arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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arshi_lover1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Stalker alert! Loved your ff plzzz continue and pm me thanks!

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Sunshine80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Aha...finally read it
Good chapter Di...again with heavy heart..why this kolaveri di😭😭..my ASR still lying there...like ur hubby said...joy of sadness really..chalo ye bhi dkehlete hain😳

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: lakraj80
Farah (omraboti) suggested this beautiful story. This has made me laugh and cry. Hope arnav comes out of his coma soon, cannot handle anything happening to him, read all the chaps jn one go. Pls could u pm me with future updates? I have added u to my buddy list, thanks.

hi lakraj,

thanks so much. omoraboti was really super good to recommend my story. glad you liked. i am so happy you read at one go, will definitely pm you when i update. thanks.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sunshine80
Aha...finally read it
Good chapter Di...again with heavy heart..why this kolaveri di😭😭..my ASR still lying there...like ur hubby said...joy of sadness really..chalo ye bhi dkehlete hain😳

thanks, chhotey... yes, some sadness in all our joys and a little happiness in sadness. our asr is taking a little break from bedard duniya😆 hopefully back soon. thanks, sir, for reading. just got into delhi. you coming here anytime soon? leaving wednesday morning.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: arshi_lover1
Stalker alert! Loved your ff plzzz continue and pm me thanks!

hi arshi_lover... thanks so much. happy to be stalked. will definitely pm when i update. thanks for dropping by.😳

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Suni
Enjoying your story and love your little notes after each update. So your hubby is an Arshi fan huh?😊

hi suni, thank you for reading and liking, especially those notes. well, poor husband is not an asr khushi fan, but he has to listen to my incessant jabber about them and has watcheda few episodes, agrees both are pretty hot... though of course, he never misses a chance to say how gorgeous sanaya is. 😆 when he heard the boy was in a coma till chapter 7, he couldn't take it...😆😆
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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: bs_deeps
ufff...done reading atlast..I book marked it a month ago and managed to read all the chapters in one go today..totally loved it..

I will b going back and reading it again over the weekend..I'd love to post a looong, a very looong comment... beware of that 😆

we, always, can and will talk about Arnav and Khushi without a break..but I must tell you I liked the way you had given space to Prakash's story..

your story is so 'Indi'sh..unique style..

I am cursing myself for taking so much time for reading..that too after reading prologue..now I am going to regular visitor of this thread

dips, hi🤗

dear girl, so good to see you... and i look forward to the long long comment. i try to read your coments on farha's story, always a treat.

what's this about coming back late and stuff... read when ya can. and if ya don't like, just tell me so. this fiction thing is a killer, my respect for farha at another high... she manages to write two simultaneously... gah, the whole thing from one's imagination... how how how. and here at least we have characters created by others to play with.

you liked the prakashes? i really would love to see op in "attraction." wonder what he'd do.
see you soon. hope "indi"ish style is good for you.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: IronButterfly
What an amazing story with a unique story line with the right amount of twists.

You've written it so beautifully.

So disappointing to see such few readers. This story needs to be read. Will be recommending it to my friends for sure.

Even though the story is high on emotions and is in a sad phase, one never feels depressed while reading it because of how you've written it, taking care to balance out everything.

The characters are developed very well.

Hoping to read more of this wonderful story.
Have sent you a request.
Please do PM me when you update.

Looking forward to being a part of this journey with you.
God bless

thank you so much, iron butterfly.

i feel so good reading your comment. glad to note you didn't feel depressed despite the situation... i did try to keep it in an "up" mood despite the terrible state of affairs... you say it worked... yay.

so you noticed the paucity of readers 😆? aww thanks so much for saying you'll tell your friends. i do appreciate it. i am a first time fiction writer. i realise people have busy lives and may or may not find the time to read this. and i am grateful for every reader who comes by... and maybe even stays with this not too easy tale.

thanks for deciding to stay. and that blessing. see you soon. will pm you. love your name.

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ARSHI_FAN11

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I just happen to come across this fabulous piece of work !! I have to admit though that I was hell confused during first two chapters but then i got a hang of these parallel time tracks that are running 😊

I totally loved the way you have kept the sequence of events same and then twisted them so much at the same time !!! Arnav-Khushi meeting, their subsequent confrontations, Shaym-Khushi encounter... all of it !!

This is so amazing! I am so looking forward to next update... oh even I am wishing for Arnav to be out of coma soon !!!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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^^^ hi arshi_fan11,

thanks so much. glad you enjoyed and happened to chance upon without you. i am getting into the story slowly myself... hope to update this weekend... do drop in, i'll pm you.