How to derail a love story

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momma1128

@momma1128

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: trina2010

There are too many tracks where we all expected to enjoy Arhi remarriage without much complexity anymore.
Arnav Khushi scenes are lacking chemistry and IT'S NOT BARUN OR SANAYAS fault. It's your storyline, direction. Indecisiveness etc etc.
In the name of Mehendi tomorrow we might be getting cry baby's baby shower. We soo wanted you to skip that part. We are not intimidated by her tears anymore. Forget sympathy we don't feel anything for her at all.
Last but not the least make up your mind about one or two tracks and complete them fully before jumping to another. Things are getting messy and unattractive and it's not ENTERTAINING us any more.

100% agree with you Trina. I don't the script inspires SaRun anymore. It is the same old crap and ridiculous comedy. What are they supposed to deliver when every single meaningful scene of theirs is interrupted by Thali and Snake? I have no sympathy for Anjali and would love it if ASR would kick her, Dadi and Shyam out and say stay at Dadi's ashram.

As Renu and Suha said - this PH is not good at parallel tracks and nor are they equipped to close the tracks that they do run adequately. This PH has poor management skills.

Your last point is the key - it is not entertaining anymore!

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momma1128

@momma1128

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: laddoo598

Aur kya. She said she wants to become ASR, right? Then she should have pinned the man to the nearest wall and planted three noisy kisses on his cheeks and forehead. ASR banna hai toh aisey banti..😆

I get it that GH is in love with Shyam and can't do without him taking up at least half of the episode, but what was the point in both the couples being in the same place?? What was the bloody point because I sure as hell don't see it.

@bold - see it is a love story 🤣

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mpks1

@mpks1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Anu finally updated in page 1. I have ranted so much, had to stop at some point.

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momma1128

@momma1128

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

@hi50 - Shyam has been able to get away to live another day at the cost of dumbing down every other character in the story and that is one of my pet peeves of this show. Why does it depend on Shyam? He is a half baked villain. He doesn't scare me, he makes my skin crawl because his twitch and sneer are not pretty, but as a villain...umm, one word...bichoo. He is given undue importance. If you have to keep him, make him smart and bad but not living and getting away with everything because everyone else is dumb.

@Horizon - we are all disgruntled. The PH let the side characters dissolve, in the meantime, the screenplay writer was busy getting Shyam in by hook or by crook - regardless of whether the audience wanted him back or not. Look what has happened to story since then, no one is interested in ArHi remarriage, in the past, in Anjali. Everyone is just fatigued with the story going nowhere new.

@aadyakali - you are allowed to rant as long as it is in a healthy way and the story or lack thereof is an appropriate topic. Implausible scenarios, inconsistencies always existed but now there is not even a story. They have sucked the wind right out of the love story and refocused on Shyam. No one is interested. Dadi is now part of the axis of evil. the whole show is built on how many ways can the Raizadas and Guptas lie to ASR while he giggles like a schoolboy at his schoolgirl maybe wife maybe fiancee. *looking for concrete wall*

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Tabassum Rahman

@TabassumR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Didn't somebody say that the only 3 things that works in this business - entertainment, entertainment, entertainment. I just don't feel entertained anymore. Between dadi's conveniently donning on the head of the family role and taking autocratic decisions and Anjali's zilch character growth, the love story has taken a backseat. And two things that should have excited me ArShi finally being a real couple and Shyam's re-entry, somehow both so insipid at this point that I feel completely cheated. I am a forgiving sort of viewer, I can take comedy, I can handle uncharacteristic character behavior every now and then, I can even forgive occasional starplusification of the show, but how does one forgive a show for just boring you?

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arhi_78

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Well said, everything begins with Shyam and end with Shyam. Again I feel they are keeping us on the fence to keep watching the show throwing bits of arhi scenes.

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momma1128

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

@wcw - why did you not write this post instead because you know frequency match. It is sad that expectations have become so low that a 'i love the way you are' is all that is needed to save an episode. How far have we fallen? Every single thing that had a meaning for ArHi is being hijacked by the appearance of Shyam and Anjali. I don't understand how the CVs could have forgotten all the things prior that indicated to Anjali that Shyam was the paying guest? How is it that ASR doesn't keep a track on where Shyam is? They successfully brought the show to the bottom of the barrel last week. i don't know what they are thinking but I don't see love and passion anymore.

@suhaa- right on! I thought it looked like babysitting too and he was so not himself in this sequence and ruined by watching the sneaky duo in the background. I totally understand what it was that the CVs wanted to show but they ended up butchering it, which has been the standard these days. Forget rewatching these,, i wait to watch these days now

@Prema - there is no rhyme or reason. i also thought they lost it with the swami and the asli zindagi lessons and was so prepared for a LOVE STORY where they were both in love, until of course, SP forced the contract issue again to raise its head in the script. It was so unneccessary and I just think that post the kidnap there was so much meaning and its all gone now. We are living off the fumes of a single line an episode. Each episode has to be taken in a vacuum because there is nothing these days to tie them together. The direction and the vision is not translating. People want a wedding, they have the remote and know where to get one.

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momma1128

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: shybabe

Actually Anuuu...I was under the influence of Kaalkhataa all these months...it just wore of todayy..😆

I concur with all the points that you have mentioned my dear..every word said brilliantly.

