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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sunshine99

<font color="#330000" size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Not Lost in Translation...</font>

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Twelve months ago...a smart rich powerful young man met a girl</font><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">pretty,simple,naive, with a carefree countenance... who made him see the man he had become... the man maybe did not wish to be... the picture was not pretty .. it reeked of selfishness,arrogance,pride,hatred...He was angry at her for doing it... punished her for telling it...made her cry for thinking it...but at every turn admired her for being at it...loved her for doing it... cared about her for showing it... The emperor of AR designs had been humbled by a commoner... The earthen girl had filled his classy heart with a feeling so sweet,so tender..he just had to wonder if this is what was called <font color="#660066">LOVE</font>...which did notdistinguishbetween the prince and the pauper,the beast and the nobleman... it just saw a pure heart and the pulseheightened with a <font color="#660066">dhak dhak</font>... it saw the truth in a pair of doe eyes in silence...it recognized the wish of a wife to be by her husband's side... it felt the hesitation of the beloved if love would be enough to tide over the difficult times...it saw a beautiful human being who wished to forgo her happiness for the person she loves...<font color="#990000"> It understood that a heart so precious like the rarest of pearls needs assurance.</font>.. Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada has set out to do this in 12 days... what he wished but failed to show in 12 months that went by...</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#336633">His intentions of forcefully bringing a smile,spontaneity,livelinessthat his actions took awayfrom Khushi is being returned gift wrapped with love in his unique way...the much in love wife has started to understand this... she does not really hate him nor bear a grudge she said so today</font><font color="#cc0066">"aap ko kya lag raha hai"?</font><font color="#336633">... Arnav too conveyed he can see what she really wishes even though she pretends otherwise...</font><font color="#cc0066">" aacha hua hum gire" they have fallen deeply in love with each other.</font><font color="#336633">..words are no longer taken at face value butfeigned the part... The communication between the husband and wife is not lost in translation...just being ignored by the hurt wife... which the husband is trying to make her hear again...</font></font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#336633">The little love filled gestures of Arnav...caring for her smile in the midst of his physical discomfort...trying to lighten the atmosphere at her nervousness of close physical proximity with him..does not go unnoticed by Khushi... her tough facade is showing minute cracks...She has started thinking of herself as Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada...who wants to put the ASR the husband in his place...</font></font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#336633">Arnav gained a littlesuccesstoday... he did not give Khushi a chance to feel sad about the impending end to themarriagecontract... she was kept busy on her toes with trivialities like packing gifts for AR employees...ASR created a scenario where the old Khushi who has gone into her own shell was forced to peek out...The loquacious girl who chose tooverridethe dimag with her heart and did not need a reason to smile...</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#330033">Arnav is on a mission to heal the lives of the 2 women who govern his heart ... his sister and his wife...Both were hurt by his actions intentional and the unintentional... His sister had voiced her fear of losing his love sometime back and he has not forgotten... he comes back home to share the kheer... to uphold the sweetness of the brother sister bond on which Anjali is heavily</font></font><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#330033">relying</font><font color="#330033">... he brings a smile back on her face, a little hope in her hour of sorrow...</font></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Arnav's try at bringing the smile back for Anjali and Khushi is rewarded with a smile on his face by his own bundle of happiness, Khushi... when she calls him up andinquiresof his well being... He could hear the hint in her hesitation of missing him... though she tried hard tocamouflage...a tiny spark of care from her made his day...</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#cc0066">"teri meri baton ka har lamha sab se aanjana..."</font></font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">The wife doesnot allow him to sleep as he forbade her... the unique love equation of the love birds continue...</font>
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<font color="#ff0000"><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">T</font><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">he language of love and understanding is different for every couple... for Arnav and Khushi it is teasing the other into accepting their point of view, bickering to show where the other is faltering and rushing to their love's aid when the need arises... It is never lost in translation for them... just our eyes need to be attuned to it...</font></font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#660000">P.S. I missed the sprained ankle of Khushi today...😳Would love if these little things are not forgotten in the bigger picture.</font></font>




Koel wonderful post
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Shastradhari

koel..i thought..he is flirting simply with khushi..thats what i understand. I thought he is taking her as granted..I did not see seriousness in his actions. I even don't know which direction he is moving and what he is trying to do by what????😕
today somehow i decided to read director's cut..as l liked one in last week. i do not read it regularly ..but something caught my mind and end up reading today.
she beautifully explained what arnav is trying to do...

