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Sabrina the Witch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: indi52
hi everyone,

i am seeing arshi has 151 ready, and sohara's take calls, also sohara and isskr's comments on mine... mind fuzzy, shall return in a bit to reply, and read. in the meantime something rather sweet happened to me, i gio to this fb fanpage called team sobtians, they asked me to write a short one on the boy's journey... me clueless, wondering what to write, then just went for it (another version of just do it and just loop i as per issk's suggestion), they posted it today, seems rather liked... i am thrilled of course... so thought i'd show off a bit. if you'd like to read just go to the team sobtians fb a... it's under "aisa hota ha," and the last little tagline is not mine, the admin wrote it sweetly. if you don't wish to read it, also fine, just wanted to let you all know. and i wouldn't like to post that whole thing here... since ha ha we're not a barun fan page...

Indi ...I had already read it in another forum... They loved it sooo much that they posted it on another forum with full credit to Indrani Robbins. 🤗 I simply commented that I Loved YOU 🤣 (your writing and you as a person ) ... You don't know how big a fan base you have...

Here is one of the comments on your piece...

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Aasudi wrote :

if words other than 'I love u' can depict the love to a person
definitely this one is the masterpiece of those words

beautifully written

to barun I wud love to say 'aisa kyun hota hai jab bhi aap humare paas aate hai to lagta hai ki humari duniya mein roshni aagai hai?'

'aisa hota hai, barun'; is all I want to say and loved the most in the writing:*cpd*:

wish him a happy and healthy life ahead:)

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supriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: indi52
hi all, posted a little early today, am traipsing out. hope you gys can handle an early dose of the scorpion.

announcement
many of our friends and blasters are away from the thread these days. and most will join back after ramzan or thereabouts. without everyone around it isn't much fun and we certainly cannot not have almost all here for episode 170 and the payal akash wedding days. in view of this, we've decided to go for a week's break. thanks, horizon, for bringing thsi up and suggesting a break. actually, this will give us a little time to practice our twirl, flip, fly, swing, dance... before we get into the tango, what.

we will start an extension thread to 15 when needed. episode 170 will be posted on 12 august, monday on thread #16. wishing all of you a great rest and practice week.

Indi I love you...Thank you soo much for the break...i definitely needed one to catch up...
you really r awesome as a captain 😃
nd read your article commented it on the fb page 😳

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Sabrina the Witch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: indi52

hi sab,

sorry, i didn't actually. jumped to 160 upon seeing the huge gap from 147 to there. but am filling in gradually. that shut up episode is just too good. let me see if i can write it off tonight. will pm you. so so sweet of you to write that. and i know you are our stealth reader... hume pata chal jata hai. 🤗

Thank you... Hum Intezar Karengay ...

Love you

BTW, I have been scripting from IPK ( cos these are the only Hindi lines I can speak) in random, out of context way... So my husband burnt food while cooking and said " wish someone would help me" looking at me through the corner of his eyes... and I said " duniya itni bedardi hai, jetni Pahela tha..." and walked away... 🤣 ... I really love that episode !

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supriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#804

episode 161

slap.

- i love the diff texture you've given both...its too good 👏

stick.

lovely episode, clipping along toward the big sangeet muqabla. the haar-jeet/win-lose conversation of 160 has led to khushi declaring war on the "saamnewala." no, not medha and lata as buaji wonders... but the ladkewaalon, aka the boy's side... more specifically, that laad governor.

"iss jang mein jeet... humari hogi." in this war... victory shall be ours, prophetic words from kkg. she will indeed completely destroy his fort no-faraq and conquer its most precious treasure, his dil😳... the poor man will keep thinking his dimag can resist the assault.

but what struck me really this episode was its tenor, its tone and texture. comedy was today's chosen genre. after the break up with la, which saw fairly serious and intense stuff, an element of tragedy even in la's story, a deliberate attempt at lightness, before romance sets in and makes it all densely emotional. this episode was laurel hardy, charlie chaplin, physical comedy, very thappad-atta... slapstick, as illustrated above :).

karan goddwani and sanaya irani were impeccable in their utter senselessness👍🏼. suddenly in the middle of it, a mosquito, why? then the slap... wonder if the writers came up with all of this while toying with the word "slapstick." how to get a slap... why, thwack a mosquito, of course. where? on asr's... cheek? great, so we have physical contact😆... heat, passion, drama, but all around a ridiculous reason... then a completely corny word from a cute, "paagal" man, loveria😳. a little comedy act with a pithy message... the heart of it, as it were. a fairly classic structure i thought.

