ArHi OS : If Only...

..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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zohakhan7

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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry for the late edit ...

Beautiful os
just loved it
the way you portrayed Arnav and Khushi emotions were perfect...
Amazing os

Edited by sarunholic_arhi - 12 years ago

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

Sanki Ki Di Ka Res

--edited--

*sniff sniff*

I have told you multiple times I LOVE this, but I'll tell you again!

I EFFING LOVE THIS OS! <3

Just the way you begin... With such a calm tone completely juxtaposes inner turmoil Arnav is going through at the same time.

Those flashbacks were amazing! Especially the line for line words *cough welcome cough ;)* it added to the OS!

ASR is always known for having so many emotions and keeping them bottled in. That was shown perfectly and then when he tries voicing them he can barely express the heights of his feelings with words and the difficulty he faces with that.

I saw the little boy ASR truly is here...

And the ending!! Gahhh!! I just loved his ending words, the emotions, everything!

The ambiguity was written amazingly ^_^

I just love it!

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi
RESWA😎

*holds head* Nahiii!!

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP

*holds head* Nahiii!!

Now HOW did this happen?😆

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..SankiMedhz..

Now HOW did this happen?😆

Mujhe kya pata?! *sniff sniff*

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

Edited :)

And I loved my Oscar! ;) Hehe

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

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Posted: 12 years ago

It is so beautiful...the type of scene we wished to see in our serial...so overwhelmed with various emotions..I lved it...

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was beautifully written 😳 loved it..

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@whiterose29

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Res 😳

*Edited*

I'm still katti with you 😳 Lekin ArHi OS hai aur wo bhi tumne likha hai toh padhna padega 😳

I just loved loved loved this one! <3 Never knew that you could write a serious OS so perfectly! 👍🏼

Just loved the way how you portrayed Arnav's feelings as he went on remembering every rude thing that he said to Khushi 🥺 This literally made me heart-broken 💔

Words fall short to describe this OS! <3

Ending was just perfect, as I had thought! <33

Keep writing more Oneshots yaar! 😳 I've simply fallen in love with your writing bas! 😎

P.S-: Main abhi tak katti hun tumse. 😳

Edited by whiterose29 - 12 years ago