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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: shreya_l

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Shreya, Its great to see ur back and ur verses live the soul in happines, Left u a not on pg 61 of Tidal wave
The capture a mother dilemma to the core 👏👏 to u for penning
Apni beti ke shagun par na hone ka gum,
Kya hain aisa satya gambhir? Jisne cheen liye ek 'Maa' se yeh kshan!
Har aahat par kyun aa jati hai saktein mein,
Jaane hain kis udheddun mein inka man...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Sandy 🤗

Malik's don't really give a good impression ( dadi and chachaji ). I am only saying it from the assumption that maybe his dad wasn't such a bad person after all.

He might have made a lot of mistakes but maybe it was because of the circumstances.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: RitJ26

Dedication to Kops before she pulls my ears again 😆




Edited to add - How do I post a video? 😒...urgh stil not working


ARe you the one in Black lehenga???😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Chani123


HUM TOH AAP HI KE HAIN!




Sometimes I sit and wonder.. What is that binds 2 people together? Is is the ring they put on each other's fingers when they get engaged? Is it the promises they make to each other when they marry? Is it the sindoor that is put in dulhan's maang which she puts everyday? Is is the mangal sutra around her neck that she is proud to show off? Are these things what makes a girl a wife, a lover.. Or is it something more, something deeper?

Can we even see what binds us together? Is it an object or a feeling? Is it something we can see or something we feel? Is it a group of things? Or is it just one thing that means everything to us?

I don't know about everyone.. but yesterday's bs_si post about the rituals and what they meant to her and then today sandy's question to me.. Kops do you believe in the heart and nerves connection.. got me thinking.. What do I believe in?
What makes me a wife?? Rather what makes me feel like a wife?? What makes me wanna put his name after mine?

I realised.. for me.. it was not the elaborate wedding we had.. But it was the simple act of putting that ring on my finger which makes me wanna belong to him.. every time I look at my finger and the ring on it.. I feel so close to him.. I feel as if I am a part of him.. and he is a part of me.. The ring which he gave me was the symbol of his love for me.. The sindoor, the mangal sutra, they do not hold the same importance to me.. In fact, I do not wear them on a daily basis.. But my engagement ring is one thing which I never take off..

Is this sense of belonging there because the vein from that finger goes directly to the heart? Of that I have no clue.. Well anatomically, its true to an extent.. 😊
But LOVE is not anatomy.. and anatomically heart is just an organ that pumps blood! 😆

the sense of belonging can come from anything.. It can be a simple hug, a simple kiss on the forehead, a simple confession of love, a snapshot of your moments together.. Or in the case of our beloved couple.. I believe it comes from every time they look at each other..

The instant they met, something fell into place.. It was as if an elaborate puzzle was solved.. and the final piece which was missing had come, and now the puzzle could be solved.. What was the puzzle.. Arnav Singh Raizada.. What was the final piece that fixed the puzzle, Khushi Kumari Gupta..
No matter what they did, and how hard and whatever they tried.. They BELONGED to each other.. the biggest step in their relationship was accepting the simple fact, they are ONE.. How can they not be together? The minute they walk away, Arnav Singh Raizada will scatter into pieces and Khushi Kumari Gupta will have no meaning, no identity.. He is because of her.. and she is for HIM..

When Khushi explains the significance of 'the roka ceremony' and how putting the ring on the ring finger will make him his..

Arnav's simple question.. Toh kya abhi tum meri nahi ho?
Khushi's instinctive answer.. Hum toh aap hi ke hain...

It was such a romantic moment.. This is true LOVE.. you are not somebody's cause of some rituals, but because in your heart feel so.. because you believe so.. Unfortunately, we still have to go through all the rituals and ceremonies so that the relationship is socially acceptable.. Poor ASR.. 😒

My views on the rest of the episode:

1. Loved the fact, that he is using that bluetooth of his to talk to someone else than Aman.. And that someone is Khushi.. The scene had that feeling of newly fixed rishta.. the boy and the girl spending their entire time talking to each other on phone.. Boy calls girl to be ready, as he is coming to meet her..

Things are bound to happen when that boy is Arnav Singh Raizada.. A surprised Khushi on hearing that he will see her soon tells him he cannot come.. To which he haughtily says.. Mujhe rokega kaun??😆
Oh! He is so sure of his position in his family..

