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Posted: 12 years ago
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i cannot stand the comedy so this is bit emotional OS,when i started typing this os the bg song was in my mind ,but i was not able to write in one go 😕 os it turn into something else 😭 i am not pming


At Dinner table

Nani: choteey Khushi betiya is not having dinner

Arnav: look at her ,she was playing with her rice "dont worry she will have ,when she will feel hungry" he left the table

NK: Khushi ji kya huwa

Khushi: Nani ji can i go to buaji home

Everyone felt there is some thing serious

Anjali:Khushi ji how can you go ? tomorrow it is Karvachat?

Mami hello hi bye bye you will not fast for Arnav

Khushi: "i will"

Nani: go after that

Khushi shake her head ,and left the place


Nani: "kya huwa hain dono ka beche "

Mami: saaso maa they must have fight. Kal they will be ok "

NK yes look like Naava and Khushi ji had a fight.

Sheetal" do they fight?"

Anjali: they fallen in love with each other because of their fights"

NK: "sheetal ji they do fight, but they love each other like anything:"

Mami: they cannot live without each other "

Anjali: if khushi ji goes to Buaji place trust me choteey will follow her , as he cannot let her go away from his sight"

Sheetal made face..


Arnav was awake when she walk in the room ,but he closed his eyes ,Khushi without looking at him walk to bed and laid to rest next to him , they were lying side by side but there was a strange kind of silence between them as if both were avoiding something . both were lost in deep thought , at same time they turn towards each other ,they quickly closed their eyes .There was a cold war between them after the DNA incident.


Khushi" can i go to buaji home tomorrow after Karvachat?"she said while biting her lips ,he opened his eyes and look at her

Arnav " are you asking me ? "

Khushi:"yes"

Arnav "really you are asking me , you love to do things alone"he lean towards her

Khushi turn on other side , as she don't want to argue with him

Arnav:"i thousand time asked you not to turn your face when i am talking to you" he pull her from her arm ,she turn with a jerk .her eyes was tightly closed

Khushi" i want to sleep"

Arnav: left her arm and walk out of bed " sleep and do what ever you like to do, dont ask me"

Khushi she sat as he walk out of bed room , he was sitting near pool side "DM i dont want to make him angry but again i made him angry" she heard he was talking to someone , she jump out of bed and walk to the french door


Sheetal why you are sitting here?(she was spying on them as she wanted to know how they behave in bed room)

Arnav"what are you doing here at this time?"

Sheetal" i love to stay alone "

Arnav oh sorry you enjoy the loneliness"

Sheetal" why you are here?"

Arnav " nothing "he walk back to room

Khushi ran back to bed and pretend she was asleep ,Arnav closed the french door ,he laid rest next to her . he stare at her

Arnav" where your love gone Khushi ? you use to feel me now you are not trusting me kahan gaya woh barosa "he pull quilt on her ,he move more close to her " how much i missed you today ,but you were busy with family& your crazy stuff " he kissed her forehead take her in his arms "Pagal" hug her tightly ,Khushi stay still till he was asleep , she try to free herself but his grip was too tight. she give up cuddle around him and slept .



The next day

All the ladies were fasting .

Nani: "Chotey and Akash you both stay at home today "

Arnav:"but i have a meeting with client " he look at Khushi who was busy with Anjali", he wanted her to stop him ,ask him stay at home , but she was avoiding him

Nani: "she is fasting for you"

Arnav "did i asked her ?you know i dont believe in all this " he walk out of RM, he recollected how she fainted in temple last time , he turned car back home "i cannot leave her alone"


Sheetal"Di he is gone ,who will break Khushi fast"

NK: he will be back with in few mins

Khushi: "DI hum aata hain "she walk back to room . she was packing her bag" DM i dont want to leave him ,but i cannot see him like this , since that day he had not talk to me "he even dont want to break my fast he left for office " she sob ,he walk in bedroom, he look her packing bag.

Arnav"where are you going?"

Khushi:"i told you i am going to buaji place"

Arnav, did i said you can go? he walk to her

Khushi will you stop me again saying you will ask jiju to "

Arnav freeze at his spot . he clench his fist

Khushi: it is better i go to buaji place , as we both need space and time , by they way you are going away from me ,our relation is not like before anymore"

Arnav"space and time for what"he grab her arm and pull her to him

Khushi:"i am feeling suffocated her , we both are staying in same room but not talking to each other, if we talk we end up in fight" she took a deep breath,her lips was all dry

Arnav" i am not talking as you make me angry "

Khushi: you stay with someone else who dont make you angry then , she try to free her self." let me go to Buaji home"

Arnav" if i dont let me you then"he pull her to him

Khushi :she bump into him" what is use of me here ?i am like this sofa "she pointed at recline "staying in your room, i am childish , i act like a fool"he left her arm as she was shivering while saying it

Arnav " you can go" he walked to the pool side

Khushi sat on bed and cried ," why again and again me , why no peace in my life " she throw her clothes in her bag.



Arnav was looking at her from out side,he was feeling restless ," he want to run and hug her and stop her for leaving him as he cannot live without her "

Sheetal"your wife over react"she cleared his throat

Arnav"sorry what"

Sheetal" you both are so much different from each other , she react on small issues "

Arnav" she is my life , i cannot live without her for a second "

Sheetal felt shiver in his voice

Arnav"when you will get the keys of your home?"

Sheetal" may be next week" she was not expecting this response from him

Arnav "i have arranged a home for you ,you can shift tomorrow , excuse me" he walk back to room


Khushi was dress in the sari that he had given her to fix her mood ,she was trying to tie the dori ,he walk to her .,without asking her he grab the dori and tie it ,she didnot look at him.

