arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

This is fabulous...as always...enjoyed watching it...yes, watching...not reading...it felt like I was watching a drama...his dream...bitter memory of childhood...both flashback of ArShi...their romance...their fight...a protective brother...angry Arnav...understanding Khushi...amazing moment between husband-wife...beautiful family time...everything is just superb...loved it so much...thanks for the pm...

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IssK.

@IssK.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: indi52

and i see issk in neat black. kya hua? asr red not in vogue anymore? so lovely of you to read it so quickly, i know work is all over you... when did you find the time? i of course, posted at some 4.30 am or something. junoon yesterday... have to have to update, so sat among packing cases and wrote, then ran away from a party and wrote... no way was i sleeping without sweet sixteen in place.

you like? smooth? maybe i was yearning for that. i am falling in love with this man and this woman, i hope not a single false note or insincere adjective from me mars these guys. have to say, it is absorbing to write fiction. scary too.

thanks, dear one.

ASR RED HAMESHA! Wait till I get near my mac again...abhi ke liye neat boriyat se kaam chala lijiye! I wanted to look at SOHARA's gorgeous new gif on BFTP, to stare at it once more on my way home from a long gruelling meeting so I logged in ...and found your pm about this update! Toh kaise nahin aate janab!! Enjoyed thoroughly, every bit made me feel things...it was most calming.

Baaki baaten phir...abhi chalte hain. Bye from ze core of my bhatakti aatmaa!

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Thanks for the PM

There is so much happening in this update a bit of past,present and that dream where I felt that you were referring to his mamma,never thought it's khushi.

you incorporated the attawala scene and then the live in proposal 😉

?In this update you proved all our imaginations wrong😛 and i just had to reread it to fully imbibe.

ber+lips =kiss, kya baat hai? ber wont be the same henceforth😉

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Superb update 👏

Love the way Arnav apologize to Khushi by bringing soar plums.

I thought the background of this story is the same that of drama, but it is a little different and I like that change. Khushi and Arnav met in diffrent circumstances and how their relation proceed.

Arnav is taking Khushi for honeymoon, is it Lucknow or some where else.

The dream was so weird, Khushi dress as bride was shot. I hope this dream won't five true.

Plz write something about doctor verma.

Update soon.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: akankha
wonderful update...

akankha,

thanks so much for reading. 😳

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: rati123
Really cute update. Though I wonder when will Arnav learn to control his anger.

hey rati,

thanks so much... learn to control his temper? 😆 will he ever get there?

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: sohara
Indi, loved this romance full update. though ASR's unpredictable anger plays like a villain. i was annoyed on him. But my angel Khushi didn't take it in her mind. Ok, I'm not a forgiving soul like her. She knows her husband very well. She can feel his anxiety. He has become more possessive of his di after shyam incident. But how cum he just said, Anjali is only his di. Anyway, if Khushi can forgive him, I don't have a problem. i'm happy for anjali.
I'm surprised that ASR plucked ber for khushi! Oh Gosh what love can do to a person? Absolutely loved this line
it was amazing what one could do with a ber and a pair of willing lips.

Loved the anecdote of ASR's childhood. He was always a man of principal since his childhood.
"Who prays for mom?"
really what a sensible thought!

I was blushing and giggling, when ASR kissed Khushi in the kitchen. And the most interesting thing is Khushi was responsive too. And when he took her to their eternal heaven, Khushi became oblivious of everything. ASR couldn't bridle his passion for her anymore. He even wanted to have a live in relationship with khushi. But how orthodox Khushi can do something what the society doesn't permit.
In your tale, their relationship was more deeper before marriage. I'm getting curious now, how they got married. Your vision seems not same like the show.

Going to honey moon is an excellent idea. Looking forward for more hot romance in the honeymoon. Make your blog ready guruji. i want some sizzling, passionate romance.

thanks so much, sohara for that lovely commenta nd feedback

so you liked? so ber was good?

and you want me to write blog full of ahem stuff.

you are the cutest you knwo? incorrigible... there';s an asr in you ha ha.

which is why you'd never have forgiven him... so you think... but you know pyaar is a damn starnge animal... never know what you'll do next when you're in it.

i felt, this time she would forgive him, just as she forgave him when he apologised for all the horrors earlier. she is much more secure about his love now. but there will be occasions when it will be tougher to get her to let go of hurt and anger. woh bhi dekhenge humlog. 😆

she also knows when it comes to di he is faaar from normal.

and she is a girl who can genuinely empathise with others...she was even blamed by him for calling doc verma, when she hadn't... but it was an imp day for di, she did not wish to spoil it.

his real apology is perhaps inside him in realising how much she does care for his family, an extension of her care for him. he is also thoda idiot... learning slowly to trust people.

and bolo bolo, isn't he sweet for getting her those ber. i can tell you the thorns scratched him... they used to scratch me when i used to go plucking them in the ridge area around my school campus.

funny how as i wrote i took him there, that place is forever fixed in my head with boulders and ber... i had not made any connection with kkg till he stood there and looked around...

glad you liked his childhood memories... wasn't easy ever.

must find out abit more about our khushi.

but honeymoon is nigh, sigh sigh.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: jg12
Absolutely beautiful. It is so enjoyable to read your stories. Why does Khushi give in easily - Arnav does not have to make any effort ...

hi jg12,

thank you so much.

well khushi doesn't always give in easily, but thsi time she did. i think she'd become secure in his love much more... the time after kidnap when he'd been nasty to her on account of di,shehad gone into a passive aggressive anger... but this time... too many things have happened, his coma, shyam's resurfacing, and she genuinely wants to see di happy... plus she reads him better every day. she knows he raves and rants if he senses the slightest threat to di, but then he does calm down, he does realise. and fear not she will not always be this easy on him... ha ha.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: sskaug25
Wonderful update. Loved it how he plucked ber for her . but he still need to have a control over his anger. thanks for the pm .

hi sskaug25

thank you so much... that ber was out of nowhere, i used to go plucking ber in school, it was located in the aravali ridge area in delhi, suddenly it came rushing into the story... 😳 so glad it worked.

he and his gussa, soulmates na? 😆