I am still finding hard to gulp some of the facts..CVs r portraying khushi very dumbo..why she is not smartly asking landlord..he said 24000 first. tomorrow asking more...she should fight..she should be shown to have some knowledge about rental things...
i feel like hitting head on the wall...
someone is coming to ur door and suddenly asking double money???

yes he is flirting with her... feigning the fact that he is taking her for granted...what they are trying to convey and what comes on screen is not straight in the face...I agree on it... the vision and the direction have some weak links...see the problem is that they drag tracks...so it feels u don't know which direction they are going as they are still doing the same thing bickering over a new challenge... some close romantic moments... into another challenge and the cycle continues...

Khushi' character goes overboard with comedy ... because she is good at it... she gets those scenes... the tone down to a poignancy of hiding a hurt does not show thro' again the direction weak link...
another thing is the characters are tweaked to fit the plot not otherwise... because in IPK unlike other serials the protagonists had a good character sketch in the past hence... when they are tweaked for the plot u feel the difference...if the plot was tweaked to fit the character then it is accepted... take the case of Anjali... earlier there was a disconnect because a change was shown from the good hearted soul...a loving sister...now she is back to being that and pining for Shyam hence getting sympathy... in future if she is manipulated by Shaym to go against Khushi or Arnav...there is a fair chance people will blame Shyam and not her...

Having said this I don't blame the PH they have a lot of pressures
1) trp for which they have to detour in the weekly progression of the story.. add in elements which might seem not in sync
2) channel arm twisting... they try to put in their views of what the track or character should do for mass appeal hence a compromise in plots, characters comes forth... which we as viewers at times hate.. but some viewers love it...

The balancing act is tough to achieve.. some days it comes out perfect some days it leaves u wanting... yehi hai daily soap ki kahani...😳

Edited by sunshine99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sarra0



Koel wonderful post

thank u sarra0😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: -sylph-

As a stand alone epi ,First few scenes I really enjoyed, but frm story point of view im nt satisfied and m pretty sure this wud be dragged again.

The fall was good, liked Garima and Bua atleast asking Arnav if he is okay or needs a massage and Bua saying she shall massage and Garima understanding the situation and asking her daughter to do the honors who cares a damn if her pati's back is broke or not. Anyways liked Arnav, Bua and Garima in the scene.

Arnav hesitating at Bua saying shall do massage and saying no that's okay and when Garima talks about kushi him agreeing.

The next few moments was pure bliss, loved both Kushi and Arnav.😍

  • Yayyyay heard "What the" after such a long time..🥳
  • And Kushi saying what the nahin sarson ka thel, nice..😆
  • Problem shirt mein nahin back mein hain.nice😆
  • Tumhara smile kahan hai. nice😆
  • And also kushis taunt, nice😃😆

Awww the scene in bed totally awww worthy, my nose, cheeks everything were laal until dad caught me laal handed and said close ur mouth..

Anyhoo moving on, made me so impatient to watch more such scenes between arhi, they were so cute ..😍

The little talk on bed, took me to arhi heaven 😍 . CVs can we have more 😳.

Arnav loves touching her nose, doesnt he?? 😆

Liked few of the tom and jerry acts..

Whistle worthy moment:

  • When Arnav puts tape on Kushis mouth.
  • Arnav not taking any advantage on Kushi, the guy sure respects his relation and Kushi so much that he doesn't even proceed further though the moment kushi totally looked mesmerized by him.
Super cute moment other than bed romance :

Kushi calling up Arnav first time.
Him asking if she missed him and she freezes a moment. 😍

*phew* finally moments:

  • Kushi felt something in the bed scene, dint she??? She did.🥳
  • Anjali talking about her baby. Chalo ab tho yaad aaya nanha sa bacha . 👏

Satisfying moment :

Arnav went back home and even gave time to Anjali, she needs her brother now and his presence makes her happy , liked the fact Arnav is balancing both his relations. While woo ing his wife he hasn't forgot his di who needs his support now.