Arnav:" you are more beautiful than sari" he apply her kajal on her ,she was shocked .he kissed her head



sheetal witness it she walk away.



Arnav was on roof with everyone he look around he didnot find her anywhere .

Mami: hello hi bye bye where is Khushi moon is there ?

Anjali:choteey Khushi ji kahan hain

Arnav: DI i am too searching her ,he ran down


Khushi hide her self if store" he said why i fast for him , he didnot asked me too, i will not force him to break my fast" she was sitting on the rocking chair of his Maa.it was getting dark ,she warp her arm around her knees rested her head .


IT is being more than 2 hours no one was able to find her

Arnav ask gatekeeper but know one knew about her ,as no one saw her going out of home."where the hell are you Khushi? "he walk back to his bedroom and check the closet .

Sheetal"she hides in closet"she said in sarcastic way .

Arnav: "yes "he check her bag it was there "where she can go ?she is in home somewhere hiding from me " he was searching like crazy , he check everyone's closet ., he was frighten , again and again he was having flash back how she fainted at teej and was about to fall down the stairs

Anjali: did you had a fight?

Arnav: look at her " please DI, let me find her ,my heart is saying she is in trouble"

HP came running Bhaiya "Khushi ji is in store "

Arnav ran towards store, NK and Payal was standing next to her ,Payal was patting her cheek ,her head was resting next to Payal"what happened"he rush to her side

NK: she is unconscious Naanav.

Arnav moved Payal and picked her up in his arms" bring some thing to eat "he walk to the living room

Everyone panic

Aarav:what happen to her ?

Arnav: look at her hand she was holding his shirt" she is fasting that is way she fainted " he took water from Payal sprinkle on Khushi face.she was slowly opening her eyes ,she saw him leaning over her face as he was lying in his lap,she try to get up ,he stopped her .ask her to take water but she moved his hand

Khushi: hum thek hain,she sat

NK: "khushi ji why you were hiding in store ?"

Anjali: you scared everyone .look at choteey he was so scared

Khushi quickly stand " can i go to bedroom?"

Anjali:" sure Payal ji go with her"

Arnav "no "he without waiting picked her up and walk upstairs. she was feeling weak , she wanted to say something but she kept her mouth shut and eyes shut. as he made her rest she open her eyes .

Khushi can i go to buaji place ?

Arnav look away Nani and Mami came in

Nani:"choteey bring her out her ",she can break her fast "as moon was visible for there.

Khushi:look at him

Arnav nani i already broke her fast .

Nani: oh

Arnav i think she should rest , they all walk out he lock the door and walk to her "now will you tell me what is your problem" he sat next to her

Khushi: drop me at buaji place

Arnav "why you are not taking anything from me?"

Khushi " i dont want to force you" she sob

Arnav " khushi whats wrong with you ?he could not stop him self more ,he cupped her face " you are not forcing me at all. i came back for you as i was scared if you faint again"

Khushi "but you said why i fast?"

Arnav "i said that because i dont want you to hurt yourself because of me, see you fainted because of fast"he said very politely

Khushi " you were not annoyed "

Arnav " no if i was annoyed will i be around you , the whole day i was keeping my eye on you "

Khushi store mein tou nahi tha, hum ko itna daar laga "

Arnav" i dont know when you sneak out of room,if i had idea you were in store i might have hide myself before you ." he tuck her hairs behind her ear wipe her tears

Khushi " Arnav ji i am hungry " her stomach growled

Arnav"mine too"

Khushi are you fasting?

Arnav yes

Khushi per why you are fasting and for whom?she again bite her lips

Arnav:" i am fasting for my pagal wife , for her life "he kissed her forehead "come with me " he hold her hand and walk to the pool side they both broke each other fast.they feed each other ., he smiled at her

Khushi hum buaji ka

Arnav placed his finger on her lips " you will not go any where ? Aman had found a home for sheetal and Aarav they will be shifting tomorrow "

Khushi: "per woh kyun"

Arnav "as i dont want you to leave me .and i very well know her presence is bothering you" he hug her


Edited by naddiya26 - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
When ever I get bruised,

Or scarred

I say to myself


What pain?


And move on.( unknown )

OS is coming up till then enjoy the music

Edited by naddiya26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it is os coming up in a while till then enjoy the music
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
<font size="3">Naddiya dear we r waiting for u,,,
</font> 😉
👏 👏
Woow naddiya
finally sabar ka phaal mihta hota ha,,,,
woow dear lovely really cute,,
i really want something happens like thz,,
really u should join lalit jiii
plz don,t mind
bcoz u write very welll beautiful they made for each other,,,
Edited by sweetnoori - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
yah waiting...
dont make me sit like this too long my hands will pain 😉yar...
ok now it is time to sit back and write about it
First let me thank you for the beautiful os
my heart was really suffocated before reading this but you gave me air😳.
all the emotions and pain that we have for KUshi and what we want from kushi is portated beautifully.my heart is joy full now😳
the diolog I loved the most Arnav asking sheethal 'when will you get your key' wow !!!! now the pain of my heart is half gone😃😳
the most romantic scene where he talk to kushi thinking she is sleeping very sweet and touching😛
And the hilight of the story Arnav fasted for KUshi his love ,his beloved ,his heart, she was his heart beat too😳
that was realy realy wonderful
no such love is scene any where in the world and you could go deep in to it👏
well done
Edited by ashmir24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was Awesme
These 2 kept fast for each other- that was soo romantic☺️
Edited by coronapsyche - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for the os naddiya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting waiting...wen is the os coming??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great ending...loved it...u know i had bookmarked this page wen u posted the music...it is really great...thanks for pm...i always love ur writings😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely os naadiya 😊.
Im also tierd of comedy..Wish CV's could be more sensible.

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