os- first date(KHUSHI INTOXICATED)NOTEPG3

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tanvia

@tanvia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

NOTE----

GUYS THERE WILL BE A CONTINUATION TO THIS...

IT IS NOT THE END...😊

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harshmshah94

@harshmshah94

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

awww...lovely & beautiful😊pls continue soon😊

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tanvia

@tanvia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Kurup
This was simply superb...but I found the ending abrupt if u have actually ended...Do continue with the second part and make it complete...This can be an SS or an FF rather than an OS...U have the skill in u to make ur readers glued to ur script, so utlize it fullly...

In this rain scene, u can add their first rain hug scene which kushi expresses to arnav in her intoxicated state and also certain past where Arnav hurt her or where Kushi fell for him or anything such...U r more talented to write it to make it super dupe hit...

Do PM me for ur next updates...

Dont forget to write a 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5t h, 6th...soon chapters for this...

THNKS A LOT...

yes there is second part to this for sure

as their first date still not ended...

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DushtKanya

@DushtKanya

Alumni

+ 11

Akadu Singh Arnav

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

superb! very realistic! :) It would've been superb if the song Abhi Mujh Mein Kahin from Agneepath had played in the last part :)

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-Shaaya-

@-Shaaya-

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

OMG how sweet 😳

Totally amazing

Dear plzz write the 2nd part aswell 😊

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Paramjit

@Paramjit

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Nice one loved it so cute and romantic. Please do continue.

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arnavholic

@arnavholic

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

beautiful post..loved it..send it to the cv's...this should happen in d show!!!lovely description!!

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arkhi

@arkhi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Arshiarnav1741
aaaw...beautiful os...i'd really love it if it happens i n the show...<3!!

me too, i hope this happens, i dont want just a kiss, if khushi is gettng intoxicated, i want her to pour her heart out to him, esp that she loved him since before diwali and it was his missed kiss which propelled her to get engaged to tsham