"100 chuhe khake bittu chale haj ko... " when payal demurred at the suggestion of competition for sangeet, khushi hit back, after eating a hundred mice, the cat goes on pilgrimage?!! apparently payal had done nagin dance at someone's sangeet. snake dance. anyone remember the snake dance from bride and prejudice? 😆. seems up north this is quite a thing at shaadi functions. and maybe by 161, writers knew many call shyam snakewa? so a little joke? 😆

khushi giving buaji a little push to get her twirling and in the mood for dance, and then leaping around doing her trademark thumkas with a few well chosen nagin moves was hard not to smile at.

from here we went to rm where the three ladies there were in deep talk about shaadi, the wedding atmosphere is building up. seems madhubala ji the dance instructor has taken umbrage and decided to ditch the raizadas😛; no problem, says, nani ji, she will teach the steps, she's a dancer after all😉. and the moaning groaning mami ji, cheated out of a rich daughter-in-law by the vagaries of love, counters, "are you suwar (sure)?" suwar as in pig. again that almost physical humour. mami ji's mouth is a comedic device in effect, even nk can't quite match her tempo and range. dialogue writers obviously had a special loveria for this englissiya speaking lady. "publically humra itna insalat mat kijiye..." awww.

what were those two pickle jars doing sitting in front of nani ji, i wondered. did they mean something? happiness? joy? good fortune? usually, we find pickle jars at gh.

"aisa koi nahin hai jo naach nahin sakta uss laad governor ko chhorkar, " there's no one who doesn't know how to dance apart from that laad gov, khushi mutters as she walks into rm, nk in hot pursuit... suddenly, mosquito attack... and the leaping, jumping, trying to kill mosquito moves begin, almost choreographed. nk of course thinks these are real "murda" (corpse) when he means "mudra."

nanhe ji thinks khushi ji is teaching steps, follows around trying to replicate them and when she says that's not what she was doing... he's insistent, holds her hand and tells her to quickly teach him some.

of course, someone's eyes fall on on them just then. a lovely little peak at jealousy flaring. man in frenzy, loses track of call. woman completely unaware of this momentous event.

when nk realises what has khushi prancing... "machhar yaani mosquito?" he worries, "oh god agar mujhe lovaria ho gayee toh..." oh g what if i get loveria (of course, he means malaria)? and in typical "nri" hyuk style a rush to get the mosquito repellent...

leaving kkg alone by the poolside intent on catching and killling all the mosquitoes of the universe. clapping hands together, jumping up and down, peering strangely into things. no wonder when the man sees her, he has that slightly incredulous air, asks, what are you doing? "kya kar rahi ho tum?" the "unbelievable" thing in his voice just below the surface wanting to burst out.

she looks uncomfortable, then as if resolved looks up only to notice...

"shhh, bilkul chup...!!!" shhh, absolutely quiet... drama queen, "aapke bhale ke liye hai... kuch mat kahiye... aur hiliye bhi mat..." this is for your own good (always suspect any sentence that begins thus)... don't say a thing... and don't move.

"listen you..." he starts...

and slap. thwack, phatak... the deed is done... kkg has slapped asr. tight. on left cheek.

shock. eyes growing angry. jaw hardening. asr music. dangerously. swaggering. in.👏

"woh... chala gaya... matlab... ud gaya... machhar chal kaise sakta hai..." that... went... i mean... flew away... how can a mosquito walk... classic kkg dialogwa. sanaya brilliant right through.

asr advnaces... a signature piece of this crazy romance. she begins to step back and nk arrives... the man is beside himself with anger...

some more mad talk, then a loud, vicious, "shut... up." new year is all about shutting up it seems.😉

when nk speaks up for khushi, everything comes to a head... jealousy does not bring out the best in asr...

"aur tum abhi issi waqt yahan se chali jaao..." and you, leave this place now, he turns on khushi. when she starts apologising with, "dekhiye, hum dil se (oh what a reminder of the hot tea by the cool pool day)...," he loses it, "i said get OUT."

khushi comes flying down... slap echoing in her ear.

he will veto sangeet talk... absolutely furious. is it only that bizarre thappad that bothers him? no, definitely nk grabbing khushi's wrist has left him seething, unable to control his anger.

