OS|Arnav&Khushi|#Our First Rose|| - Page 5

Originally posted by: Inked

That was a tender piece.

I sensed (my overactive imagination!) that this was "art meets life"---this was more than the characters we have familiarity with. I'm putting you on the spot.😉

I confess my own curiosity made me want to know why their wedding is being rushed. He thanks for for saying 'yes'--she smiles, suggesting there is no coercion---all this makes me wonder about the circumstances. The other thing I want to mention is that moment in the car where both are angry but neither knows why--that was so relate-able.

WIll finish by saying--it was enjoyable to read--hope to read more of your work.

Maya

Originally posted by: -Hina-

SHIZ, are you by any chance planning to be a writer. 😳

if not, you better be one and i am daaamn serious. iswear

nooow cooming to the OS - WOOOW 👏

lemme tell you one thing, the best thing about your work is that you make us feeel the emotion, the love, the pain, the happines, the feelings, the story, the characters and what not. your story and your writing skills have the charm to both grap the attention & make your readers feeel it. I did not only read the one shot, but i felt it.

you are the beeest, no doubt^ love youu <3

Hey Shiz, this is such a lovely OS! Beautifully written.. Loved it! :)