2. Get set go.. He started down the stairs.. ready to meet his soon to be bride.. and there comes dadi with her talks of rituals.. How he is not allowed to accompany for Shagun.. NK tries to support him by pointing out, Akash went for his.. Unfortunately.. Arnav baby is left behind with a sad and pouting face.. 😔
Was there a glimpse of realisation on his face that dadi did not want him there so that she could try messing up once more??😕

3. At GH, a very tensed Garima, who it seems will fall any minute, is trying to run out of the house before the whole batallion arrives lead by dadi.. She misses her by a minute.. Dadi once again looks down her nose at Bua ji and Shashi ji.. NK observes that and once again tries to diffuse the tension between them..
Bravo Nanhe Ji! You have balls of steel.. am I right, bush, shaz???😉 Standing up to dadi like that.. I sometimes feel the way she looks at you that she will say oM phut! and you will turn to ashes.. Be very careful.. we want you around for a long long time..

4. With little hindrance from dadi, and a little push from bua ji the ceremony starts and Khushi is seated right next to DADi.. Dadi once again makes it clear that Khushi and Arnav cannot see each other after haldi till marriage..
Tabhi ek awaaz aati hai.. Wait, phir toh main bilkul sahi time par aaya hoon!!😛
The change in expressions on dadi's face was hilarious.. 😆

Kopal I loved this, My thoughts in sync with u , but u hv painted so much more beautifully, Lovely!!!!dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: mommamia

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Kopal: One Word GOOSEBUMPS!! .. It made me realize what is that feeling which makes me belong to him. Now I know what it is!!!



SAndy.. 🤗
Thanks so much love..

IPK has made me appreciate love better..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Jhalak29

Kopal I loved this, My thoughts in sync with u , but u hv painted so much more beautifully, Lovely!!!!dear


Thanks so much Jhalak.. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Supna9

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hi ladies,😊
identify me...😉
no...😲
no matter...😃
its nt ur faults...😆
its ur ipk ka fan hona faults...😆
bcz in ipk its fashion...😉
that every character has partial amnesia...😕
so can't u save frm this fashion...😡

dnt knw why doods gave the title " KAHANI " but when khushi stoppped arnav to call her Khushi kumari gupta singh raizada...i thought past story bas statr huwa hi chahti hai unfold...
BUT...
i m not came here for episode analysis post but i came here for...GARIMA...and the slapped of garima to khushi and people questioning on it...


I m sad 4 buaji n garima
bcz buaji was justified to slapped khushi in that scenario but she didnt slap n arnav stopped her by holding her hand n its her insult.
People questioning on garima slapped to khushi. Is its nt da right of mother when she saw her child closer to fire to stop him or her verbally n when da child nt baat mane then she can stop them by physically. What khushi doing in garima view she wanted to play with fire.

GARIMA SLAPPED KHUSHI JUSIFIED OR NOT

GARIMA & KHUSHI
A BRANCH, A FLOWER
IS A MOTHER HAVE NO RIGHTS ON HER DAUGHTER
So all who are saying and thinking
why garima slapped to khushi?
Garima did wrong?
So from those people i have some questions to ask can i ?
Plz when you reading these questions
plz read with window open of your mind, door open of your heart .
Tum poochti ho
khushi ko kyun mara thapar garima ne
aur kehti ho
mar k thapar khushi ko ghalat kya garima ne
main tum se poochti hun
tum se kuch keh rahi hun
khol k khirki apne dimaag ki
dar wa kr k apne dil ka
plz read and give me answers
kya sunn k khushi maa baap k marney ka
garima na roeen hon gi

