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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

awww man first she left him in the fire and then he too left to be with her
though it was unintentional for him but his wish came true
he wanted to be with her forever and now he is
wow you sure did come up with such magical brilliance while in your english class interesting that
so he was reflecting on all the if only
well not anymore because he wont be without her
cheers for pm

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

So emotional and so beautifully written!!!

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

So, so beautiful - poignant yet uplifting in the end, in a sad way of course...

Love the reference to the four-leaf clover - I remember trying to find one when I was a kid! Never did! 😉

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spuARHI

@spuARHI

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!! hat was such a powerful piece of writing...

though the name arnav and khushi weren mentioned, the whole time i could just vision both of them...

specially khushi in white and arnav lost thinking she is gone...

truly wonderful!!

thanks for the PM!

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Brilliant piece of work.
I always love the fact that arshi are one soul with two bodies.
Especially when he wish to be with her forever.

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723461

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: moomin4455
So, so beautiful - poignant yet uplifting in the end, in a sad way of course...

Love the reference to the four-leaf clover - I remember trying to find one when I was a kid! Never did! 😉

Yeah, I wanted to find one too! Never did thank you so much for the lovely comment!

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723461

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: spuARHI
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!! hat was such a powerful piece of writing...
though the name arnav and khushi weren mentioned, the whole time i could just vision both of them...
specially khushi in white and arnav lost thinking she is gone...
truly wonderful!!
thanks for the PM!

Glad you liked it! Thank you so much for the wonderful comment😃

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723461

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: chavvi16
awww man first she left him in the fire and then he too left to be with her
though it was unintentional for him but his wish came true
he wanted to be with her forever and now he is
wow you sure did come up with such magical brilliance while in your english class interesting that
so he was reflecting on all the if only
well not anymore because he wont be without her
cheers for pm

So true...and that's the reason I love English!

They are together...forever