arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed** - Page 39

Originally posted by: indi52

you are right, they should have not run away from his self so quickly into some trp seeking eternally gentle sweet understanding man... the things that made him real, made him immensely attractive, and immense... they should have let that be... on the other thread your words on shiva nad parvati... imagine shiva neatly groomed, drinking bottled himalayan spring water, eating boiled vegetables and telling parvati she makes the best pooris, then trying to make pooris for her... the heart numbs at the very thought.

oh asr.

aur sun rahi hai aap, issk, what our durga is farma-oing? we have a fan... awww. 🤗 dura, you are too cute... and you know who durga was married to, na?

Originally posted by: indi52

you are right, they should have not run away from his self so quickly into some trp seeking eternally gentle sweet understanding man... the things that made him real, made him immensely attractive, and immense... they should have let that be... on the other thread your words on shiva nad parvati... imagine shiva neatly groomed, drinking bottled himalayan spring water, eating boiled vegetables and telling parvati she makes the best pooris, then trying to make pooris for her... the heart numbs at the very thought.

oh asr.

aur sun rahi hai aap, issk, what our durga is farma-oing? we have a fan... awww. 🤗 dura, you are too cute... and you know who durga was married to, na?

Originally posted by: sohara

In your tale, you are depicting three different phases of their lives.

I absolutely love the way you penned down ASR nad Khushi's emotions.

present

ASR in coma, which is unbearable for me.His di, nani, Khushi everybody are shocked and sad and concern as well.. But the expression of concern is different with Khsuhi. Her care and love is so subtle. A rose from his mom's garden, what can be the perfect peace of mind for him. So Khushi regularly goes to his mom's garden.She must find some solace there.

past, when they met

ASR's accusation rankled Khushi. When she retorted, he pushed her vehemently made her fall on the ground. Nop very bad ASR. After all she is a girl.

their sweet moment together

ASR is not a typical man. he doesn't have any expectation from anybody. We saw in IPK, he never wanted Khuhsi to keep fast for him on the grvachaud. But Khushi is khushi. she will love him, like the way she wants.

His tender love making to her proved that how much he treasure her and how much reciprocal she is to him.

So I guessed it right. It was not just an simple accident. Someone deliberately did it. We can guess who can it be.

Originally posted by: DurgaS

drinking bottled himalayan spring water 🤣 Ha,ha ... that was a good one. But yes, good example. This makes the picture even more clearer. Oh, but they were completely loaded with all types of weapons out to destroy all the characters. They were killing ASR already. 😡

And yes, by the way, I do know who Durga got married to. But, DurgaS also has a name that means daughter of Parvati. So, I would prefer to be that. 😳

Hi Indi,

I love how you're exploring those scenes in the flashbacks, adding your own touch but keeping the essence of the characters intact. There is something so irresistible about the rude and arrogant ASR. The anger, the defiance, is so very intriguing. Khushi with her headstrong and opposing nature challenges him, pushes him and makes him question things every time.

All the flashbacks you've written are superb.

He is still in coma….with life support.😭 I feel exactly what Khushi's feeling. He has to come back and take control over things...that's the most natural thing...that's how it is meant to be.

She got an odd little rose for him from mom's garden….mom's blessing…she's watching over him. First she brought her stars and hung them over his bed…so that parents can take care of him.

So Anjali has answered Khushi's phone. Eager to know what she would do now.

Loved it. 😳