ArHi OS: The Beginning of a Love Story

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was bang on !! 👏

awsum start, cant wait to see whr the love story takes them !! 😆

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nyc os

thanks for the pm

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

Good luck with your exams so that you may pass with flying colours! And it's all right Helee, about your output… even one shots are welcome as long as one can enjoy your writings!

Short but a rollicking os… just loved the Arnav-Khushi confrontation… you've got their characters bang on! What a marvellous line: Till then he had been talking in a soothing voice. Umm… as soothing as a snake's hiss, right before it bites you. Akash's cluelessness and blindness as to what was going on right under his nose was hilarious, especially his notion that Arnav was smitten with Khushi and that he would soon be called dewarji by her! You are absolutely right about the protagonists driving each other crazy and their love story that remains our lifeline even today!

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damon fan

@-damon-

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Posted: 12 years ago

I LOVED the OS di...
Poor Arnav & lucky Khushi...BEAUTIFUL!!

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ashw99

@ashw99

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it Helee...
what made Akash think bhai is smitten by her...LOL
Love the nok-jhok this two always do when they are together.
Khushi was so herself start and just don't stop, also calling him name that too laud.
yeah but she ignored the crucial fact that Shyamji is Shyam jijaji to the boss.
And ASR, himself as always what da's and more what da's and some more what da's okay not to forget some hissings to
I agree to begin the best love story she has to work for him.
thanks for pm.