Oh my god Indu, this was so wonderful! I don't like the person you were writing about, but this was extremely well written! His thought process and thinking was so eerie and creepy! You captured it beautifully! Although on the show, they never showed anything about his background, but I believe what you have written to be right! Otherwise any man could have melted in front of the lady who loved him so selflessly! But that never happened with him!
How can a man be so mean, the man who brought him up, gave him a name, he betrayed those people and to top it, left them in the middle of a crowded place in their old age! He was indeed so mean, ungenerous and thankless! That was actually very disturbing! He was only after their money! It is said that a man is a victim of his circumstances, but in his case this didn't hold true! He was an orphan but he did get two loving people, but he didn't value them! He was an arrogant man, who ragged the other children! He took advantage of people! This gave me goosebumps! How can a person be so inhuman! He was just like a wild animal who was always in search of a new, wealthy prey! Disgusting! This was extremely well written! You write beautifully!
This definitely proved to be wonderful character sketch for your SS! I liked how you connected it to the actual story! You have a nice ability to give a proper beginning and end to everything! Wonderful work! Now I'm even more excited about your SS! Please update soon! Thank you for the PM! I love your work! 😊 😊
Edited by srishti_jain - 12 years ago
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