arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

Wonderful update !! Finally Arnav is back to conciousness. You have described his hazed journey back to conciousness so well. Could completely relate to his and Khushi's emotions.

Thanks for the update and the PMs.

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I_Dont_Know

@I_Dont_Know

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

And the feeling when I am reading the man is back! He wants to control again. The power. That's ASR na! Though his past, sometimes he is vulnerable, he is such a strong man. And believe me you are best, when you are writing something about ASR.

The romance is back. Khushi is happy now. Anjali is moving on with better option. Wah! Now what's about that creep! let's see what's ASR is going to do.

Do update jaldi! I know life is busy but still saying😆. You can write another OS also. Another suggestion😆 Thanks for the pm.😃

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Horizon

@Horizon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#663

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Thnx Indi .indeed he is back as Bahar...He is fictional ...no way .He is among us and as real as any thing could be or may be more than that...Here is for this Bahar...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JYSxVThoVn8[/YOUTUBE]

Arshi, for that underlined...🤗

It is ever hard to believe this man never walked planet earth.. or may be he did.. he still does!!

See I am responding to your comment before I do to Indi's story.. :)

Also, thanks for venting concern at Dr Verma's silence as I was in the same boat, and getting that much needed "all is well" response for all of us!! Here I go again...🤗

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: Horizon

Arshi, for that underlined...🤗
It is ever hard to believe this man never walked planet earth.. or may be he did.. he still does!!

See I am responding to your comment before I do to Indi's story.. :)

Also, thanks for venting concern at Dr Verma's silence as I was in the same boat, and getting that much needed "all is well" response for all of us!! Here I go again...🤗

ha ha, you two women are unbelievable. and that man is your vampire one forever. pooor doc verma, no attention to him... why is he silent? hain? is something wrong with our man, what what what? so cute...

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bs_deeps

@bs_deeps

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

🤗 How you can write so beautifully..?

Story got me so involved that I felt that "ouch" much before my eyes could read what you wrote.. tum theek ho..how wonderful it sounded..the man coming out from coma and already thinking about her safety and taking control of situation..so you trust ASR? 😉

my favourite part of this chapter is thier wedding memories.. what he did as against what he wanted to do.."you are mine, said his eyes. you are nothing, said his lips".. "that endless moment"

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Horizon

@Horizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Another beautiful piece of poetry like prose! The man is up, dynamic and almost back to business... and thinking in the right direction!! cant ask for more. No I am not going to look for realism here as this man is truly "unbelievable" and spontaneous!

My most fav part is, wedding description of that fateful night.. surprise?? Yes...each word touched me deeply.. esp the underlined.. you summed up his feelings of that night in a few simple yet powerful words.. hats ff...yes anger camouflaging fear and pain!!

Loved the Brazilian football thing.. Again thanks for showing that woman in Khushi I always longed to see! Great update Indi.

he thrust a chain of black beads and a touch of pure gold around her neck. she stood still, unable to fathom the claim of a disdained mangalsutra. you are mine, it seemed to say. dismissive fingers took a pinch of vermillion from a ready platter as if someone knew he would come, he would come looking for this one day. he had to hurt her, he had to make her his. you are mine, said his eyes. you are nothing, said his lips, no one to me, just the signs of a wife, but not her place... cruel fingers marked her with red, a sacred streak of sindoor so false. i am the truth, it seemed to say. she had no words...

she was so lovely, all he wanted to do was fold her in his arms and say, "how could you do this to me?"

Loved the Brazilian football comparison.. quite innovative. and thanks for showing that woman in khushi I always longed to see! Great up date Indi.

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Arnav_Khushifan

@Arnav_Khushifan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Hi Indrani,

Lovely update. So good to hear Jaa rahi ho. My heart did Dhak Dhak when I read those words. Glad he woke up. deep in her heart somewhere Khushi was afraid that he might die but she knew that she had to keep it together for the rest of the family because with ASR in coma the responsiblity of the family was on her shoulders. She always thinks of others before her needs. Can't wait for the confortation between ASR and Shyam. Why do I have a feeling that you are going to have Anjali and Khushi play a active role in destroying Shyam. Anjali is going to have to do this in order to goon with her life. It will be like a cleansing for her. Thanks again for sharing your story. Looking forward to the next part.

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raina

@Girlabouttown

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Great update

Shatir dimaag ASR is back
Thanks for d pm dear

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Cadence_12

@Cadence_12

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#669

this is how ASR will wake up from coma for sure! was so waiting for the update and so worth it :) loved how ASR works out that it is not an accident quite immediately. very curious about how this will proceed!

i havent yet managed to read your second OS...will do soon! hugs