OS: Defeated Mistakes - Chapter Nine

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---Sonia---

@---Sonia---

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wonderful update, love it
update soon

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claireDD

@claireDD

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

don't take this long to update lybah..
i missed this so damn much..
i love this romantic side of arnav..
in fact, romantic raizada is always a treat !!
refuse him and your own feelings all you want khushi , but you'd fall for him soon..
actually arnav was right...two weeks time is more than enough..
im thrilled that she heard his apology..
waiting, with bated breath for the next update...

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Jaan_Arshi

@Jaan_Arshi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Nice update...I like arshi texting...i waiting to know our naughty arnav trying to do win her back...

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smiley24

@smiley24

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

lovely❤️

will be eagerly waiting for the next part

continue soon

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ssm122

@ssm122

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Fantastic.update! Thank u, was waiting...
Arnav is.so.sweet. Hope khushi makes him wait...x

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serendipitylove

@serendipitylove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hi...cud u pm me for the rest...loved it...

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Kashaf

@akashafali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Please PM me when u update next part...

Lovely story

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mansin129

@mansin129

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Nice. Love the way the story is shaping!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Wow that was a nice update - pls let me know when u update next - I have not read the previous chapters - will go back and read the first 8 chapters - pls pm me when u update next

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Just read the last three chapters. It's a complete turn of events, isn't it? I like this Arnav. He is so gentle with her after finding out he feels for her. (Unlike the reel life, where he's always degrading her and being irritated with her!) He is pretty confident though in thinking he only needs one day from her to change her mind! I'd like to see who wins this battle! Of course, I would like him to win it. But not easily!

Thanks for the PM.😃 Waiting for the next update.