*rant alert*

My mum and aunts have officially given up on kushi's characterization. I had anyways given up long back. The story needs a grip still as well as Kushis characterization.

They have started feeling sorry for Arnav to being stuck between two brats where bth do not show love to him. Anyways me and mum are loving Arnav scenes and also few cute arhi scenes now.

Chit Chat with CVs regarding kushi's characterization:

CVs, my mum who is 50+ neither a fan of barun nor sanaya , a TRP aunty a normal viewer who even watches diya bathi, sathiya, ek hazaron me asked me a question which sounded quiet logical to me.

So CVs tell me do u even pay attention to Kushis characterization?

The day when she starves Arnav of food and he falls sick , she wakes up night to take care of him and all night you have shown her drowsy and falling nt with holding her sleep but she does try and holds her sleep and stays awake for him.

My mum asked me a simple question today,why dint Kushi feel drowsy today while calling up Arnav all night? She was chirpy, bubbly all awake no ounce of drowsiness?

  • How much will it take Kushi to ask 'aap teek haina?" once they all made Arnav get up after the fall, why the cold face if she loves him? Atleast a subtle care or worried expression if he is alright.

*even heard of love/care atleast a silent care/ worried expression, Ved raj & Gotti?*

  • A girl who left RM for Anjali-Arnav relation to be bonded , calls to landline?? Really??
  • Wakes a random manager to trouble her shaitan at random hours and sends him to RM?? Really? What if Anjali picked the call or opened the door?

*even heard what selfless ness and sacrifice means , Ved raj & Gotti?? *

  • A girl who is selfless, who has sacrificed her love for arnav-anjali who is so deeply hurt starts giggling, gulps jalebis , is in full on happy masti mode that her shaitan went back.

*even heard of subtle feelings, emotions, Ved raj & Gotti?? *

  • Hmm the last I read was she is very sad, hurt, upset, lost, broken, loves him a lot, why is it that many normal viewers cannot see that?

*even heard of consistency in characterization, Ved raj & Gotti?? *

plea to Gotti(GH):

I dnt wanto loose interest on this show for 76723863726238642th time.plz gotti mujhe baksh do..dnt drag this track, i knw ur itch to drag all tracks. puhleej

Few thought's:

Kushi's night dress are really good than Anarkali's, sanaya looked cute.

The hair style and dress bth were looking so good on her, can you make that her morning wear as well. The anarkalis and tent on her head doesnt look good, the velvet looks really out dated.

Sanaya u were really good in romantic scene, was really happy the heavy breathing was controlled. And comedy is ur forte . 👏

Baruuun u look awesome in unkempt look as well.. Ur comic timing is amazing.😆

Aww emotional, arrogance, small small nuances, dry humor, passion, be it anything, u ace it 👏 👏

loved the look u had when u sat on bed after Arnav's back was hurt 😆.

And romance ,hmm romance and emotional scenes are ur forte ,that was pure bliss 😍


Loved your analysis, specially the rant part. She should have said "aap theek hain"😉😉😉
Would have made mine AND Arnie's day.😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Not Lost in Translation...

Twelve months ago...a smart rich powerful young man met a girl pretty, simple,naive, with a carefree countenance... who made him see the man he had become... the man maybe did not wish to be... the picture was not pretty .. it reeked of selfishness,arrogance,pride,hatred...He was angry at her for doing it... punished her for telling it...made her cry for thinking it...but at every turn admired her for being at it...loved her for doing it... cared about her for showing it... The emperor of AR designs had been humbled by a commoner... The earthen girl had filled his classy heart with a feeling so sweet,so tender..he just had to wonder if this is what was called LOVE...which did not distinguish between the prince and the pauper,the beast and the nobleman... it just saw a pure heart and the pulse heightened with a dhak dhak... it saw the truth in a pair of doe eyes in silence...it recognized the wish of a wife to be by her husband's side... it felt the hesitation of the beloved if love would be enough to tide over the difficult times...it saw a beautiful human being who wished to forgo her happiness for the person she loves... It understood that a heart so precious like the rarest of pearls needs assurance... Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada has set out to do this in 12 days... what he wished but failed to show in 12 months that went by...

