arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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IssK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: indi52
^^^ hi issk,

does it really reach you? hope it does. always walking a strange narrow edge, between maudlin sentimentality and the huge scape/scope of real emotion. went into the story without thinking much... not a fiction writer, no idea of how to "fix" things, but that picture... so much of my life is spent with this serial, and hoping for that boy... somehow i couldn't look away when the pictures kept popping up. so i took on a bout with death. trust me, i would have killed asr if i could... but nothing would let me. not even when i knew these things happen. now trying to feel my way around this terrible situation... wondering what all really does happen when you're here.

so happy to read your words. as long as there's a sense of connection, of something that lingers, maybe flows to other thoughts and has some relevance, me thrilled. the moment it doesn't i will need someone to tell me, halt, sir, you are going nowhere... hope that is you.

thanks again for feeling things and enjoying yourself.

Nothing maudlin here i can tell you that! I believe the only way to get into a new place is to get in without thinking...and then we make our way as we go along. I'll say what I'm completely sure of..and this is not to embarass or flatter you...You have a wonderful way with words. You see life in your own, unique way. And, you'd never lie to these characters we all love so intensely. And just in case you don't believe any of this and need more reason to write... Well, those pictures...like you said, you responded to them. Dreadful as they were, they didn't ring true. This is your way of correcting that lie.

His dying or living... that's not even on board here! Wasn't happening then, isn't now. And just because things happen in reality does not make them more valid than your beliefs. A lot of things happen around...you choose where your truth lies. And go for it.

Samjhi tum? 😛😳😛 Ab humen teacher ji matt kehna please!!

Edited by IssPKaur - 12 years ago

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hd75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Beautiful chapters, Indi...there is something to the story of ASR-Khushi that seems so real, whether it was as a TV serial or as a FF.

I second your husband and daughter, wake him up from coma already !

Can't wait for the next one 😊

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

^^^ harichandana,

you won't believe it... iwas thinking of you this am.i wondered if i had sent you link, if i hadn't, djould i, etc., now i see this. ah that coma of his... ok working on his wake up... maybe he is waiting for khushi to be mad jhalli again...😳. thanks for reading and liking. see you soon. still haven't managed to write that 75...so waiting.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Chapter 7

Why is Anjali so sure that the woman on the phone is linked to Shyam? Made me think. Probably she must have heard that voice earlier too. Anjali never missed those loopholes in the stories that Shyam used to feed her, but she always discarded them because she had a single mission of never mistrusting Shyam. But, after the revelation, she must have thought about all those times she had doubts and must have realised that she was right all the time. That must have included the phone calls she would receive for lending money. This woman must have made few of those calls too. Perhaps, that's why she's so sure that Shyam might be behind this. Just sharing my thought process.

As I said earlier, nice sequence of events after ASR pushes Khushi. Khushi being teased, a nice looking gentleman appearing (it is Shyam, I guess), then Khushi deciding to go to Delhi with Buaji. All scenes packed together. ASR is going to meet Lavanya, hope I don't get to read something unpleasant in the next chapter. You know my stand on their relationship. Anyway, it is your story, please do write as you feel like.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

^^^ hi durga,

you returned... 😃 i like your thoughts on anjali. the way i felt it: anjali was always a clever girl... the events of her life, then the need to find someone her own led her to getting all weak and confused in certain matters... her father smashed a sense of safety and trust... when your father philanders you somewhere perhaps fear the same may happen to you, what if... etc., a certain need to have a trustworthy person in your life. then someone comes and you start dropping your instincts one by one, because you so need to have this thing. but when shyam revealed his true face, i feel she finally just smashed the idol she had made and stopped needing it altogether... going back to the sharp, clever girl at one level... of course it all took time, and it is about a year i think since where we left them in seasion 1. and so, she can almost smell his tricks now. she doesn't know the voice, but knows who could have got someone in to psyche them thus. and having been through what she has, she has no doubt, he is out to kill. this is no empty threat. chhotey is in grave danger. that is what is shaking her up now.

lavanya was an essential part of asr's life... made him feel "normal" i guess. will certainly try not to upset my dear reader... 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: indi52
^^^ harichandana,

you won't believe it... iwas thinking of you this am.i wondered if i had sent you link, if i hadn't, djould i, etc., now i see this. ah that coma of his... ok working on his wake up... maybe he is waiting for khushi to be mad jhalli again...😳. thanks for reading and liking. see you soon. still haven't managed to write that 75...so waiting.

Aha...what do they say about the devil? 😈

You are so right about the "asli KKGSR", give me her madness any day 😳

Just yesterday, I had visited a famous dargah here and found a tree with several locks tied to it. Somebody asked me what that was and I blurted out "mannat ki chaabi" !!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: hd75

Aha...what do they say about the devil? 😈

You are so right about the "asli KKGSR", give me her madness any day 😳

Just yesterday, I had visited a famous dargah here and found a tree with several locks tied to it. Somebody asked me what that was and I blurted out "mannat ki chaabi" !!

^^^ 😆, humara kya hoga, hari chandana...see ya soon.

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DurgaS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: indi52
^^^ hi durga,

you returned... 😃 i like your thoughts on anjali. the way i felt it: anjali was always a clever girl... the events of her life, then the need to find someone her own led her to getting all weak and confused in certain matters... her father smashed a sense of safety and trust... when your father philanders you somewhere perhaps fear the same may happen to you, what if... etc., a certain need to have a trustworthy person in your life. then someone comes and you start dropping your instincts one by one, because you so need to have this thing. but when shyam revealed his true face, i feel she finally just smashed the idol she had made and stopped needing it altogether... going back to the sharp, clever girl at one level... of course it all took time, and it is about a year i think since where we left them in seasion 1. and so, she can almost smell his tricks now. she doesn't know the voice, but knows who could have got someone in to psyche them thus. and having been through what she has, she has no doubt, he is out to kill. this is no empty threat. chhotey is in grave danger. that is what is shaking her up now.

lavanya was an essential part of asr's life... made him feel "normal" i guess. will certainly try not to upset my dear reader... 😳

Thanks for the last part above. I agree he is at present desperately seeking to be normal, this girl in front of him is driving him nuts, and he is clueless about the reason. He just wants to be in control and he knows where he can get that. About Anjali, that's interesting, doesn't recognise the voice but she still is sure that Shyam is behind all this. She sure would be shaken, how will she save her brother who is not in a position to help himself. And will this news be conveyed to Khushi? Looking forward to the next one. This is getting interesting. 😊