arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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Jay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

bookmarking...

yet to start...😊

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Waiting for the next part...remember u promised that u won't make me cry this time...so I'm waiting to smile a bit...

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

^^^ hi nishu_shorna, 😳

ok, i won't make you cry, dying to update, but traveling now... hopefully in a couple of days. good to see you though. and thanks for the reminder.

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BarunDiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Atlast I caught up on ch 6&7! Still shivering with the phone call that anjali happened to pick up in 6, knew Shyaam had something to do with it! Anjali instincts must be right .. and the entry of daiya ho!chappy that u kept his entry deceiving ly hero like. Loved khushi's trip to moms garden and the imperfect rose. Poor khushi how she tries to talk so normal with her laad gov when nothing is normal. No fights, his always yelling at her mischievousness, his touch and look that turns her from girl to woman instantly...

Loved ur dedication to Rabba ve, what a scene and words. 7was a big one in addition to Shyam we see buaji and las entry huh? It's all getting so ineresting :) I agree with ur hubby, stop rofl and bring the man out of the coma!

So much to say but will leave it here :) u cn write the next one now :)))

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supriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

you updated chapter 6 nd 7... i din knw abt it 😔

will read them tomorrow...its bed time for me!!!!!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#486

^^^ ami, it is you it is you.

was waiting so i could start 8. honestly. what, no more coma? ummm, let's see. i wonder why my husband wants him out of it though... isn't it all safer this way? 😆 thanks, sir, for taking the time to read. the man's life is in danger, wondering what to do. and yes, khushi's frustration is at an all time high. laad gov isn't getting after her. laughing at her antics, making her angry, making her giddy, making her all nervous and delirious at once. uff kuch kareka padi.

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Indi di, tomaar mone achhe aamaar kotha?? We interacted a little bit on Priya's thread right around the time when IPK was ending... Tumi ekta FF likhcho?? How nice 😃 I used to love reading your posts... Just saw this will read it definitely & get back to you...

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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hi pixiegirl, (i should know your name)

i remember, of course... the last days of ipk... oh tumultuous, weren't they? and just now as i sat and did a good memory lane session on star player how sad i felt all over again at this unnecessary loss. even when they had meaningless scripts, these two made it all feel so real, like it happens in life. actually, life doesn't have a fabulous well ordered script anyway.

please do read, welcome to my first story. bhalo lagley jaaniyo, na lagleo janiyo, need feedback 😳. hope you enjoy. take care, and thank you so much for saying what you do about my writing.