os- first date(KHUSHI INTOXICATED)NOTEPG3

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tanvia

@tanvia

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@...Penknife...

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

aaaw...beautiful os...i'd really love it if it happens i n the show...<3!!

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Ankita C

@aNkItA.C

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

nice 1 dear loved it
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@-Sanjana-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Very very sweet! You should write a second part to this definitely! :)

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

Aww..tht was lovely

Beautiful os :)

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Silpa_25

@Silpa_25

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

Would love to watch that...

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

I have also been imagining a drunk kushi from the moment i saw kushi opening a champagne bottle...
Nice os dear! Enjoyed reading it!

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

This was simply superb...but I found the ending abrupt if u have actually ended...Do continue with the second part and make it complete...This can be an SS or an FF rather than an OS...U have the skill in u to make ur readers glued to ur script, so utlize it fullly...

In this rain scene, u can add their first rain hug scene which kushi expresses to arnav in her intoxicated state and also certain past where Arnav hurt her or where Kushi fell for him or anything such...U r more talented to write it to make it super dupe hit...

Do PM me for ur next updates...

Dont forget to write a 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5t h, 6th...soon chapters for this...

Edited by Kurup - 13 years ago