aankhon se khushi k dukh pe ashk na bhayain hon ge
kya khushi ko apne seeney se na lagaya ho ga
kya khushi k aansoo na ponchey hon ge
kya uss ko apni gaud me na bithaya ho ga
kya uss k chehrey ko apne hatho k piyalon me
pyaar se na thama ho ga
kya uss ki roshan peshani pe bosa na kya ho ga
kya jab raato ko dar dar kr uthti ho gi khushi
tou garima ne uss ko uth kr apni bahon me le kr na sulaya ho ga
aur jab khushi hoti ho gi beemar
tou garima ne kr k apni neendain haram
sirhane uss k beth kr sard pani ki patiyan na rakhi hon gi
kya jab khushi school ko jati ho gi
tou uss k balon ko kangha na karti ho gi
uss k lye pyaar se anda paratha na bna ti ho gi
aur darwaze pe ja kar pyaar se uss k galon ko choon kr rukhsant na karti ho gi
uss k dil bhalane ko ussey paryon aur shahzado ki kahani na sunaee ho gi
jab khushi apni masoom si hansi hansti ho gi
tou garima na muskurayi ho gi
jab tokhar khati ho gi khushi
tou dil na dar jata ho ga garima ka
jab zakham lagtey ho ge khushi ko
kya dard na hota ho ga garima ko
aur jab pata chala garima ko
k kar li khushi ne un k bin shadi
un ko kr dya ghair ek hi pal me
un ki izzat ka na rakha khayal
tou garima ka dil na toota ho ga
kya wo yaqeen se be yaqeen na huwi ho gi
kya un ka bharosa na toota ho ga
kya apni tarbiat pe unhey logo k taney na sunne parey hon ge
aur sab se barh kr ek maa ko pata hota hai
aur ek khof se dil seham jata hai k
jab ki hai beti ne ye ghalti
tou log ussey na karain ge apni bahu tasleem
nanad na mane gi ussey apne dil se bhabhi
log dekhain ge usse giri huwi nazro se
pati ka nahi pata k kab tak dil ki rani bna k rakhey ga
aur pata nahi kis din usse ghar dheleez k bahar kr de
aur kahey ab mujhe tumhari zaroorat nahi rahi
tou tum hi kaho
inn sab socho se dar kar
uss din hath uthaya tha garima ne
ajj wahi sochain garima ki dheleez pe
khushi ki surat
dadi k karwey lafzo ki surat
haqeeqat ban k kharey hain
tou kya ab bhi na ghussa ho na garima
tou kya beti k dukh pe dukhi ho na garima

Apni beti pr ghussa na karey garima
wo garima jis ne apni jawani ko na dekha
agr ki ho gi ek choti si ghalti tou
kya uss pe khud ko saza na di ho gi apne aap ko
sarey khuwab tor kar, dil ko chup ki neend sula kar
bin maa ki do bachyon ko pala
apney din o raat aur aram kar dya inn bachyon pe naam
tum hi batao
kya ek thapar marne ka bhi
garima ko haq nahi
me dukhi dil se poochti hun tum se
kya garima ka khushi pr koi haq nahi
KYA EK MAA KA APNI BETI PR KOI HAQ NAHI

Supnaji aap ko koi kaise bhul sakta hai, aapke bina redux ki garima adhoori hai
aapne Garima ki vyatha badi hi sundar tarah se bayan ki hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: tanthya




ENJOY SHWETHA's SCORCHING BITES HERE ;


Episode

Bhagnay kay alava kuch aata bhi hai tumhay- Arnav Singh Raizada to Khushi Kumari Gupta in his office's storeroom.

This was the dialogue that I remembered today watching Garima run away from her
past today.

Shashi has no clue about Garima's past, does he?

He didn't seem to recognize Dadi, So Garima's secret will have rippling effect on Guptas
and the Raizada...And it includes both Arnav-Khushi & Akash-Payal.

Rest of the epi.

Awww & Hayeee. * Wisely leave the analysis to the wonderful writers at Redux*👏

Past and memories

For a couple that has had its share of incredibly fantastic moments, will we ever see them relive those moments?

    Starting from Khushi handing over the Mannat ki chaabi aka his happiness to Arnav. Teej where he broke her fast Dupatta that he inadvertently threw on her head The kids calling him Jeeju Temple engagement Aka roka Haldi when he put Haldi on her
  • and loads more..

