Mistake update on 19/11/13 on page no16 - Page 3

it didn't justified his behavior towards khushi can't he know that she is pregnant
it seems little unreal
not seems real

Very nice update...its high time arnav know about khushis pregnancy...

Nice update

i don't understand one thing Khusi is 75 days pregnant why nobody noticed that? I want a good apology frm Arnav for this neglect

Amazing update..hope arnav realizes his mistake before it's too late.

cant he see she's pregnant??

Chapter 5



Arnav entered his bedroom and came to bed after bath.
Kushi gave his medicines and goes to prepare herself for the night.

Both were laying on the bed and kushi wad facing the wall and arnav wad facing her wife. After sometime kushi felt hot breath on her ear and neck. Arnav slowly turned her to face him and claimed her lips. At first she gave no response but slowly arnav got his way.

They lay together barely kissed each other. Arnav prepared kushi to make love. But arnav felt something else. Kushi's hold said to go very slow. She was actually nervous. Arnav didnt know tht reason. But that night was the best night for arnav.

Next days sun rays hit the world and everyone heard a loud cry of a child. Everyone rushed to anji room to find anji's son anant crying and a sleepless anji tried to console him. Raizada family rushed to the hospital and dr said them tht the child is having intestine problem and need treatment for a while.

Days went on like tht. All family members took care of the child and a sad mother. In this whole drama kushi was forgoten.

After a month everything become normal and arnav too got his normal life back.


Ya. I m going home early. I want to be with my wife. Wht a great night i had and devasting gap. Uhhh. No not anymore' arnav thought to himself.
But in RM everything was oppiste. Kushi fainted in the morning and akash caught her before she hits the ground. Kushi said to him tht was bez of tiredness and went to buaji's home for rest.

Arnav who didnt realised his wife till now felt missing her. But he did talk to her and gave her the needed space.

After a week arnav accompanied his sis to a temple. And picked up kushi who looked fat and glowing. After dinner every one had a small chat while kushi and payal cleaned the kitchen. After completing work kushi went to take bath.

Arnav came to their room a little later and was shocked anf frozen near the recliner. The door was closed and inside the room infront arnav stood his love trying and fails to catch the sliping towel.

Kushi' came a husky voice from arnav and kushi lost her hold and the towel wad pooled near her feet. Kushi stood shocked and nude to her husband.

At first arnav was on cloud but when his eyes crossed her breast and on her belly he was blank.


Feedback pls. Need guidance to correct mistakes in my story mistake. Y i named this as mistake is bez its my mistake

its good but how will arnav react now

what will arnav reaction?//