"aisa koi competition nahin hoga.." there will be no such competition, the man is in rage today, his music clings to him...

of course, nk doesn't seem to notice the mood and says if you don't have the muqabla, how would he know if he's the winner "sikandar" or the "bandar" monkey🤣. a glacial stare lights up the screen. the poor boy however is practically abandoned by his fam in their pursuit of wedding fun, dance competition; even mama ji is willing to go ahead minus him😆.

then in steps akash... if bhai doesn't want sangeet, there will be none, he is quite ok with that.

a visibly irritated asr is touched and with a smart, "thanks, akash," leaves. scathing looks at kkg from time to time, who of course is still hearing the thappad at regular intervals. nice sound effects.😆

next scene, signs of that feeling so elusive, but before that a warning: man dressing. about to wear tie.

"arnav ji, hum do minute aap se baat..." arnav ji, may i speak to you for two minutes... khushi is again out to save the day.

"mujhe nahin karni... out!" i don't want to... out. curt, hurt.

a sleek silver gray tie goes around the neck in a swift sure motion, a head bends, hands get busy knotting... white shirt, gray waist coat... gelled hair, strands spiky, falling forward, stern, angry jawline, a combination not suitable for the weak hearted.

"par hum toh bahar hi hain..." but i'm outside... tom and jerry vibes again, despite her sincerely apologetic and remorseful air.

he's seething.

she starts, "dekhuiye, arnav ji agar aap thappad ki vajah se... hum..." see, arnav ji, if you are because of the slap... i... tears appear and her face begins to crumple.

he turns, pulling off the tie, ready to shout, sees her tears.

everything changes. that quick flip of expression, from angry to nonplussed to brimming concern. he walks up to her as though unable to help himself.- aww so sweet

"khushi?!!" oh that timbre in his voice again... like that day when she'd dashed against him at the poolside after discovering snake's truth.

"dekhiye, arnav ji, humne jaan boojjhkar nahin kiya... hume pata hi nahin chala ki macchhar aapke gaal mein..." see, arnav ji, i didn't do it on purpose, i didn't know that the mosquito would on your cheek... she begins explaining. but.

"haan haan thhek hai, it's ok," he cuts in hassled, voice gentle-ish... husky... troubled, can't take her crying... "rona band karo..." stop crying.

"toh aapne hume maaf kar diya..." so you've forgiven me?

the sweetest nod with the slightest almost smile...😃

she is wreathed in smiles immediately, "achha? toh hum sangeet rakh sakte hain," aah so we can have the sangeet? tears are wiped off promptly.

he's stunned.😆

"what?!!toh tum yeh acting kar rahi thi?" so you were acting all the while?

one minute angry, next second concerned, then almost tender and loving, and wham incredulous and angry again... supremely romantic utterly ipk.⭐️

"itni... itni..." so... so... he's at a loss for words, gathering rage.

"aap phir se gussa ho rahe hain..." you're getting angry again...

"get out... isse pehle ki main..." get out, before i...

"isse pehle ki aap kya..." before you... what? kkg, you don't ask such things of a frantically in love in anger in hurt in madness man. shhh. 🤣

then further attack of sanka, a cheek is presented... she invites him to slap her. back to the genre of the day.

Aw Indi...your writin is just impeccable⭐️ ...you just hav the gene in you to write so well...i am in awe⭐️ 👏
your connection to how his jealousy is not his best form nd Khushi's maddness around him...i really enjoyed it all 😃 nd nk hilarious too...i enjoyed everythin tht you had to say 😆

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supriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#805

EPISODE 148-149-150

ENTRY OF A SWEET RIVAL "Jealousy"👍🏼

Jealousy is another name of love as this is going to play a role of Love Guru for Arnav to bring his feelings at surface which he is suppressing over time.If La's proximity brought Khushi's feelings for him strongly , NK's proximity is going to awake Arnav's jealousy filled with possessiveness and love for Khushi.- well said 👏

NK and his arrival is a sweet scene as the whole family is in the hall way after Mami's anxiousness for her favorite nephew.He comes with style , a Spanish Bg score'.and a dragging bag on an indian sparsh'.

- good one👍🏼

His arrival is a bit problem foe Arnav and Akashay yet for every one else he is just a fresh air especially Mamiji....Love Mamaji here and his nok jhonk with Mamiji😆 - true...it was really nice seein them lik this😆

Symbolism and connection: Sparsh means touch'.so indian touch meaning He is going to be touched by india,it's apna pan'it's essence which he will adore till the very end'He is touched by Khushi's over whelming touch too in the beginning yet after seeing Arnav's inclination ,as an honest man accepts their relationship and develops a stronger bond , a strong heartfelt touch with Khushi as a brother.⭐️ - really awesome connection...well said

His bracelet colors:Red ,yellow,and green

Red brings intensity of all shades of emotions ,yellow brings hazrds and jealousy and green brings jealousy, envy, renewal and generosity . Connection is easy doesn't need to explain''and these are three.as three represents a masculine # along with victory.