So much of signs DM gave both of them - Will they finally be able to make the connection and tally them and maybe cherish and laugh about those moments? - OVER A Cup of Tea under the stars in Gupta House (Personal preference - he makes her a Teabag Tea cos she prefers to have a personal touch in everything)😍

PROMO (Tions)

If marriage is indeed about to happen as per the carefully leaked spoilers by the PH,

    Why is it not being SCREAMED about? Why can't we have a simple promo repeating the scene when he declares he will marry his wife again if new one has not been shot yet?
    Why can't the title montage be reshot with both of the going away from each other and he stops and twirls her closer to him with a smile...(Think Character Dheela twirl) Why isn't a buzz being created for the TRP audience if they matter so much? Why isn't a buzz being created for the online audience by way of polls, interviews by the PH or SP site considering now that this show is competing against two tough shows - BV & Mahadev?
  1. Isn't it time to come all guns blazing and reclaim its rightful spot?

Parallel tracks or Moments

The supporting cast is absolutely loved both for its onscreen and offscreen persona.😳

Now you have a wedding happening, instead of a full fledged parallel track, how about
the following moments:

1. BROMANCE -

    Akash/NK/Arnav...some lighthearted teasing. A crack about Aranv getting married twice to his first wife.
  1. The inability to organize a bachelor party since Arnav already considers himself Married.

2. Raizada Brothers -

Small moments between Akash and Arnav - Two brothers who have practically grown up together and are now even more closely bound together cos of the Gupta Sisters.

    A simple moment of them recounting their own love story with the respective Gupta Sisters. Arnav recounting how he has incurred the wrath of Payal during the GH incident and jokingly warning Akash to be very careful. Arnav explaining his role in Payal's first wedding to be called off (IF he can tell NK, he can sure as well tell Akash), on why he kept quiet about Shyam.
  1. Akash expressing his happiness at finally being able to see the happy Arnav and appreciating Khushi's role in the same.

3.Gupta Sisters

Moments between Payal and Khushi...they can come up with so many things including
    Payal trying to figure out how and when did Khushi and Arnav fell in love as they used to fight so much.
  • Some light hearted, emotional moments between the sisters.

4.Mami - Nani

Mami grudgingly acknowledging that the Gupta Sisters are probably the best choice for Akash and Arnav before turning to her catty self...toned down of course..(can we stop with the KBT & PS..thing please)

5.Mama

If you guys can get the dates of Rajeshji.😕

    Getting emotional with Nani wishing Aranv's mom was present to see her Son's wedding
  1. his cool attitude towards Dadi (Oooh, I am waiting for that one) cos he somewhere holds Dadi responsible for what happened to his sister and her kids.

I have deliberately kept Anjali, Shyam, Dadi, Garima, Bua & Shashi cos I guess they will be for the drama with odd emotional moments thrown in between and those drama scenes any how get fabulously written, it is the small moments like the above that have a tendency to get missed.

Finally: 😉

Let me do what I do best (well Atleast I think I do)😎

Talk about Akash Bitwa, Why isn't he getting more to do, he is Akash Singh Raizada right. 😡

Ofcourse everytime Mami is her catty self, I wish he had an annoyed Why is my mother so tactless than the incredibly proud and indulgent Isn't my mom the best when it comes to being tactless expression and STOP being so much in awe of his bro and START being the
Lakshman-Bharat combo he is supposed to be
(NK is Hanuman, peeps😃)

But considering the dialogue he had today, Nani aap jaayiye, main samaan lekar aata hoon

You know what here is the song THAT fits him aptly: (Try singing along, it might just make it better😆)

(Akash Bitwa Searches through the printouts that are given to other characters and
realizes he got only one dialogue again and that too after 3 episodes😭)

Choo Mantar
Choo Mantar

Choo mantar Kyon meray dialogues ho jaaye
Choo mantar Kyon HP kay dialoguez zyada ho jaaye😡
Choo mantar ho nazron mein hum na aayen
(in the eyes of dialogue writers)
Dhoondhe jahan
humbhi na jaanen hum hain kahan
choo le zameen se wo aasmaan
chal lo re lo re chalo re o re

(Thinks of the diwali & new year gift hampers he got Hitesh & Ritesh😃)

thodi si yaari yaara raahon se nibha le
apne pe bhi to kabhi apni chala le (
Give me more dialogues, guys)

thodi si yaari yaara raahon se nibha le
apne pe bhi to kabhi apni chala le

hum chalen kahin, aawara ho kar naapen zameen
hum dhoondhe kahin, kuch aisa jo khoya hi nahi..