I always thought that the downfall of this show was the first marriage..but I can clearly see that was not true. This second marriage in the name of rituals and sanskars...has definitely done it...could have been extremely well executed...but I clearly don't see it happening..

I watched the diwali scene side by side with the date today..Diwali had so much pain yet so much passion and intensity...today's date had everything...the leads on a date, well dressed...but the execution just killed it..for me...for god's sakes...Shyam and Anjali enjoyed their date more ...😆

yes, I understand that they are opposites...but there is always a hope that one day they meet at some point...their thoughts meet at some point..but here I don't see it happening

This show has been given so many chances to save its story and make it worth while..but again and again they have failed every single time..

Tell me one thing...today Khushi wanted to behave like ASR right? Ok...she drinks the Kaalakhatta...but then why does she act all drunk and oozy..if she knew Arnav then she would also know that Arnav Singh Raizada never acts that way...even if he had a glass of wine..he knows very well how to handle himself..and also to think that Arnav would actually make her have a drink inspite of knowing that she never drinks...

where is the execution...where are the good promos...I don't even remember when was the last time I saw one..

I need Excedrin..for migraine.😆

Momma...thanks for the space...now I will go and have a real drink..😉

Shyyy - you know why I still watch but it is getting hard to hold on to that reason only. You are so right, the writers have had a multitude of opportunities to turn the story around to be something marvelous and have sqandered every single moment. And now it's the Shyam and Anjali show. I am not enjoying this. I guess my expectations are too high. His line about loving her the way she is was lovely but it doesn't help that I heard it while banging my head on the desk.

I don't know who is writing for ArHi but they clearly have not the faintest of what should be written. I believe Kh is the one who was turned off by everything she did today when La did it. Is the ASR who mimiced her in private doing it in a restaurant. Why did they have to make it so complicated, why couldn't she have just worn the red sari and given him a kiss? Oh I know, how can you have Shyam in the same frame to show good and bad or whatever they think it shows. I don't understand the vision of the show anymore and it is getting damn boring.

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Devanshi

@pisces25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: momma1128

@Devu - hmmm, did I strike a nerve. LMAO! The ship is sinking and it is taking the stars with it. I think the PH is treating Barun and Sanaya ridiculously. They throw this kind of garbage script at them 2 days before and then want TRPs and xyz. It is obvious GH wants to make it the Shyam show. Pathetic.

Yes 😆
Truly is pathetic and I am very very mad! Eww Today's epi was total garbage had so much potential. Have the writers ever been on dates? What a shoddy execution. They could have shown both saying goodbyes, a little puchak, maybe Khushi sees a ice cream vendor/ice cone and they stop to have, hand holding, teasing ugh I wanted soo much out of this date.

The most awaited wedding isn't even leaving the impact it should .Where is the freaking magic? These 2 used to burn our screens and now I don't even know they look like a regular couple.😭😭
This show has gone to the dogs.

Edited by pisces25 - 13 years ago

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ranjitha

@ranjitha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

A few months back, a gal had opened a post in the main forum saying 'I want my momeny back; This was not the show I had signed for'... Then I had felt that the post was created by a PHANGUL to vent out her frustration for her fav character being sidelined. But today I very well understand what she meant !!!

I would have been grateful to Mr.Dhokla, had he joined twitter on a certain june month and let us know that it was 'Didi ki saut' or 'Creepwa ka saut' and not IPKKND... I would have not bothered to quit watching BV to get hooked to this one !!

It was sometime in January when I had started feeling that the show is losing its charm and then with Lalit Mohan's exit and Mr.Dhokla's sudden increased 'dekhna hain toh dekho' attitude, the show not just lost its charm, but also its soul.

Now what I see is antim kriya of a dead show... Every character, from ASR to Khushi to Anjali is butchered to prove the importance of a certain creepwa !!! I was least interested in remarriage, but had a little hope that this might pave a way for a matured love story, but what I am seeing now is an immature teenage love story, where the mighty ASR is turning into a 17 year old college guy, happily smiling, laughing, mimicking and what not !!!

The creatives wanted to show how the mighty ASR will become Arnav for Khushi, while stay ASR to the world, but the execution is so so so damn pathetic that the audience is left confused, thinking has ASR really changed or is he replaced with a Shravan or Barun?!?! Though I understand that Arnav was probably meant to be this way, casual, at ease, chilled out and full of life, the change has to be gradual and NOT RUSHED. I cannot get up on a certain monday and see mighty ASR 'LAUGHING' or mimicking... I will need some time even believe it, let alone accept it; but are they giving that much needed time? Nope; reason? YOUR POINT 1. And then unfortunately, the male lead gets criticised for bring himself on screen, rather than the character. I wish people could understand that ASR is different, but Arnav and chote are not; they are normal human beings like us, like Shravan and like Barun. So obviously similarities shall creep in, but damn how can I forget he is the 'PUNCHING BAG' of the forum !!! and the execution is just giving more reasons for people to criticise.

All said and done, I hope in next three months, Gul and team gives a logical end to this show, closing all loops; ASR has to die and Arnav has to remain, and I hope this transformation is shown in a convincing way, else people will be left wondering, where did the character vanish, we once fell in love with ?!?!

ISS DEGRADATION OF LOVE STORY KO KYA NAAM DOON?!

*HEAD DESK*