OS: Colors of Life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

SO beautiful!!! absolutely loved it ...

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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Really that was a beautiful os...

i just loved it...

beautifully written with all the emotions...

Do write more...

you have long way to go...

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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: mayabegum
Wow Lilly, that was beautiful. I can't believe this is your first ever fictional writing it seems as though you've written so many other OS's/FF's I think you should start writing more.Considering this is your first one, this is awesome!
I love the whole concept of this story with the whole orphanage idea it was so different and something enjoyable to read😃

Khushi getting Arnav ready in the morning is so cute! I love how Khushi had managed to get through to the 'mini Arnav' and also supporting Arnav too when he had needed her. When Arnav embraced Khushi into that tight hug that was just heart touching😳

Life offers you every color, you just need to use them to make your life colorful. And one way of coloring your life is to let your sorrows and pain to go away by sharing them with your loved ones and embrace whatever the little happiness life is giving you. That's the life and everyone should learn the art of living a happy life

^That little paragraph you added was literally outstanding, you're a brilliant writer you should continue writing more.. Thanks for the PM⭐️

thanks a ton maya 🤗

your comment is indeed very encouraging 😊

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

First of all - Sorry for being late, Sorry😃
yep, I kept my record of being late even in ur Os, Yar😆

Tabby, That was sooo beautiful I was ssooo depressed today,still I am, but after reading this I am feeling much better😊

The story of Man behind the mask Of ASR & His wife, she is the angel in his life- No doubt in that
The way Khushi was talking with the boys and at the same time Arnav's feelings - Was beautifully portrayed,Yar👏 I knew U write beautifully frrom reading ur coments in Rachel's FF, But Must Say- Ur a great writter ,Boss😎

Love & Hugs,Yar❤️🤗

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-Raichu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

HIII !!!!

You write an OS ????

Wow !!

Don't have time right now, but I'll read it !!!

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molten_lava

@molten_lava

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Whattay OS!!! ❤️

WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE!😉

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

First of all

I'm so happy that you wrote an OS for us !!

It was really well written and I enjoyed reading it 😉😉

This Khushi is quite similar to you, right 😉😉

Things I want to point out :

- She's an art teacher ... that reminds me someone !!! 😆

- pakoras and jalebi = unhealthy food ... that reminds me someone !!! 😆

Then where are parathas ?? 😆😆

You know after reading this OS, I really want to become a teacher ! 😉😉

Not because I love kids 😕😕

but it's an awesome job to inculcate morals, knowledge to children ... if the children are fine, then the world will better 😃😃

👏👏👏

This Khushi is a wonderful person, so is the person she reminds me 😉😉😆

It's your first attempt, but I wouldn't have guessed if you haven't told it !! 😉

Originally posted by: lilly205
And trust me girls may fantasize an arrogant angry youngman but in reality girls don't like such guys."

Is it a message ?? 😃😃

I'm really sorry for reading your OS so late, but yesterday I had an exam very late, so back to home I just wanted to sleep, so didn't log in on IF. And this morning, I wanted to read your OS during my math class but next week I have a maths exam so obviously I needed to be focussed

😆😆

🤗🤗

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-Raichu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: coronapsyche
First of all - Sorry for being late, Sorry😃
yep, I kept my record of being late even in ur Os, Yar😆

No this time, I broke your record 😆😆

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: molten_lava

@bold: Yeah girl! Tell, tell! who was that?😉 I guess it must be Agathe!😆 Agathe gets to do guest appearance everywhere!😛

And yes, you have to tell her what happened after the dinner date???

🤣🤣

You have just a good image of me 😆😆