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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please listen this song while reading this:-

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I7xqX51zqoM[/YOUTUBE]

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Aankhon ke Saagar
Hothon ke Saagar

Le doobe Hamein


Her eyes.

Clear shade of hazel.

Sometimes twinkling with a tinge of gold.

Sometimes giving away the little mischief in her mind with their abrupt shine.

Sometimes brimming with laughter.

And a few times, failing her attempts on putting up a fake smile on her face.

Her lips.A shade of coral and red when natural, and generally seen with a tinge of pink, credited by her lip gloss.

Perfectly bow shaped upper lip and sinuously fuller and curvy lower lip, most of times looking a bit swollen due to continuous biting she did.

When they curved up in a smile, he would feel his whole world brighten up.


Palkon ko aise
Palkon se chhoo le
Ke jab dil mile
toh manzil mile



Her long eyelashes.

Perfectly resting on her cheeks, creating a slight shadow beneath them,covering his salvation, her eyes.

Creating a mystery with perfect rhythm of moving up and down.

Many a times making him forget listening to what her sinuous lips were telling, so engrossed he would be in following the movement of those feathery eyelashes, covering and then baring the window to her soul.


Tum bhi naa bhoolo
Hum bhi naa bhoolein
ke jab dil mile
toh manzil mile


They had danced together. He will never forget the feel of her tiny waist under his hands, her warm breath fanning his cheeks, her hesitant movements. Her shy eyes were looking everywhere except him and he couldn't care less about steps. His whole focus was on her being and emotions playing across her eyes- irritation, then anger, then mischief and then...dazed!?!**


Tadapna mera

Hasna tera

Neendein meri

Sapna tera


She smiled politely when he told her that he will never leaver her side & will never believe that she could willingly do something that would hurt her loved ones. She thought it as one of his attempts to make her feel better, and she thanked him politely, saying that he was indeed a gem of a friend, and she was thankful to him for his trust.

He had smiled with a pain in his chest, now that he would never be able to tell her that he hadn't got a choice. He could read it in her eyes and he couldn't deny anything that her eyes told him.#



Sabhi dooriyaan
Woh majbooriyaan
Bhulado unhein
Ke main hoon yahaan


When he had held her in his arms, even though for briefest moments , he felt he had died and reached heaven.

She was crying, she was distressed and he knew he would do anything in his power , even stop breathing willingly if it could remove those tears from her eyes. It was supposed to be her wedding day & her groom,her lover, her Arnavji was nowhere to be found. With dadi's dramatic narration of past, he knew she was fearing for her love to be abandoned by him. He in his heart felt unguarded fury towards him, for putting her through so much hate & insecurities . How could he not value her love. How could he give something as irrelevant as past a priority over her, over her smile, over her love. And he wanted,nay, needed that love to achieve its rightful respect, as much as he needed to breath. A part of his subconscious knew that it was because he , inside his heart, wanted that love for himself, and he knew it would always remain a unfulfilled wish.


But still he couldn't stop himself from feeling those emotions when he had held her, he felt he was complete. Like a missing piece of puzzle was found and put into place to complete a picture. Like he had finally, finally got something in return for his unknown, unreciprocated, unconditional love.




Ye jivan mera

Ye khushian sabhi
Tere naam ki
Mere naam ki


She was happy. Finally. It was all what mattered for him. Whether she was or wasn't with him wasn't ever a question. All that mattered was now her eyes danced with glee and unbound happiness, and love. He was happy standing in the side, watching her building a life with her Arnavji. Her happiness was the only way for his happiness.


Yes , finally Nandkishore, her Nanheji, was a happy man.



Aankhon ke Saagar
Hothon ke Saagar

Le doobe Hamein




**--- dance practice before new year, for payash sangeet, where khushi practiced with NK.

#--just after forced marriage



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Another OS my lovelies. This one specially for Akansha. She is the first one who ever showed faith in writing skill, whatsoever I have. Please do respond with your comments, who knows you might be helping a future professional writer in improving her novice trials.😊


You can read my other work here:-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3404194
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3337478
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sweet_sanju thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Wow Awesome OS
Loved it
beautifully written
..MorningStar.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Harinder is back with something hatke again...😳

Again I was thinking about Khushi and Arnav,..then halfway I thought Nah! This was someone else.

But it was AWESOME and well written..Loved It...👏

You should write more..😊

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by morning_star - 12 years ago
dilectus thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: sweet_sanju

Wow Awesome OS
Loved it
beautifully written



thank you 😊
dilectus thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: morning_star

Harinder is back with something hatke again...😳

Again I was thinking about Khushi and Arnav,..then halfway I thought Nah! This was someone else.

But it was AWESOME and well written..Loved It...👏

You should write more..😊

Thanks for the PM.



thanx morning star. i thought of carrying the confusion till last line, but then wo baat nai ban rai thi, hence this.
you are always welcome.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Very, very nice. I love how you weave the song into the OS. Very nice treatment! My heart goes out to poor NK!
dilectus thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: maverickmartin

Very, very nice. I love how you weave the song into the OS. Very nice treatment! My heart goes out to poor NK!



thank you maverick!!! i am an avid reader of your work and religiously follow "tethered". your encouragement means a lot for me.
adventure_roks thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
that was simply awesome...
do write more...😊
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Uh. Our poor nk
Man our heart goes out to him
I thought it was arnav
Till there was mention of arnav in third person
Sadly beautiful
Lil_Miss_Crazy thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
awww..
this ones for me .. 😲😲😲
someone kill me please ... 😭
I m so bad itna late rpely kiya maine Di..
I m sorry Di .. voh exams were going on n cell seh PM's nahi open ho rahe theh ...

but the OS.. its so hatke Di.. seriously.. bahi nah I envy all those poeple who get such ideas Di ..
god I wish I could steal ap sabke brains during my exams Di .. 😆
Love it Di ... ❤️

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