He insisted calling him NK'.meaning Nutkhut Krishna'.as he is playing his nutkhat games since Janmashtami and now the game level has changed so he wants Arnav to burn in this ignition of love👏 [through a rival] which he made him ignite by calling him down [with the help of Jai Parakash] on Janmashtami'..Well connected IPK team..Bravo! - wow super cool👏

Lamha-e-Fikeriya..THINKABLE MOMENT: Mamji asks Nutkhut where did you disappear after calling.hmmm'..big meaning..Where did Krishna go after calling Arnav down'.

NK answers I went to roam around'.hmmm yes Krishna went roaming around to make Arnav roaming with his lost thoughts as he does'nt get which is door and which is gate but today those thoughts are touching its hikes in him[Sparsh] ,screaming and making noises to bend down yet he needs a reason and NK is the reason here to bring him down to that level'.He did congratulate Nanav as there is some one for him'.. 👏

NK as a pretentious personality enters in RM and pretty much touches everyone's soul with his smile and over confident nature yet he indeed is a fearless guy just like Khushi who can dare to call him "Nanav"and who can console him with hopes unlike others.👍🏼

Must say lethal joined forces of Khushi and NK against poor Nanaji'..Nanav who acts like older grandpa with his style yet is so young'..Good one as Anjali couldn't pass this golden opportunity to tease his Chote Nanav..or may be Arnav's anger wants NK to call him Daanav [monster]{as a kid that's what you do give weird names to each other} but as NK is a nice cousin and knows him very well yet teasing him is fun so he changes it to Nanav but either way I love Nanav's anger and irritation over his name.- 😃 me too...it was funny to see him this way!!!

-👏 nice touch

9 means happiness and joy and 5+0=5 ,as 5 is a combination of 2 and 3 where 2 is femine and sexual tension and 3 is masculine and victory #

Connection is Payesh wedding rituals ill bring all the happiness and joy all over where Khushi and Arnav's intimacy and desirable tension will increase with the help of Krshna NK. - too good 👏

Khushi and Anjali's unanimous efforts for the preparations of the wedding are sending some "shehnaiyan" [musical notes] in the air.A fresh tone is setting as this is first time when Arnav and Khushi are free of their self imposed relationships.Their gazing and sharing gestures are speaking volume here.He is coming down and she is walking towards him unintentionally and this is the first time when she ignored completely her surroundings as he is way ahead of her in this ehsaas [feeling]'..and this is not going unnoticed by him either👏. - i never noticed tht she went to him...nd yeah i agree tht she forgot abt her surrounding the min she saw him 😳

Second he tells her "I am going to the meeting and will be back soon" by telling Di'yet looking at Khushi to confirm her ..True sense of responsibility of a hubby'.telling his wife who does not want her hubby to go away'.[Only in the beginning after some years hubby wants to stay away and wife does want the same]'But before he leaves his deep look leaves her with comfort'.and that is a sense of belongings which is starting today'..😳 - aw so well written abt the 2 min seen 👏

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NK and Khushi's encounter is the most convivial scene to watch.NK was helping HP in Bermuda'.I mean Baramda'Khushi thinks him as Sareewala as Anjali told her and he thinks her as a dance master.She yells as he is deaf and he dances as he is giving audition'.just hilarious!

Symbolism and connection:Bermuda triangular area made of islands in Atlantic ocean'.connection is easy triangular meaning three ppl Arna-Khushi-NK and their three directional connection'.which is creating jealousy in the ocean of Arnav's Love 'Tri'.as there are three men around Khushi'..Arnav,NK and Shyam'😡

Arnav and Akash's meeting has been cancelled but NK is the reason for them not to show up at home yet they have no choice.

Arnav gets infuriated and introduces both of them with each other.Khushi and NK shakes hands where NK gets Baeiman of the house I mean mehman[guest] '..indeed he is beiman in the this house of love of these two ,just temporarily'he has infatuation for Khushi'yet not the way Shyam does'

- good capture in all

NK is sweet'But one thing is sure the amicability of These two was unbearable for Arnav'Her hand in NK's and then their laughter and at the top Akash's words for perfect match of Khushi and NK just starts a pendulum reaction of his anger in his mind'..which shows in each of his actions'..

