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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Woww really loved the startin ! Brilliant collab … lukin forward … congratz guys

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

res...

travelling, will read once I reach hostel tomorrow, network kinda sucks here...

happy for both you😃

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Pari(hope I can call u that😳), I didn't know that u were a writer, my bad luck, missed ur stories for so long. I will read all of them soon:)

Coming to the update, I seriously loved reading it.

The whole thing took me back to PayAsh marriage.

Very well-written

waiting for the next one:)

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Asvati

@Asvati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

😳
that was so cute...

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Amazingly good. Cudnt be more better. Woow dis was sooo amazing. Very well written. Cudnt be more better. Keep writing

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Awesome such a sweet Os! Continue soon!

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Beautiful OS !!! loved it..

thanks for pm 😊

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arshifan91

@arshifan91

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Nice OS and the Arshi scenes were beautifully blended.😊

But i feel u have left the story as an open end for the readers

Thanks Farah for the PM.

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

That was really sweet and cute

loved it too much

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Nostalgic Moment!!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Wow, this is a fantastic and superb idea for a collaboration, by two amazing and brilliant writers.

I'm so excited to read your collaboration work, especially recapturing beautiful scenes from the serial.

The first update was absolutely mind blowing and outstanding,

Loved the two scenes you wrote, they complemented each other so well.

An angry and jealous Arnav is always a treat to read and you wrote his character perfect,

Loved Arnav's possessive side and the way he was questioning Khushi was superb,

Awww loved the cute moment in the bedroom it was sweet and intimate,

The flash back was awesome, you even included the amazing dialogue "kyun farak paradhta hai".

Absolutely loved the update, thanks for the you tube links as well.

An amazing read from start to finish and the update was written exceptionally well.

Eager to read the next part,

Continue soon please and Thanks for the PM,

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