arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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incandescent

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hello Indi,

Sorry for commenting so late.

Beautifully written. Khushi and Arnav's convo was so stirring. I feel his unspoken words reached her ….after all their dil ki dhadkan is the same…..that is why she came out smiling.

So it was a woman who called, but Anjali is certain that Shyam is behind this. Will she tell Khushi about it?

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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^^^ hi fari, thanks so much. don't worry about commenting late... as long as you enjoyed, that's what matters. yeah, glad you liked their conversation... very few couples i know in whose story one can introduce such an idea ...but somehow, with them it feels almost natural... not an exaggeration. it was fun to write. that woman who called, i am still trying to figure out who she is.😆

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incandescent

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Posted: 12 years ago

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You're welcome. 😳

With Arhi, none of it feels like exaggeration. Silent convo, gust of wind, stars watching over them….it all feels natural.

I actually wasn't expecting the caller to be a woman. Not sure why.😆 But this is very interesting. Shyam is definitely a suspect but how is Anjali so confident it's him?

Thanks for the pm.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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^^^ yeah, i have started imagining a gust of wind in my life practically 😆.

that woman thing honestly came like that... i am still a bit surprised i decided it was a woman. but it felt right. why does anjali know it's shyam... maybe just a keen instinct about him and his habit of playing games. nothing is simple and straightforward with shyam... his villainy is also unnecessarily fussy in execution... a bit of that lucknowi air to it? nothing is straight to the point, no nonsense, there's a little frill and curve to everything...maybe?

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I m late...🤗Your first part ...a dedication to love...a dedication to rabba ve...just made me emotional... true feelings of lovers...one who wanted to share everything...with the one she loves the most...but is unable to...and somewhere the man who wants to comfort her...may be he is watchin..over helplessly...as she cries her misfortunes...he wants her to know...he is there...n she is nt the reason fr everythin bad that happens...may be some things just happen...Interesting portion of Anjali finally finding out that shyam has planned to kill arnav... it seems dr.verma is lookin aftr anjali di...😳..loved the flow...past flashback merged...with the present...we went to past...n entry of shyam in khushi's life... hw different were her views for two men then...wat an irony...😊waiting for next update...n please di i agree wid ur hubby..show us those tears soon...so that we hav happy ones...😃

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jg12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

Beautiful story & beautifully written.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: riti4u
I m late...🤗Your first part ...a dedication to love...a dedication to rabba ve...just made me emotional... true feelings of lovers...one who wanted to share everything...with the one she loves the most...but is unable to...and somewhere the man who wants to comfort her...may be he is watchin..over helplessly...as she cries her misfortunes...he wants her to know...he is there...n she is nt the reason fr everythin bad that happens...may be some things just happen...Interesting portion of Anjali finally finding out that shyam has planned to kill arnav... it seems dr.verma is lookin aftr anjali di...😳..loved the flow...past flashback merged...with the present...we went to past...n entry of shyam in khushi's life... hw different were her views for two men then...wat an irony...😊waiting for next update...n please di i agree wid ur hubby..show us those tears soon...so that we hav happy ones...😃

hi riti,

no apologies please... what's late? this is fiction, you must read when you want to. thanks for your lovely comments. the whole of asr khsuhi is a dedication to love, in your words, i like. ok ok, will get your man up and yelling soon. let us just enjoy the peace for a while... teehee. thanks for liking the flow. i hope the story is getting thicker and more interesting. see ya soon.