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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nis_n


Thanks!!!and i have already updated posted part 4 & 5 on the same page...hope u like it!!!

Like everyone else said the story is really touching! keep it on!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6
Karan- Enough!
He goes near khushi, wipes her tears and then looks at arnav.
Karan can see pain, hurt, guilt and love in his eyes but he knew right now the most imporant thing is to support and khushi.
Karan- enough Mr arnav singh raizaada. tumara yeh natak bohot ho chuka ab or nahi...bohot rula liya tumne mere behen ko par ab tumaheri vaje se uski aakho mein ek bhi aaso aaya to muje se bura koi nahi hoga...
He then looks at payal and says" payal khuhsi ko uske kamre mein le joa"
Payal's comes there and takes khushi with her...Karan takes his car keys and left...
Dadi who wast standing there saw everything but kept quite but as soon as krish leaves she goes near arnav and puts her hand on his shoulder. Arnav looks up at her...
dadi- arnav mein tumse ek baat zarur kahun gi ki khabi bhi haar mat manna...muje pata hai tum khushi se bohot pyaar karte ho aur yeh mein tumhari aakho mein dekh sakti hu...(arnav agains look at her in surprise)mein tumse yeh bhi batana chati hu ki khuhsi bhi tumse bohot pyaar karti par abhi tum pe bharosa nahi kar pa rahi hai...(arnav looks down in guilt) mein dekha hai ki saat saal pehle jab vo yaha aayi thi vo apne aap koo sambhal ne koshis kar rahi thi...khud apne aap se lad rahi par...or bohot sari raate vo soi bhi nahi hongi...par jis din usne aayan or aashi ko apne haato mein liya to mein ne ek nai khushi dekhi usme...ek ma...jo apne baccho ko har bhuri nazar se dur rakhna chati hai...(arnav and everyone had tears in their eyes)or aayan to uski himmat hai...vo hai chota par anpi mama ke leyi bohot protoctive hai or vo khushi ko khabi apne papa ke bare mein nahi puchta...pata hai kyu? kyuki vo janta hai ki us baat se uski mama ko chot photi hai...par ha vo bhi chata hai vo bhi khabhi apne papa se mile...(he was really proud of his son but again felt guilty because of him his son sufferd) lekin tumari kami sabse zyada aashi ko lagti hai...vo bohot masum hai beta...(arnav heart agaiin broke)...
Arnav after listening to everything dadi said decided that he will bring his khuhsi and his kids back in his life...and this time forever he will never ever hurt her again...he knew it will be really hard and he will also be have be paitent...be he will do it for his khuhsi and his kids...
She went to aakashdadi- aakash payal abhi bhi tum se naraz hai lekin iska yeh matlab naihi ki vo tum se pyaar nahi karti...khuhsi ki tarah vo bhi bharosa nahi kar pa rahi hai...par mein janti hu ki tum uska vishvas jit loge or ha tej ko manana thoda muskil hai vo kya hai na vo apni mama se bohot pyaar karti hai...
Akash also thought he will bring payal and tej back in his life and will never hurt them again...
anjli- matlab aap chotte or aakash se naraz nahi hai?dadi- beta baat naraz hone ki nahi hai baat vishvas ki hai or muje vishvas hai ki arnav or aaksh khushi or payal se bohot pyaar karte hai or unhe khush rakhenge...n.k- wow nanav, aakash mein bhaio to ab plan kya hai?
arnav- hum e un ka vishvas jitna hoga...
manorama- par yeh possibleva kaise hai
anjli- hum yeh kahenge ki ek puja hai...
nk- but di kya vo log aayenge..
dadi- uski chinta mat karo mein le aavngi une...
Arnav- thanks dadi...
dadi- ko baat nai beta or kisi baat ki zarurat ho to bata dena...
aakash and arnav once again thanked her and everyonne left...


Precap- payal, khushi, tej, aayan, aashi, krish, and dadi in raizada house...but how?Guys i have important message i will be only sending pm to those who comments!!!!!!so plz comment!!!!
Edited by nis_n - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I really enjoyed reading your FF. It's very beautifully written and especially love the kids.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mika17

wow beautiful update

Awww i love this story so much!!!
keep it on👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mika17

wow beautiful update


Thanks!!!!snd plz keep reading it and commenting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks!!!!hope u keep liking it...
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Originally posted by: tokyo

I really enjoyed reading your FF. It's very beautifully written and especially love the kids.