His intentions of forcefully bringing a smile, spontaneity, liveliness that his actions took away from Khushi is being returned gift wrapped with love in his unique way...the much in love wife has started to understand this... she does not really hate him nor bear a grudge she said so today"aap ko kya lag raha hai"? ... Arnav too conveyed he can see what she really wishes even though she pretends otherwise..." aacha hua hum gire" they have fallen deeply in love with each other...words are no longer taken at face value but feigned the part ... The communication between the husband and wife is not lost in translation...just being ignored by the hurt wife... which the husband is trying to make her hear again...
The little love filled gestures of Arnav...caring for her smile in the midst of his physical discomfort...trying to lighten the atmosphere at her nervousness of close physical proximity with him..does not go unnoticed by Khushi... her tough facade is showing minute cracks...She has started thinking of herself as Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada...who wants to put ASR the husband in his place...
Arnav gained a little success today... he did not give Khushi a chance to feel sad about the impending end to the marriage contract... she was kept busy on her toes with trivialities like packing gifts for AR employees...ASR created a scenario where the old Khushi who has gone into her own shell was forced to peek out...The loquacious girl who chose to override the dimag with her heart and did not need a reason to smile...

Arnav is on a mission to heal the lives of the 2 women who govern his heart ... his sister and his wife...Both were hurt by his actions intentional and the unintentional... His sister had voiced her fear of losing his love sometime back and he has not forgotten... he comes back home to share the kheer... to uphold the sweetness of the brother sister bond on which Anjali is heavily relying... he brings a smile back on her face, a little hope in her hour of sorrow...

Arnav's try at bringing the smile back for Anjali and Khushi is rewarded with a smile on his face by his own bundle of happiness, Khushi... when she calls him up and inquires of his well being... He could hear the hint in her hesitation of missing him... though she tried hard to camouflage...a tiny spark of care from her made his day...
"teri meri baton ka har lamha sab se aanjana..."
The wife doesnot allow him to sleep as he forbade her... the unique love equation of the love birds continue...

The language of love and understanding is different for every couple... for Arnav and Khushi it is teasing the other into accepting their point of view, bickering to show where the other is faltering and rushing to their love's aid when the need arises... It is never lost in translation for them... just our eyes need to be attuned to it...

P.S. I missed the sprained ankle of Khushi today... 😳 Would love if these little things are not forgotten in the bigger picture.
[/QUOTLoved your analysis. I was a bit disappointed today but your post put it all in perspective. It was an ahaa moment for me coz i was wondering why he wanted her to stay awake. Or maybe he did not. He assumed she would fall asleep anyways?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi sweethearts! finished updating on pg1.. Check when u find time.. Hope u like it..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanayam

Thank u:-😳he just told her to stay awake to focus her mind and energy onhim and his affairs... he is hoping to break her resolve of leaving him if she keeps on being engrossed about him sooner or later she will cave into her strong love for him.😊 He thought she would be annoyed and go off to sleep awaiting his call... miscalculated his better half's thinking on her feet capability.😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Tanthya - Loved the quote & the title 😊

@ Arhimaniac - Lamenting the fact that Lallan got the proportion of kerosene wrong😆 Enjoy reading your post each day 😊

@ Anna - Brilliant post👏 Being a complete ASR Deewani, I always enjoy your analysis.😊

Kudos 👏 to all the amazing writers of the Redux - sunshine99, mommamia, sarunrocks, Jhalak29, Nia-D, chani123, sylph, b.sarika2, nemedx, areeba.blossom, chowna, supna9, sumana13...for your insights & analysis that takes IPK to another level !
A special shout out to Doods & Tanthya for providing this brilliant platform, that is such a treat for silent readers like me 😊
Edited by TheAlk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
thanks koel for the clarification from your side.
i will not be surprised to see TRP around 3 or below this week also..

As a simple viewer i am not able to connect..

nothing can be done until i give piece of mind to myself😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shastradhari

thanks koel for the clarification from your side.

i will not be surprised to see TRP around 3 or below this week also..

As a simple viewer i am not able to connect..

nothing can be done until i give piece of mind to myself😆


shash u searching ur piece of mind n i takeing out my gussa hehehe writing faltoo poem on 2day epi my revenge 4rm ASR

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