OS : Passionate limbs [ 16+ ]

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trina2010

@trina2010

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Beautifully written. It was an out n out love making scene but awesome. You said you are just 17 buddy?
I must say that you have a way with words. Keep it up. Thanks

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Woah!

That's one sexy piece of writing!

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TheMogambo

@TheMogambo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

All I could say is "Wow." I wish you soon turn 18...

Your words give that beautiful feeling while reading.. ...Good work honey...

Pls PM me your future works...

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t_drive

@t_drive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Just hot, I need a swim to cool myself😛

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

"But today their passionate limbs aligned, searched, craved. Those eyes that would sometimes haunt into the others now looked on tenderly with a new found lust, a newfound platform. Those fingers, which would gape into the air, finally had something to hold onto, finally had that void filled and their feet you ask? Their toes curled up at small ministrations to the lips, eyes and nose, gliding up certain parts of the others body, hooking into them."

WOW. The whole feel of this OS, the words used, the imagery used (NOT the guttery way, Beys. :p), the whole desperation to be with each other for so long has been so beautifully portrayed!

And the teasing...*Blushes* Awww! and HOT! mixed!! ;) :D

And then this para...such beauty! *Sigh*

"And finally those muffled footsteps were aligned, as the joined together under the covered sheets, finally the hands never left, filling that small gap holding onto each other, finally eyes could close in piece knowing that the other would be there when they would open, knowing that the chase was still on but the prize would always be theirs to take."

Great job, Aashifa! :)