Thanks and same here i also love the kids they are awesome...continue reading it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank You!!!!continue reading it and keep commenting!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazyAmzy

Awww i love this story so much!!!
keep it on👏


Thanks!!!!hope u keep liking it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys i want to tell u that i m changing krish's name to karan...hope u won't mind...and this is karan(krish) and guys i m taking out lavanya from this ff because i m adding new character and it means nk is single...and u will get to know who is it in this update...

Part 7

Next Morning
In Raizada Mansion-
Everyonne is sitting in living room...
n.k- nanav hum kya karnge ab?
nani- arnav aakash aaj subha gayatri ji phone aavat hai hume...unho ne socha hai ki payal bitya or khuhsi bitya ko yeh kehvenge ki humare yaha puja hai...
nk- par nani yeh kis ne kaha ki vo log aayen ge...
manorama- haan sasuma lavanya is wrights...
nani- yeh to hum ne bhi kaha unse par unho ne kaha ki vo sab sambhal lengi...
arnav- nani i m so happy...i can't tell u...
At Singh's -
Everone was at breakfast table...
dadi- khuhsi payal hum log aaj saam ko raizada mansion jaa rahe hai...
khushi, payal, karan were shocked but tej and aashi were happy...aayan didn't know weather to be haapy or sad, he is not that connected to anyone there yet so...
khushi- par dadi
dadi- khusshi beta mere leyi...nani ji ne hume khas bulaya hai or hum mana nahi kar paye...
karan- nahi dadi
khushi thought for a movement dadi had told them that we will come and we will just go and come back...nothing else...
khushi- dadi thik hai hum jayenge...bhai hum vaha sirf puja ke liye ja rahe hai...
karan- thik hai...payal r u ok with it?
payal- yeah bhai...thik hai baccho chalo ab school ke liye late bhi ho rahe hai na...
payal and khushi went to drop children at school while karan went to office and dadi stayed at home...
In arnav's car...
arnav,aakash,lavanya, nk, and anjli are in car...
nk- nanav tum hume kaha le ja rahe ho
aakash- ha bahi hum kaha ja rahe hai
anjli- chotte tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahe...
arnav- guys pleas do minute wait karo...aap logo ko khud pata chal jayenga...
They reached their destination...It was a huge building...
payal ,khushi adnd kids reached school...
Arnav and everyone came out of the car and saw that they are at delhi internationl school...It was one of the best school in delhi not only in delhi but it in list of top ten school's in india...
nk- nanav tume iss umer mein padhai kar ni hai kya...
arnav glared at him and anjli giggled...
arnav pointed his fingure to a white car...
they saw khushi, payal and kids coming out of car...
they went near the car and hid behind a big tree...
They can see and hear clearly what they are doing and talking...
arnav was all lost looking at khushi...she was looking so pretty but soon came out of the trance as he heard aashi's voice...
Spectacular Red Georgette Anarkali Suit
(khushi's dress)
Delightful Magenta Georgette Anarkali Suit
(payal's dress)
aashi- ok mama bye
khushi- bye princess
she bent down and gave aashi a kiss on forehead...
tej- bye mom
payal also bent down and gave tej a kiss on forehead...
then khsushi turned to look at aayan and gave him a kiss on forehear too...
khushi- bye baccho
Kid's started walking towards school but aayan turned back and went neared khushi and kissed her cheek...
khushi was surprised...
aayan said" mama mein janta hu ki aap kisi baat ko leke pareshan ho but mama tension mat lo mein hamesha aap ke saath hu..."
khushi looked at him her expression " how did u know"
aayan got it because words weren't nececarry in their relationship both can fell each other's pain and said" mama jab mein pareshan hota hu tu aap ke siva koi aur muje nahi samaj pata par aap mere bina bataye hi samaj jati ho...aase hi mein bhi samaj gaya...aur vaise bhi aap hi kaite ho na ki kuch baate bina bole samaj aa jati hai...
aayan hugged her and ran to caught up with tej and aashi...
Arnav was so happy and proud of his son...he was really happy to see mother's and son's relationship...
khushi got up
khushi- jiji aap ko pata hai hum dono bohot lucky hai...
payal- hmm vo to hai
khuhsi- ok ok chalo ab var na hum late ho jayenge
payal- haa chal
khushi and payal left...
Back to arnav-
arnav- chale
aakash was also really happy seeing payal and tej...he was waiting for evening to come so he can again see both of them...same was also with arnav he was also really happy seeing and was excitedly waiting for evening to come...
akash- chalo bhai
n.k -yes c'mon nanav
anjli- chalo chote...

precap- singhs in raizada mansion and new entry

sorry guys i said i will bring new entry in this update but it was not possible...
hope u guys like it...
Guys i have important message i will be only sending pm to those who comments!!!!!!so plz comment!!!!

Edited by nis_n - 12 years ago

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