Choo mantar Kyon meray dialogues ho jaaye
Choo mantar Kyon HP kay dialoguez zyada ho jaaye😡
Choo mantar ho nazron mein hum na aayen


Ho chhoo mantar..
Ho chhoo mantar..

Sabkay papers may itnay dialogues jo chapay hain,😕
Meray LACK OF DIALOGUES DEKH LOG PAKNAY lage hain😭

Sabkay papers may itnay dialogues jo chapay hain,😕
Meray LACK OF DIALOGUES DEKH LOG PAKNAY lage hain😭
hmmm.. ruko zara, dekhen to kya hai ye maajra
hmmm... sabhi tarah khwahishon se hai ye dil bhara..


(Calls the delivery company about the gift hampers)

Chhoo mantar ho aaja chal guum ho jaayen
Chhoo mantar ho khud se hi khud kho jaayen
Chhoo mantar ho nazron mein hum na aayen

Dhoondhe jahan
hum bhi na jaanen hum hain kahan
choo le zameen se wo aasmaan
chal lo re lo re chal lo re o re..

Chhoo mantar... Chhooomantar...


(Realizes to his horror the Diwali & New year gift hamper never reached Hitesh & Ritesh)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ajS9d32wVN0 [ /YOUTUBE]


Hwy Shwetha!!!
U hit the nail bang on, I m in agreement to all u have noted, Perfect questions ^ thoughts
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Shastradhari

@koel:


Khushi did not pay a hood to marriage..because in her mind it was 6 month contract..she never knew at the end of 6 months she will get her love and continue with marriage..

she forgot the way they got married..she is just starting her normal married life..and first moment was nani-payal reminding her of pheras...

she talks to arnav..he starts teasing her with SR...the same night, arnav prepares for SR without her knowledge..she did not expect that he will go to this extent...its uncontrollable moment in front of his love...suddenly its striking her..

i dont understand why there is uproar about it...
ARHI marriage was contract marriage...

If khushi want s to relive marriage rituals ..whats wrong in it..she is serving tea..so what..she dreamt about it..how her shagun will come etc..
if she wants to be called keg for few days..its OK..

she is wearing mangalsutra and sin door...that i dont know!!!

I don't mind Khushi relieving marriage rituals but I find the story weaving in this aspect weak...
1. It was a contract marriage for her but she treated it like a real one always...I don't agree that she didnot care two cents for the marriage.. she tried to irritate Arnav to tell her the reason why she had been married in the first place in the hope she could iron the situation.

2.She didnot forget the way they were married because we have seen flashbacks of the marriage night being relieved by Khushi..

3. I agree Arnav made her unconfortable with his teasing on SR it flustered the poor girl she could not think straight...but her dialogues whether pheras come before SR... and that she doesnot know in wedding rituals pheras are required was poorly written.. Now when Khushi tries to teach ASR the significance of marriage rituals it looks a shallow track to me.

4.Arnav addressed once that she was his legally wedded wife.. I was hoping that it meant they had registered their wedding because a marriage is not legalized until it is done so..but I guess it was a passing dialogue...

5. I would have like the plot much better if-
a) Khushi would have told arnav by herself that she doesnot feel right to continue as husband and wife because according to her they didnot have a proper marriage...rather than her menthos moment @ nani...
b) Arnav would have realized that in fact he has stolen her dreams of a memorable wedding on her words and have obliged with the same...

6. I would have preferred a clash of ideologies of the protagonists to sort out the issue among themselves and then the family taking them to task about keeping them in the dark on it. If the family had caught them trying to have a proper phera rather than the terrace one would have gone down better with me.😊
Edited by sunshine99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Kopal:

looks like IPKKND is really making us think deep..what we been living with..what is imp to us..

i am single...but deep down..its only experience speaks..
Experience is the greatest authority...

like u said..wearing ring brings smile on u looking at it and its reminding u of his beautiful bond..

marriage rituals r same..i have seen lots of cousins marriage..
after few days or years of marriage.or any life precious moments...when we revisit those moments they bring freshness and happiness..even for few moments..
its that positive thoughts, positive energy spent during those times..remembering them..creates positive thoughts and energy again..giving us hop, strength to move

this is my personal experience...

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