Vignettes - 15. Remembering

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

luvd d update
it was pitch perfect

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foesb

@foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Hey really like this serious! Started reading from the last one😊 this chapter was fabulous! You have explored a different side of Manorama' and you have written it down fantastically! From Khushi's distress over not been able to contact Arnav and right down to the end where Arnav's greets his wife in front of everyone by gaining attention from public, all these things were penned down really nicely, fantastic writing👏

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abby2181

@abby2181

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Loved the interaction between Mami and Khushi. It reminded me of that time in the show. It was well written too.

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reflektions

@reflektions

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Tugged and pulled the heart strings welland good, and at the end just took the breath away.
Your simple yet profound description of the love a man has for his wife, a woman has for her husband, and the love a person has for family makes one catch one's breath.
Truly beautiful.

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

I found this one very touching. The emotions were beautifully described. The bond that mami and Khushi shared was in itself unique. Khushi's turmoil and Mami understanding her was so amazing. The love that Arnav and Khushi have for each other even when they r not together is something which couldn't be expressed in words and yet u have written it so well. Loved it

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

I miss ipk so much
Brilliant os

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mbbsrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

very very very cute

i dint know Manorma was such an iunderstanding Saas LOL

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

I loved the unexpected partner that Khushi got during the kidnapping track - Mami.
But sadly once Shyam messed things up the partnership went away with the wind.
This OS reminded me of those scenes where Mami lent Khushi emotional support.
A very emotional OS.