his wife and consumated the marriage and still being so cold and aloof???????

Interesting

Chapter 2

Next morning arnav wake up from sleep and goes to meet his di. He and his sis were having a serious argument over the gender and names of the baby.

Kushi eye lids opned and arnav was nowhere in the room. Kushi scolding herself mentally for sleeping this long went to take bath.

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After preparing breakfast kushi goes to call arnav whom she didn't even saw from the morning. Not finding in their she goes to di's room and hears both sis and bro arguing for baby's room and cots.

Arnav felt kushi presense and called her to sit with them. Kushi nods her head saying she is comfortable were she is now.
'I can never come to ur close' and not wll be in prime preference. It wll always di who is ur world arnavji' thought kushi sadly.



Once the breakfast was over arnav left for work. Kushi work went on as usual.


Arnav came from office thinking of kushi. He wants to talk tp kushi about something importent.

He went to his room and finds kushi sitting near pool deep in thought. He goes and sits with her.

I want to talk to u' told arnav.

What he wants to talk. Is he going to talk about us or did he.. he.. no tht cant happen. He cannot fonds out tht i m pregnant. Or is he going to ask srry for neglecting me for almost a month after di illness. Yes di become severly weak after our.our first night as husband and wife and arnav cursed himself for anji illness.


Kushi thought process came to end when arnav read out the list he was preparing for di's delivery. Kushi listen to him carefully. After a while they both went to join with family for a chat.

Kushi went to kitchen to prepare milk for them. She hears the chat. Why arnavji is all the time thinking of her. How it would feels if he treats me like this' kushi thought. She suddenly felt fear tht what she wll do if he neglects her after knowing her pregnancy.

Yes. He wll neglect. He once told the family tht he won't starts his family till di settledowns. No i can't abort or bear neglecting my child. I may come second to everyone inculding my husband but i can't let my child feel tht way' kushi thoughts went on.
She finally decides tht she wont say anything about her pregnancy to anyone fearing tht they may ask to abort the child bez of and for anji. So she decided to keep the news with herself.


How is the update. Feedback pls. So tht i can improve.

its good but y arnav is doing this can't he see khushi sadness
a person who can feel khushi but don't her love