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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jules

😆 😆
Someone has posted this as a comment on Forum 32
This post would have angered me at some other time, yet it IS pretty relieving. It's reliving to know you guys finally admit your creative juices have flushed out. Or is it now the fault of the "happily married couple"? Because of course, in your dictionary, it goes like, "Hey I just married you, and this is crazy, but the time for Rabba Vey is long gone...so let's watch TV, maybe?"


But don't worry, we'd definitely give you ideas. For unlike you, we love our show.

Now before bringing in new tracks, you must focus on the pending ones themselves. But since you are asking for a story and not feedback, let's start with the current track.

With the way you are so keen on showing an ASR totally insensitive to Khushi's feelings, I say, show Khushi taking this in a mature way, and not through useless comedy antics.
After Karvachauth, make Khushi insecure to the point that she believes Arnav doesn't need her anymore- that he already has Aarav. And lead that to separation. Barun and Sanaya carry out these painful separations so beautifully, it's hard not to like the track. Show Arnav yearning for Khushi. And Khushi yearning for him [without the nonsense comedy, if you please] Show NK, Payal, Anjali etc [you NEED to use your side characters] unleashing Sheetal's true face. Show Arnav repenting for what he did and maybe, after knowing the truth, show him going ballistic on Sheetal, telling her how much he loves Khushi. And intense Rabba Veys after that, please.

Plus, you guys can simply NOT miss out on Diwali. It HAS to be shown, and we don't want it tarnished with Shit-all's shit. You guys could maybe close the loop from the previous Diwali *winks*

And then, when this Shit-all is out of their lives, PLEASE move on towards the Honeymoon track. And do justice to it. All this No-Masala-After-Marriage is crap. Even after marriage, Sanaya and Barun could do intensity perfectly. Their chemistry is such and you need to USE it. You just need the right execuion. The Haldi Scenes, the Farmhouse scenes, were all just days before marriage. How much could possibly change in some days, huh?
Meanwhile, you could have a parallel on Anjali wherein a new guy enters her life!

Many other possibilities! A new girl for NK. Khushi's past revealed. Shashi has not been given closure either. The contract marriage never came up before the family. Where is Mamaji? You could show Khushi establishing her own career too.

And in this whole while, please, let us see a dignified, strong yet Bubbly Khushi. A repeat of that office dress-up and Peon dress-up fiasco- PLEASE NO! I'm surprised you are aware of the protest againt the Wardrobe and you do nothing about it. Khushi dresses like wife of Bankelal while Anjali is clad in designer net saarees, gosh! And stop with these cheesy, brothery hugs between Arnav and Khushi. CUT IT.

@ Bold... love that comment!!! 😆


Just loved this! We need to get this person on our Basherz thread! Should be a lot of fun!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear bashers
as true fan of ipk, i want anyone of u to post this four lions link in MF so that poor fans should face te reality. dont keep them in dark. pls post it.
thanks for the postingthe link. im satisfie now with the shw and its makers
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asha...


I will...sticking around because of all you lovely friends 🤗 !

QH trolling is awesome...that forum is a dud without Bhati... posts 😉

BTW I still await that PM with namecodes... 😡

we all are poor arti got busy with work and so soon it wil be refined we are all dying aisha trust me on that having to mind your manners in a bashing thread can really be taxing i can tell you that
that forum is a dud but for the grace of them I sometimes read at work just to change my mood a bit and end laughing out loud at times and then folks look at me oddly😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jules

😆 😆
Someone has posted this as a comment on Forum 32
This post would have angered me at some other time, yet it IS pretty relieving. It's reliving to know you guys finally admit your creative juices have flushed out. Or is it now the fault of the "happily married couple"? Because of course, in your dictionary, it goes like, "Hey I just married you, and this is crazy, but the time for Rabba Vey is long gone...so let's watch TV, maybe?"


But don't worry, we'd definitely give you ideas. For unlike you, we love our show.

Now before bringing in new tracks, you must focus on the pending ones themselves. But since you are asking for a story and not feedback, let's start with the current track.

With the way you are so keen on showing an ASR totally insensitive to Khushi's feelings, I say, show Khushi taking this in a mature way, and not through useless comedy antics.
After Karvachauth, make Khushi insecure to the point that she believes Arnav doesn't need her anymore- that he already has Aarav. And lead that to separation. Barun and Sanaya carry out these painful separations so beautifully, it's hard not to like the track. Show Arnav yearning for Khushi. And Khushi yearning for him [without the nonsense comedy, if you please] Show NK, Payal, Anjali etc [you NEED to use your side characters] unleashing Sheetal's true face. Show Arnav repenting for what he did and maybe, after knowing the truth, show him going ballistic on Sheetal, telling her how much he loves Khushi. And intense Rabba Veys after that, please.