Khushi decides to call him Nanehji'as she feels him like her own brother'.and he did prove the best brother for her. - i wouldn go as a brother...but he is more of her best friend he proved it all through the kidnappin

Other side Shyam and his new drama to show Khushi as his bank account is not giving him enough money to survive'does create a temporarily ambiguity in Khushi yet NK the great distractor pulls her thoughts in Jalaibis and Jurabain.Seriously He and his Hinglish is a treat to watch.

Arnav announces a party for Akash and Payal where not only elders are not allowed but also Desi eshtyle too which irks Khushi though but she is unaware that Her LG is irking with her and NK closeness. He refused to listen to her regardless Anjali is insisting.

NK gives boost to Khushi's sad face and reminds her regardless it is Arnav's party yet it is for her sister too so she has a right to feel important too.They follow a plan all the way to LG room.Smarty Brain catches NK gestures😆 and Khushi's back stage drama and calls her in'

Pondering connecting Dots: He always catches Khushi's brain behind NK's talent.Same happened later when NK tells him to wear Kurta and Pajama which he does only for Khushi and her smile on Rakshabhandan and Anjali acknowledges Khushi's influence on her Chote and admits to her later. 😕 - she does..whn??

Arnav's implacability and cold attitude irritates Khushi yet he shows his possessiveness by warning NK "she is crazy"..Yes he can't see his gal with anyone😉.She storms out of his room and he trails her out as usually by calling her and NK "crazy ppl".Arnav after La is still struggling with his feelings and how to settle with them around Khushi or this is his way of Love for his Khushi'..either way both are way comfortable showing and discussing their concerns as warriors as always.He is intelligent and she is crazy isn't settling with her that easily.👏

👏 nice

She was grumbling her thoughts with herself when her Jijaji caught her in the way to deliver the letter to her Jiji'Payalji'Poor Akashji went down by Khushiji and her questions'His cheeks are red'seriously he is not Akhroo's bro from any angle😛. - i don lik akash...cuz he isn true to wat he promises!!!

Love Payal and Khushi here as Khushi leaves no stone to tease Payal here regarding with letter.Love Khushi and her nok jhonk with her Jiji over the letter and Buaji was "sone peh suhaga" '.Khushi tells her this party isn't for older ppl..and Buaji runs after her for that🤣.Khushi being a wife here as she is putting blame on her hubby"Laad Governeor"I found it really cute😃.Though Buaji's concern for her nieces going to the party alone makes sense. - i swear...i enjoyed their scene...buaji's actin nd Khushi's teasin...so much fun!!!!!

Khushi gets acrimonious about Arnav's call to Payal to invite her Jiji but not her.Payal asks her what she should wear shows a lot of her insecurity about class difference and that brings Khushi at the verge of seriousness .She is right in her sense and that will make her thinking bulb on.She calls her Laad Governor'.."hum Bol Rahe hain" No name ,no intro is necessary and the way she said it it's all her right on him..like a wife😉.Other side he is not leaving any stone to bring her back to her toes.The anger over her and NK is still reflecting through his voice and acts.When she asks her to mix some Indian flavor to the party so Payal and her feel comfortable ,he castigates at her "so you will feel uncomfortable"' so you will not come. So don't come. I don't force people to do what they don't want to do. It is bad manner and by the way I didn't invite you either"

Khushi's famous "O" face goes on groaning when he cuts her call"How dare LG didn't invite me"

Pause here: Both of them are finding ways to get each other..She is concerning for her Jiji to change the mood of the party and He didn't invite her for two apparent reasons'one She might feel uncomfortable which he doesn't know how capable she is'second..he wants to keep her away from NK'which is clicking in my brain.👍🏼 - good points 👏

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The next evening Akash comes to pick Payal and Khushi but Khushi makes excuse of her sprain ankle'..Payal was looking really nice and indeed Khushi knows how to manage in any class.I have a strong feeling CVs ate her past where she has some connection to the upper class as her way of thinking and acts reflect a lot.- i swear..hated it durin the shit-all track nd all those rainbow color dresses...so bad 😡

Payal feels bad going alone but Khushi with her stubbornness does not want to go as her LG didn't invite her so why would she.-aww

nice

Love Buaji when she catches her fake act but does make her feel guilty for her Jiji which increases when Payal calls Khushi.Khushi senses some uneasiness in Payal's voice and she grumbles about LG and his attitude.

