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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
That was brilliant !!!

I simply love and adore La ... :)
And always wanted to see the way she lived after her break-up with ASR or did she even move on in her life ???

You've described her feelings beautifully :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
brilliant...
& I too share ur fascination for lavanya kashyapšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was jus simply amazin
Totally luvd da os xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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šŸ‘ Wonderful story idea!

I loved La towards the end of her part on the show and always wished they had showed her before the show ended.

You gave her justice with this OS. She truly had feelings for Arnav and was heart broken when she left Delhi and its not easy to get over a man like Arnav.

I just loved this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, this was one of the best chapter I have read about Lavnaya! Simple yet awesome, just upto the mark. I wish they could have shown something like that in our serial. Very nice, loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful. I myself am someone who feels very dearly and strongly for Lavanya, and her loss. She lost herself for ASR and then he ditched her. Except that breakup scene was the time I fell in love with IPK, because it was so very mature and made the characters so very dignified, especially Lavanya. And in every FF that I read, I secretly wish for a happy ending of her own for Lavanya, so I love you for writing this!

So true - she did not want him, but wanted to feel the way he made Khushi feel - he could caress her with just his eyes and she yearned for the same. I am so glad she has it now; a man with eyes just for her - and the beauty she is, inside out :) I also loved how you explored the layers in her character - her insecurities, the need for approval, her struggle to get over ASR.. and most importantly, her courage.

Loved it!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb OS! Very well written!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I so wish they had kept her story parallel to chamkelli's in IPKKND . This was brilliant.

loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it. This is what a girl really wants. Someone who looks at you as though you are the only one for him. You wrote about Lananya and her emotions after the breakup beautifully.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i love this song!!
and i loved this OS too

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