Plus, you guys can simply NOT miss out on Diwali. It HAS to be shown, and we don't want it tarnished with Shit-all's shit. You guys could maybe close the loop from the previous Diwali *winks*

And then, when this Shit-all is out of their lives, PLEASE move on towards the Honeymoon track. And do justice to it. All this No-Masala-After-Marriage is crap. Even after marriage, Sanaya and Barun could do intensity perfectly. Their chemistry is such and you need to USE it. You just need the right execuion. The Haldi Scenes, the Farmhouse scenes, were all just days before marriage. How much could possibly change in some days, huh?
Meanwhile, you could have a parallel on Anjali wherein a new guy enters her life!

Many other possibilities! A new girl for NK. Khushi's past revealed. Shashi has not been given closure either. The contract marriage never came up before the family. Where is Mamaji? You could show Khushi establishing her own career too.

And in this whole while, please, let us see a dignified, strong yet Bubbly Khushi. A repeat of that office dress-up and Peon dress-up fiasco- PLEASE NO! I'm surprised you are aware of the protest againt the Wardrobe and you do nothing about it. Khushi dresses like wife of Bankelal while Anjali is clad in designer net saarees, gosh! And stop with these cheesy, brothery hugs between Arnav and Khushi. CUT IT.

@ Bold... love that comment!!! 😆



those black lines really cracked me too.. 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
How about a whole new track after Shyam returns stalking Khushi and kidnapping her.. To get that jerk in line😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkknd_2011


Just loved this! We need to get this person on our Basherz thread! Should be a lot of fun!😆


I'm already here, LOL! 😆

Yougaiz. I wrote it while doing differentiation and integration. Accounts for the annoying tone.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ItIsMyLife

Why can't Gul openly admit:
"I have lost my interest on Barun Sobti.Karan Singh Grover is my new toy boy."

what and run the risk of having her sets destroyed by angry phans 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok ladies c u on dori 17 soon...

Gotta go
Socha kuch stories cook up kar loon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarunmagic

How about a whole new track after Shyam returns stalking Khushi and kidnapping her.. To get that jerk in line😡



I posted that idea.. explore his obsession with Khushi and also get him to threaten to eliminate Khushi from Arnav's life to close Shyam two attempted murder (Anjali and Shashi) loop and also for Arnav to know how Shyam misbehaved with Khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
I spent the last 20 minutes typing this. You think its the outline format they want. whatevs, posting it anyway.

The next track should focus on Khushi leaving Arnav after everything with Sheetal but not in a sacrificial way. Arnav has been insensitive throughout this track he needs to finally realize what has been transpiring with Khushi these past few weeks. He can be shown to be more attune to Khushi being distant and silently suffer himself...not a redemption track per se, but more out of guilt...that I have taken her for granted. Show him worrying that Khushi may leave him and try to rectify the situation. Then I would like to see Khushi hold her ground...A long physical separation wont be accepted by the audience so maybe a short physical separation followed by a longer emotional separation, not sure what should cause this but mostly realization of self worth of some sort.

During this separation, a parallel track with Shaym needs to be started. He needs to come back after the money or you can show he has had a personal agenda against the Malliks/Raizadas for something that happened in the past(maybe between his family and Arnavs dad).

While this is happening, of course Arnav is focusing on Khushi. In the process of trying to fix the marriage, we can expect Anjali, Nani, Payal, and everyone to try and help the love birds. But Khushi is adamant this time and holding her ground, eventually leading to the revelation of contract marriage..explaining how this was all caused by Shaym. Here we can see Arnav attempt a proper redemption not just for Khushi, but family as well.

The realization of what Khushi has been through because of Shaym should propel Shashis recovery so we can finally see him explain his story, about Shayms attempted murder and all he witnessed.

While this is happening between the family, Shaym can be shown to be increasingly causing troubles of some sort, troubles that are not picked up by Arnav yet. Show him getting closer to the point where he can re enter the Raizadas life. His re-entry mixed with the freshness of all his deed against Khushi, attempted murder of Shashi and Anjali, should make for an army ready to fight him...led by Khushi and Anjali.

Basically, show Arnav and Khushi back at the "Mohabbat foor jaane na de, nafrat..." phase for sometime, bringing back pain between the two Show more about the background of Shaym, a closer look into his motivations. Close loopholes of contract marriage and Sashi. This track can, because it has so many other characters used, can give you a couple months of show, ending with a united Khushi and Arnav, and set up for a romantic vacation track.

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