In the royal boring party or in Khushi's words "udaas bina namak keh party"Arnav introduces Payal to the guests and NK'where NK calls Khushi to make sure she is coming and here we go our smart cookie his the target with an idea'by joining hands with NK..May DM be with Arnav Bitwa'😆 as his crazy girl is entering as a date of NK but in a celestial avatar to arouse his desires'..desires with anger and rage' - good one!!

WoW ArshiH...you hav given really awesome connections⭐️ , symbolism nd points.👏...really well written ⭐️...good lines about Arnav Khushi how they r confused nd still gettin used to each other singularity.👏..abt the husband nd wife part...soo adorable😳 nd soo many colorful edits...too good 👏

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BarunDiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: DurgaS
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Episode 162

Parody on the song 'Gumnaam hai koyi...' from the movie 'Gumnaam'

Khamoshi

Chup chaap hai sabhi

Baat kare na koyi

Sabko khabar, kya hai wajah

Anjaan hai bas wohi

Koyi na kaise bhi awaaz kare

Ek dooje ko bas ishaara kare

Baat hai kya wo samjhena

Phir jhalli se usne suna

Khamoshi aapko pasand hai

Sabko razaamand hai

Aapki hi baat maane hai sabhi

Isliye sabke mooh band hai

Asli wajah phir usne jaana

Sangeet ke liye kiya tha sabne bahana

Sabki baat usey maan na hi pada

Di ko dobara khana khaa na pada

Khamoshi khatam huyi

Chahel pahel shuroo ho gayi

Iske pehle, wo usey pakad le

Jhalli wahan se bhaag gayi

Translation:

Everyone is quiet

No one is talking

Everyone knows the reason

Only he is unknown

Nobody is making any sound

Only giving signals to each other

He can't understand what the matter is

Then he heard it from jhalli

You like silence

Everyone has agreed to it

Everyone listens to what you say

That's why everyone's mouth is shut

Then he came to know the real reason

This was everyone's excuse for the sake of sangeet

He had to agree to everyone's say

Di had to eat food again

The silence came to an end

The bustling started

Before he could catch her

Jhalli ran away from there

DurgaS's Index

😆 Too good dear, ya felt bad fr him but somewhere he must like his limits pushed by that jhalli. Love the whole thing, I actually know this song so am able to sing along the parody :))

So I'm expecting one from you of shyaams hassle with the scorpion at the sangeet😆 poor guy got interrupted so many times while he tried to ploy his wife's demise...not to mention the bichooo was jus not behaving! Te he!...no pressure Durgey, just know you'll come up with something great 😃

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supriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#807

episode 162

- you captured him good

"does not everything depend on our interpretation of the silence around us?"
~~~ lawrence durrel, justine ~~~

khushi is doing hisaab barabar on thappad, he stands there... arms akimbo... hot, angry, gobsmackedand very m&b. and he is silent... though i can hear him saying so many things, things for which i can't find words, just feelings.

the opening scene of 162 was where the story really got told. that incredible force of attraction between them, which doesn't even need physical contact to ignite. put them in the same room and there's a fire raging... - so true!!!
why even that? when one is merely thinking of the other there seems to be a simmer all around. right now... he is actually at a distance of a couple of feet from her, arms folded, just a thought of his hand landing on her cheek in the scene... yet my ears are heating up... he hasn't said a word. - WoW...i mean you admire him so much...👏right now more than Khushi...his effect is more on you 😳

the one who doesn't keep quiet, prods, "aap dekh kya rahe hain, humara gaal hai, aapka haath hai mariye thappad mariye na...😆"

the man keeps watching this whole thing. something in his mind, ticking, registering, playing...

strains of rabba vey... an indication of changing mood...

don't make others suffer because of your anger at me... again khushi is sure it's all about her.

he steps closer... she's muttering something, inaudible... lips move crazily.

then finally, a couple of words, "maar doon?" should i hit you? is there just the teeniest bit of smile on those lips? there's a suggestiveness in his tone, playful, yet sensual, wonder if she hears it.- how sweet

she nods, yes.

"chhoro, rahne do... (a maddening pause as his eyes linger on her face, almost touching it with his gaze😉)... tum sah nahin paaogi..." let it be, you won't be able to bear it... oh lofty huskiness, where do you descend from and then disappear again into the eloquent pool of silence.

thought chimes in: she will bear the most hurtful "maar" some day soon.😕 - which one? the one after force marriage by her mom or durin remarriage??

but right now, its a moment to stop all games and lose oneself... as they look at each other. really all those silent exchanges between them, isn't that where the romance, the love was born and took shape? - true

and do you really think, it's because of you i am saying no to sangeet, he asks. he's struggling to save himself it seems by resorting to meanness, as always.

"main tumhare baare mein sochta tak nahin hoon..." i don't even think about you... he is angry about that nk thing, angry with her, with himself even, i feel

stop giving yourself so much importance, kkg. she looks up getting angry herself, and somewhat confused...

asr felt things for khushi, powerful feelings, but she somehow had buried deep the stirrings of that night when she realised why she can't marry shyam, what was the cause of her acidity.

"maine mana sirf iss liye kiya tha kyunki mujhe naach gana aur shor sharaba pasand nahin... mujhe khamoshi pasand hai..." i said no, because i don't like noise, i like silence... a funny sadness in those words, despite his annoyed, almost baiting tone.

"jisske baare mein tumhe pata bhi nahin hoga..." about which you won't know anything.

how is she to know... her talk keeps her sane, safe... silence possibly unnerves her, takes her thoughts to dark places👏, maybe that's why she needs to eat so much when she's silet... activity... - good one

she is affronted, about to say something and he shuts the door.

now kkg will help device the silent treatment strategy.

khamoshi. silence.

a beautiful hindi film made in 1969/70 by asit sen; he made the bangla version first, deep jele jai. the haunting love story of a nurse in a psychiatric ward/or was it a mental asylum. it's from a song by gulzar in this movie, that ipk possibly got its name.

"humne dekhi hai in aankhon ki mehekti khushboo, haath se chhoonke isse rishto ka ilzaam na do...
sirf ahsaas hai yeh rooh se mehsoos karo... pyaar ko pyaar hi rahne do koi naam na do..."
~~~ gulzar, khamoshi ~~~

