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Enchantng_Beans

@Enchantng_Beans

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing One 👍🏼

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Primmadonna

@Primmadonna

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Posted: 12 years ago

She must have harbored some masochistic desires… For what else was he but pain in its rawest form?

What a line! Hats off!👏

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-Catharsis

@-Catharsis

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Posted: 12 years ago

Eee! You write another OS! *Skips away to read it*

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey...

Awesome work...

Wish it had happened in the show...True...Payal is trong and breaking her marriage would effect Akash too...

Do continue writing such awesome stories...

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

yes! at times i thought what could have been the story if khushi had refused to marry him!! i think the reason for their marriage was rather stupid to some extent(just my view, dont bash me han!?!)...cumm'on khushi could have just gone and told everyone what arnav told her and let family decide the future...payal's a strong person too and it would have a real test for payash's love story to see that if akash could really stand for payal...!! what say?

about the os...i love it...any doubt?😉

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice try. Gives us another perspective. Another way the story could've progressed.

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Enchante

@Enchante

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Posted: 12 years ago

My love has written another OS and a surprising one at that. As your first try at angst, this was a surprisingly well-written. You're on a roll sis. I don't mind though. Continue rolling.😆

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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: avikasharma
yes! at times i thought what could have been the story if khushi had refused to marry him!! i think the reason for their marriage was rather stupid to some extent(just my view, dont bash me han!?!)...cumm'on khushi could have just gone and told everyone what arnav told her and let family decide the future...payal's a strong person too and it would have a real test for payash's love story to see that if akash could really stand for payal...!! what say?

about the os...i love it...any doubt?😉

Exactly! You have to choose your own battles. Why can't we have a heroine with spunk? Is the noble idiotic behavior always a requirement?

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

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Posted: 12 years ago

No writer has brought the point of Akaash being hurt if he does not marry Payal, thanks for bringing that up.

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-Catharsis

@-Catharsis

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Delilah-

Exactly! You have to choose your own battles. Why can't we have a heroine with spunk? Is the noble idiotic behavior always a requirement?

I agree. Khushi's behavior wasn't justified in the least.😳

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