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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi friends, I am not a good writer. But arshi has driven me so crazy that I have started to do so many things which I have never done before and writing is one. I am just writing a short story. Please bear with my story & hindi.

It is evening. Khushi, Anjali & Payal are in the Kitchen. HP is there to help them. Khushi feels dizzy and collapses on the floor; Anjali & Payal are panicked. Khushi is laid on the sofa surrounded by nani, mami, anjali, payal, NK & HP. Doctor comes & tells the good news to everyone. All are so happy to hear the news. Khushi has gained consciousness. Payal goes & kisses her little sister.

Nani also kisses her forehead & happily tells, 'Hamare chote papa banne wale hain. Devi maiyya ki lakh lakh sukhar hai'.

Everyone feeds sweets to khushi and she is happy & blushing.

Mami happily says, 'Hello hi bye bye' Hamare arnav bitwa ka chota packetwa aa ra hain. Mujhe dadi bulayega'

NK jumps & says, 'Tho mein chachi banne wala hoon. Yes...' & everyone laughs.

Anjali laughs & tells, 'NK bhai, chachi nahin aap chacha banne wale hain. Hum abhi chotte-ko call karke ye gud news batha dethe hain'

Khushi stops her & says, 'nahi di hum kud ye kabar arnavji se kehna chahte hain' and everyone agrees.

Khushi suddenly feels a gush of air & happily tells, 'Arnavji aagaye'

Anjali asks, 'Khushiji aapko kaise patha ki chhote agayein hain?'

NK says, 'Bas un dono ko patha chal jatha hai'

Khushi runs towards the door. Nani says, 'sambalke khushi bitiya' sambalke' and Arnav enters.

Arnav is surprised to see her so happy, smiling & excited. Khushi hugs him tightly near the main door itself. Arnav holds her by waist, hugs her back lovingly and teases, 'kya tum mujhe aaj itna miss kar rahi thi kya?'

Khushi doesn't say anything. They break the hug. Arnav holds her by chin & asks, 'kya hua khushi?'

A drop of tear gushes down her cheek out of happiness. Arnav is confused & asks, 'khushi tum teek ho?'

Khushi wipes her tears & says, 'voh hum, voh aap, arnavji' ' She lowers her eyes unable to meet his eyes in coyness & says, 'humare ghar mein ek chote laad governor aane wala hai'

Arnav's eyes widen. His lips almost break into a smile. He raises his eyebrows & his eyes question her, 'Really??'

He cups her face & in his husky voice he asks, 'kya kaha tumne. Phir se kaho'

Khushi replies with her eyes.

Arnav's eyes turn wet. He was waiting to start a family with her for almost 3 years & now finally he is gonna become a dad now.

He kisses her forehead & hugs her tightly. He then lifts her & twirls her happily.

Khushi says, 'Arnavji humein chakkar aaraha hai'. Arnav realizes and then stops; says, 'oh I am sorry. Khushi you are ok.'

All family members are happily looking at them.


Continuation in https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3519262/maa-aap-dadi-banne-wali-hai

Edited by Arshidiehardfan - 12 years ago

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happy_cupcake thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i liked it
was a really sweet one
MeeraHK thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi its gd..kjeep wrting ...👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww!! Short but cute OS! It was very sweet! Keep up the good work! 😊 😊
Arshidiehardfan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for ur comments... Will try to write more & I will improve my writing too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was nice...
just fab...
thanks for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww really cute 😳 loved it...
keep up the good work
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dnt underestimate ueself ur a good writer 👍🏼 lyk it cute update n frankly i really wanted to c dis in d show... khushi getting preg n all so thank u ...dekhne ko na sahi padne to mila 😉
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RizArshi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its a sweet one. I liked it. Keep writing :)
Akorshi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow! its so lovely...
plz continue it...
thxx fr the pm...

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