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riti4u

@riti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

beautiful OS di😃...loved sanka devi attribute in khushi ...her imaginations wid arnav jee...and arnav jee too...😳

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wiwy

@wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

⭐️Indi 🤗

Gosh! A classic ! ⭐️

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Thnx for d pm.

Happy friendship day !!!

Thnx so much for this awesome OS brightening this day.

Khushi is so into Arnav everythng seems to remind her of Arnav n rather want Arnav.

First her channa nothing more tasty bt no there's somthng Arnav's kiss.

Then she remembers her imagining herself wearing a yellow green sari n him callin her a delhi autorickshaw.

Khushi sees everyone rushing to help her at d store n then again se remembers d movie well ms gupta found Richard Gere interesting.

Then she refused red green n yellow it ws as if d whole universe ws conspiring to remind her of Arnav. silly girl Arnav dint een knw u hd such a dream to make d sales girl suggest those colors.

Finally she forgot arnav knws her feels wht she feels n knws when u r calling him. So he made d call where u almost stammered n gvE unconvincing ans Ms KKGSR so obviously knwing wht u r feeling Ur LG come 2 you n felt wht r felt n loved ur subtle hints. hell he even knew abt tht dream of urs bt he called u sexy nt an auto rickshaw. Sankadevi hs under estimated her LG when it comes 2 her.

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meem17

@meem17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Loved it
Thanks for the os

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Can you really stop thinking of your husband, Khushi? Can you really .. when he is not in your system but he IS your system? And he figures out just what was not right in the system and comes running to fix it.

Indi! Only you can do this. What a brilliant description of the chana experience! Whoa! Chana turns into something else once popped into the mouth .. just like everything else turns into something else when your universe circles around only one & one person.

Thanks for making him get her a Red Beetle! And also taking her to the boutique. These are the things that were supposed to be parts of their lives and we never got to see.

Edited by Omoraboti - 11 years ago

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

"There's no worse hell than to remember vividly a kiss that never occurred."

Glad that Arnav had the better sense to listen to his feelings and come after his wife.

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divsarunfan

@divsarunfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

happy friendship day😃,superb os di👏

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Smita

@..Smita..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Wow Indi!

I'm so glad that u PMed me about it!

This is a beautiful,well written,dhak-dhak inducing OS!

Perfect,from start to finish!

Stuff that I loved the most: PaYash off to LA for a private holiday(good for them!)

Anjali going to management school,Khushi comparing Arnav to chane.

Like "all roads lead to Rome" all her thoughts led her to Arnavji!

Her reminescing of her first visit to the boutique with Arnav.

Sundar,susheel hero!

The mirror & bead curtain reminded of one of my favourite scenes:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aAK_hH0dvms

I so knew Arnav was going to be there.

The kiss scene and the description of the scenes thereafter was superb!

Aap toh chane se bhi zyaada achchhe hain! Trust KKGSR to say that!

Loved the ending! And also the note at the end.

Thanks for the PM! Consider me as a fan of ur writing from today. So please PM me whenever u write anything in future!

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indi52

@indi52

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: riti4u
beautiful OS di😃...loved sanka devi attribute in khushi ...her imaginations wid arnav jee...and arnav jee too...😳

hi riti,

thanks, sir... and so cute of you to say you like arnav jee... bahut mushkil to like that man. 😆

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indi52

@indi52

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ..Smita..
Wow Indi!

I'm so glad that u PMed me about it!

This is a beautiful,well written,dhak-dhak inducing OS!

Perfect,from start to finish!

Stuff that I loved the most: PaYash off to LA for a private holiday(good for them!)

Anjali going to management school,Khushi comparing Arnav to chane.

Like "all roads lead to Rome" all her thoughts led her to Arnavji!

Her reminescing of her first visit to the boutique with Arnav.

Sundar,susheel hero!

The mirror & bead curtain reminded of one of my favourite scenes:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aAK_hH0dvms

I so knew Arnav was going to be there.

The kiss scene and the description of the scenes thereafter was superb!

Aap toh chane se bhi zyaada achchhe hain! Trust KKGSR to say that!

Loved the ending! And also the note at the end.

Thanks for the PM! Consider me as a fan of ur writing from today. So please PM me whenever u write anything in future!

so on friendship day, an old friend comes to make my day.

thank you so much, smita.

i was in a most khushi mood when i wrote, her sanaka is unbeatable, once in away mere mortals like me get a taste of it. arnav ji better than chane... ha ha, the poor sophisticated tycoon... i had fun.

love that beads and mirror curtain scene you added, i was thinking of the terrifically moving one in the store the day she wore a red lehenga and he was out to hurt her, checking the price tag, being generally mean... thought it would be nice to put another memory, a sexy one in there... the first one too i adored, he had tears in his eyes at the end.

glad you liked it all, thanks so much for reading... and promptly, unlike your old di. hugs.🤗 will certainly pm you should something else come along.

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