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Posted: 12 years ago
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O My God! This was such an emotional OS. You have brought out the emotions out so well. His agony, his loss. How his happiness.i.e Khushi left him but with a hope for a new life, a little Khushi.

Khush smiled when she knew that he has finally accepted a life without her.


Very touching jess :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh very nice n emotional. 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res..

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Damn, you should have told me that this would made me cry..!!
So heart touching and beautifully written..!!
Atleast khushi lives on in their daughter.. and the heartbreak that arnav has to go through
Everyday but the one to keep him strong is their daughter..<3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res for Samiya Di, since Zehra disappeared

Lol Di resd below. 😆

This is for Liya then :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jessica... you are terribly cruel... you knows how I hate sad stories...it made me cry... it reminded me of something I don't actually want to remember...

Amazingly written dear... I'd say this is your BEST work till date... you explained Arnav's emotions very beautifully...

Great job hun... do keep writing but only HAPPY stories...please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was beautiful! I had tears in my eyes!
Beautifully written, especially the emotions portrayed! It was just too good! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i don't y i m crying while reading it...i can't write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update
khushi died leaving junior khushi for arnie :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND

Jessica... you are terribly cruel... you knows how I hate sad stories...it made me cry... it reminded me of something I don't actually want to remember...


Amazingly written dear... I'd say this is your BEST work till date... you explained Arnav's emotions very beautifully...

Great job hun... do keep writing but only HAPPY stories...please


Aww I'm sorry Di! :( didn't mean to touch a nerve.
I'll write happy fluffy ones, alright? :)

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