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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

You are a poet. I should have known. I really should have known. What imagery! What beauty!

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

That was some moving poetry
I am so impressed, Delilah, oh wow!
That you can do more than a story
Here, as a reward, take this bow

Sorry for the rotten doggerel, now you know - I can't write to save my life. but truly, that poem was very moving. You certainly have another string to your bow!

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

Is that a kiss?

Kiss of forgiveness, a kiss where two pairs of lips move in rhythm as old as time itself, a kiss that gives goose bumps...wow this is poetry written in prose format.

A kiss it is, indeed.

I'm jealous coz God has given one person all the talent🤗

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Another gem from Delilah.. beautiful!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

That sure summer them up

And so beautifully

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nnhk

@nnhk

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

abhi i was taking in the wonderful writer in you and now you come out BAM with this poetic stuff...

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Even better.

Was this poetry in prose?

What a beautiful way to describe a kiss!

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Loved it especially this line...

Did you notice the way your lips rhyme, and rhyme so perfectly, with mine?

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

Quoting my favourite line,

"I will chase you like a raindrop chases another on the windows of a drenched car. We will meet and fall together. But oh beloved, wouldn't it be the most lucid of falls?"

The whole piece was so poetic.

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

i loved it especially that rain drop wala part..

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