loosely translating:
i have seen the beauty (wafting fragrance) of these eyes, don't touch it with the hands and put the blame of a conventional relationship on it...
it's just a feeling, feel it with your soul, let love remain love, don't give it a name.

this beautiful song many of us on the thread will remember... as i read it now, i know in barun sobti's eyes and expressions the magical first lines of the song came to be, more than forty years after it was written. - you r so in love with him lady 😳!!!! but i so get your craziness , love everythin 😉

couple of stanzas down,

"pyaar koi bol nahin, pyaar awaaz nahin,
ek khamoshi hai sunti hai,
kaha karti hai..."
~~~ gulzar, khamoshi ~~~

love is not an utterance, love is not a voice/sound,
it's a silence which listens and speaks.

(hope my translation is correct.)

asr and khushi, this is their love. which is why perhaps it never really mattered to me whether there marriage had social/legal validity... it was never about relationships named by us, it was always about love.-i agree...it nvr mattered to us...but it mattered to their family!!!

as new year progresses toward sangeet, a mood change is being affected... lightness is its goal. and so creatives go for humour. but somehow i found the writing a little too cute at this point. barun seemed to hint at it when he said, asr's fam is as usual busy making a fool of him... he is not a smart intelligent businessman really. - tht is not true!!!

the arrogant, clever, angry young man we know will understand in a second what's happening when the whole world around him goes silent and into mime mode. especially since he knows kkg's mind, and he's just been obnoxious to her.

but no. we had an entire episode of this. what saved it for me was the acting by barun and also the rest of the cast. barun was understated, believable... he got the pitch so right. and right through he managed to hold on to asr. also, i thought about khamoshi vis a vis asr khushi, seemed pertinent, and made me happy.

-👍🏼 good ones

man is asking aman to take a look at what's up with his office renovation, i'm thinking, nothing to write about here... he listens to aman's reply, his eyes harden, his body says heck, he says, "agar koi problem hai to fix it, dammit," a stressed "fix" and a leisurely emphatic "dammit," i start to type frantically. why so hot, mistah.

"hari prakash!"... call out to the servant, sahib needs ya.

"hari prakash, hari..." but he's here already... standing mum... "tum aa gaye ho toh bologe nahin?" you've come, so won't you say something? exasperated bwana.

hp is into sign language. no noise.

"what the... mooh se bolo, dammit." speak with your mouth, dammit, says the man whose eyes speak all the time, especially when his mooh doesn't.

later, in the kitchen, when he waylays her i almost had a heart attack... the frustrated male, bristling, who knows this jhalli with pompom must have been behind it all... exciting. how did he manage to save asr from cute i have no idea but he did. -👏 so good

"kuch bol kyun nahin rahi ho... dammit!" why aren't you saying anything, dammit.

ufff.

"sab log achanak chup kyun ho gaye" why is everyone quiet suddenly, he raises his voice... "shhh!" goes she.

"main chup kyun rahoon? in fact, TUM kyun chup ho? BAAT KYUN NAHIN KAH RAHI TUM?" why should i keep quiet, in fact, why are you quiet? why aren't you talking?

the man is so used to her constant prattle, now she's quiet, what could be more unnatural... even worrying.

"kyunki aapko khamoshi pasand hai..." because you like silence...

di hasn't eaten, he stomps to the table to get food, before him stands kkg. even at a distance, not touching, a flow of magnetic particles between them... some theory of magnetism is being wildly validated here. all the time.

- i see it... the pull

his little interaction with mami, nani, nk (who almost broke, that was a clever touch, neat understanding of character) all wonderful.

and in di's room, there was a bro, sexy in his utter love for his sibling, most concerned about her, not for a moment was he the man being fooled.👍🏼

at one point, realising what di's holding out for he gives in. "okay, do what you want to do..."

"sach, chotey?!!" really?

"haan, par meri ek shart hai, aap ko pehle khana khana padega," yes, but i have a condition, you must eat first.

he feeds her and just look at that gentle lopsided smile... i have to die now. - aww 😆

then... just when they all thought they had him, "di, in sabse andar aane ke liye kahiye.." di, tell these guys to come in... "aur yeh drama band karne ke liye," and to stop this drama.

gorgeous... and why do i feel so bad for this boy now... just because he's good looking? or was there a man being trampled on wit the sweetest lightest most beguiling boots and it hurt... we do have a right to be who we are, don't we?

"i don't think," then you shouldn't talk, said the hatter.

~~~ lewis carroll, alice in wonderland ~~~

Really excitin one to read Indi...i swear your like a lil girl who is livin her fairytale...so happy , content nd you bring it all in your words...Amazing ⭐️⭐️...your words hjust wondeful 👏 thanks for sharin th quotes...especially alice in wonderland...i love mad hatter 😃 such brilliant actin by Depp

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BarunDiwani

@BarunDiwani

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#808

Originally posted by: indi52
durga, soni,

thanks for liking my barun piece.

soni, i saw your comments and liked many. glad you enjoyed.

durga, you know i had no idea what to write, just pieced together from my/experience of this actor and an article or two i read for some information... nothing new to say really. but one thing i feel he doesn't realise and we also don't talk about much in all our ooohing and aahing is how much he, his work, this show, helps us tackle, and for sure he's helped people make friends right across the world.

and for me, it is really about his work... he gives it so much that you can't help but feel it. that's what keeps me here even now. otherwise, i am not exactly the type to hang around watching and talking a serial... and that too 8 months after it's over.

ipk was well written. the creatives worked with integrity and inspiration, and the entire cast took it higher, but the really tadka, i believe, was given by this young man.

What Barun piece? Me wants to read :)) and Indi, im with you, as much as I oooh and aaah over his dashing chissled dare I say thobda?...It his talent that has always sucks me in...there are so many good looking men in the tv and the film industry buy when they hv no talent, I never feel like giving a second look...but he brings out our feelings with his talent ...granted this role of ASR is such but in the wrong hands, jus don't think it would garner so much attention.

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viv04

@viv04

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#809

@indi,
I googled and traced your Barun article on Barun Sobti movies thread pg 79.
Loved how you voice the other million of hearts in your heartfelt message for him.

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#810

Originally posted by: shesherkobita

Indi ...I had already read it in another forum... They loved it sooo much that they posted it on another forum with full credit to Indrani Robbins. 🤗 I simply commented that I Loved YOU 🤣 (your writing and you as a person ) ... You don't know how big a fan base you have...

Here is one of the comments on your piece...
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Aasudi wrote :

if words other than 'I love u' can depict the love to a person
definitely this one is the masterpiece of those words

beautifully written

to barun I wud love to say 'aisa kyun hota hai jab bhi aap humare paas aate hai to lagta hai ki humari duniya mein roshni aagai hai?'

'aisa hota hai, barun'; is all I want to say and loved the most in the writing:*cpd*:

wish him a happy and healthy life ahead:)

sab,

hugs, hello, now got to go run hide. i am so embarrasiya, he he. you are too sweet and now what to say, i love you too, and love your youness even more.

that comment is so wonderful, can't believe it's about something i wrote... i notice the writer has understood this is to do with love...😆. that "aisa nahin hota hai, barun" i found by chance on an fb page, praying it was authentic and really something he said.

sorry for all my typos, but by now i think everyone's started breaking the code. 😳

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